编导故事续写范文 篇1

那时我刚大学毕业，总想跳槽到外企去工作，以为只有外企才能实现自己的人生价值。经过几次面试后，我终于找到了自己做为新人的差距，而那次独特的面试就如同深深的烙印，刻在我心里。

一家公司的人力资源部里，负责招聘的是一个美国老头史密斯先生。他悠然地给所有的面试者出了这么一道考题：

“上个世纪的时候，美国的加州发现了金矿，于是许多做着淘金梦的热血青年为了得到黄金，纷纷蜂拥而去，可一条大江挡住了必经之路，遇到这种情况，你们会怎么办？”

史密斯先生的话刚刚落音，场面就热闹起来，有人小声地说游过去，有人说绕道走……面对五花八门的答案，史密斯先生却笑而不语，把面试者弄得一头雾水，百思不得其解。

良久，他才严肃而认真地说：“为什么非要去淘金，为什么不可以买一条船搞营运，接送那些淘金的人，这照样可以淘到另一种金呀！照样可以发家致富啊！”

全场愕然。

他接着说：“你们想，那些淘金的人为了能淘金发财，即使通往金矿的票价再高一些，他们也心甘情愿买票上船。因为前面就是诱人的金矿啊！”他停顿了一会儿，面露遗憾地说：“这说明面对机遇，你们还不善于发现和利用，而用一般思维把它当成了困难……”

这时整个现场沸腾起来，有的人捶胸击脯，抱头痛哭，不断地抱怨自己为什么就没有想到；有的人怨天尤人，自愧不如……

最后的应聘结果可想而知了，我落选了，但却深深地震动了。史密斯先生那次难忘的考题和睿智的答案给我上了生动的一课。从此我得出一个至理名言，那就是“求职需要跳槽思维”。比如说困难和麻烦虽然是一次艰苦的挑战，但是在智者眼里，却往往意味着一个潜在的机遇，只是习惯直面的我们未曾想过。

编导故事续写范文 篇2

习作内容:

自己选择几种动物,以它们为主人公,想象一下,它们之间可能会发生一些什么事,编成一个故事写下来.

教学目标：

1.能编出较完整、较具体的童话故事。

2.发展想象和创新能力。

2.激发学生主体参与的积极性与写作兴趣，培养学生协作意识，进一步提高学生写作能力。

教学重难点：

引导学生展开大胆、丰富、新奇的想象，并指导学生有序地、主次分明地说和写。

教学板书:

编写动物童话

主人公

句子通顺故事完整

内容具体想象丰富

教学过程：

一、激趣导入,明确要求

1、同学们，你们都读过哪些童话故事？

2、结合“我的发现”明白习作要求

（1）过渡：这么多美妙的童话为我们的生活增添了许多的色彩。今天，我们就来当一当大作家安徒生，编写童话故事，比比看，谁编得最好。（板书：编写童话故事）

（2）童话故事的编写是有一定规律的，小林和小东就发现了一些，我们来看看吧。（男女生分读书上的“我的发现”）

（3）说说小林和小东经过本组童话故事的学习后发现了什么？

（4）回顾读过的童话书，看看你们发现了什么？

3、全班交流：童话有什么特点？写童话应该注意些什么？

（板书：1，虚拟的主人公（拟人）；2丰富多彩的想象（幻想、夸张；3给人有益的启示）

二、开拓思路。

1、过渡：幻想、夸张、拟人凑成了可爱的童话故事。下面，老师带你们去童话王国旅行：仔细听，动物王国传来什么声音？谁在说话？谁在奔跑？谁在唱歌？（播放马、狗、狮子等动物的声音）

2、引导想象

A、这些动物有什么特点？他们喜欢干什么？

B、你想选哪几个动物做主人公？

C、这些小动物在一起学习、生活、游戏，同学们，猜猜他们经常在一起干什么？

（引导学生说出不同地点、做不同事情。）

三，创设情境，小组协作，激发写作兴趣。

1、想故事。

同学们猜得真好，为了把故事编完整，我们要想好这个故事发生在什么时候、在哪个地方、有几个小动物、他们在干什么事情，下面我们就沿着这条思路闭着眼睛想想，看谁编的故事别人最喜欢听。

2、说故事。（要求：大胆、大方、大声；抓住故事的主要内容，用自己的话讲述。听众要认真听，评价要说出理由。）

A想好后，自己试着小声说。

B请大家在小组内轮流讲自己的故事

3、评故事。（联系童话特点，分析童话语言及写法）

A、刚才同学们讲了自己编的童话故事，也听了同学们的童话故事。你觉得谁的故事编得很清楚？

B、刚才同学们推荐了那么多同学，你们最想听谁的故事?指名3—4学生上台讲故事（师生共同评价中引出编童话要求。）

四、书面编写。

1、同学们，明白了编童话的要求，希望你们以后能以想象为船，夸张为桨，拟人为帆，让你们的“童话号”驶向幸福的彼岸。请把你编的故事写下来，写的时候要注意：句子通顺、故事完整、内容具体、想象丰富。

2、我们的《童话故事集》即将组稿，届时我们将选取优秀的童话故事编著成书，希望同学们八仙过海、各显神通写童话。同时，书的封面、童话插图可自行设计。

编导故事续写范文 篇3

我们所坚信的东西让我们成为人，而不是动物，信仰本身是一个没有答案的宏大命题，但是有很多人愿意相信自己找到了答案。李安用优秀的视听语言撑起了成长与信仰这两大主题成长的苦难和在摇摆中愈发坚定的信仰让这部片子励志味十足，奇幻的噱头和纯美的画面也让人更容易为这部电影所动容，但平心而论李安在《少年派的奇幻漂流》之中的讨论近似于流于表面的隔靴搔痒，他并未提出足够厚重和富有层次与深度的问题，最后抛出的选项也略显寒酸，因为他已经先入为主给了观众他自己的引导性答案最后抛出的选择其实已经是前戏十足的定项选择。

人在面对信仰、面对自我、面对自然挑战时的种种情况都发生在了派的身上，虽然在长途漂流中几乎都是派的独角戏，但是这三种冲突让这个故事拥有强大的内在张力，稳而有序，步步为营，优质的镜像般画面更是内化了整部片子的气质和精神，剧本对原著小说的改编没有折损太多原著的精气神，李安对于电影两大主题的把握也熟练到位，对于成长主题的细腻拿捏也一直是李安高水准的强项，总而言之，《少年派的奇幻漂流》算得上是李安近些年来最为成功的一部商业片，但是相对于他之前的系列作品而言，少年派的奇幻漂流》并无非常大的突破，讨论停留于表面，主题表现生硬急切，深度与广度略逊色，这一剂药只作用在表层，并无深入肌理之猛力。但不论这些，从院线商业片的综合素质上来说，少年派拥有众多可以赢得掌声的元素:成长与磨砺的主题、励志向上的精气神、精彩的剧本、奇幻元素、完美无瑕的特效以及对信仰的讨论等等，它足以赢得观众们的尊重。

电影的主人公派并没有因为命运的捉弄与残酷的磨砺而放弃信仰，反而坚定了他的信仰，这个没有答案的宏大问题似乎在派身上没有起效，接踵的灾难与家庭的厄运证明了救世神明的不可靠性，但是在主人公的身上，这种强力打击却只能让他愈挫愈勇，其实这种坚定根植于派幼年时的经历，耶稣基督的受难牺牲与上升的价值体系根植于他幼小的内心之中，猛虎于心，恶的一面也是可以驯化的，因为他选择了从善，现实苦难中的所犯的原罪让他内心长期斗争纠葛，这种纠葛与斗争也便是他活下去的动力，恶是一种适应极端恶劣条件下的生存法则，但它在派心里已然被强大的善之信仰所驯服，而意象化表达便是与虎为伴中的相互适应和驯化了。宗教信仰是种让人又爱又恨的东西，它可以帮助你认清自己，寻找内心世界的宁静，善待世界，但从不那么干净的历史上来说，它又是一种奴化人内心的工具，它让你忍耐，让你驯服温顺，忍受各种压迫且安于现状，但是可笑的是历史的巨轮往往又是一群不安分的反抗者所推动的。总之《少年派的奇幻漂流》融合了各种多元的文化，汇总出来的却是一股普世之驯服温顺之意，这既可以说是大多数向善者的必然选择，也可以说是一种变相的屈从，毕竟信仰这种东西没有固定的答案，因为怀疑论者永远存在。结尾蜻蜓点水似的抛出一个选择题让观众面对，看上去画龙点睛，其实却反映出了这部电影深层次上的简陋和生硬，这呈现在观众面前的案板之肉初看惊喜，但之后细细品起，发觉其熟的太透太急，硬且失嚼头，结尾对故事意象解读的平白台词显的略显多余，另外前半段背景部分的铺垫略显冗长，还有那个充满狐獴的食人岛让人略为匪夷所思。总而言之，“宗教信仰胜利了，善之纯真也胜利了”，一切都是上帝的恩赐。《少年派的奇幻漂流》绝对是一部够格的优秀商业片，排除这算是精彩的故事，就是那美轮美奂的特效已然值得一看，在目前鱼目混珠的电影市场当中，这部电影的优质真算是鹤立鸡群了，特别是在这片没有什么信仰的土地上，它带来了一点值得期待的东西。这源于内心的猛虎虽是生存法则上的胜者，但它需要善象的指引与驯服，不然它便会吞噬一切美与善。和自己内心的另外一面斗争需要时间和毅力，而学会放下和成长更需要毅力和时间，每一次的放下便是一次成长蜕变的过程，从放下亲人到放下心中的猛虎，派经历了接连两次成长与蜕变，而这缺失的道别，权可当作成长中的一把辛酸吧。

《少年派》特效画面美丽的惊人，3D效果也很优秀，李安极好的用视觉效果深化了这个故事的灵魂，相比于目前很多商业电影以故事服从视觉的潮流，李安对高科技的把握和运用是非常恰当的，它帮助电影更好的叙事，却没有盖住故事本身的光辉，善用器者得天下，善用器的导演得票房和掌声。故事中澄净的海和天空其实映照出的便是主人公派的内心世界，相由心生，你的内心有多澄澈，你看到的海水便有多透明，这一切源于你的内心。最后引用一句里尔克的诗作为结尾:我们都像是花岗岩的纹理，在上帝坚硬的慈悲中。

欢迎各位同学踊跃留言或者私信。

编导故事续写范文 篇4

1. Today is the opening ceremony of the Olympic Games, very early in the TV next to Shou. About 8:30 am, the opening ceremony began. First of all, is very special countdown. Then the grand cultural performance. Fireworks very beautiful, my favorite is that huge scrolls, very beautiful, very bright. The most surprising is that people give a model of the Earth, also taking in the above, it is magical. The opening ceremony of the theme song very good listen, artist I like. That the little girl singing, cute, I was deeply impressed. In short, this is an unfettable. I believe the Beijing Olympics will be the best one. 2. My favorite item is diving. I like the blue cubic meters of water. Swimming is also our Chinese athletes the best one, I believe they will achieve good results cubic meters of water. I also hope very much that I could go look at the scene. But starting tomorrow Lak diving. Unfortunately, good. But I will also concerned about petition in front of the television. Refueling, the Chinese diving team! 3. Today is the 110 meter hurdles, good excitement, because Liu Xiang. We are very concerned about Liu Xiang, because he hopes the victory also concerned about his injury. Before the game, Liu Xiang, a solemn expression, such as because of injury. It was the first false start, but Liu Xiang in the back when the choice of launch. Is the cause of pain, all sorry for him, but also very sad. After Liu Xiang also very sad and apologized. ^Liu Xiang, there is nothing wrong with you, do not have to apologize, I believe you can return to the stadium, we will always support you!^ 4. Chinese gymnastics team this good performance. Dad said that because of their hard training. Just as the same study, only fully prepared to achieve good results, I believe I will achieve good results in three days. I will! Anything can be successful only efforts. The world is difficult, I am afraid off. 5. Le quick to learn. The second semester is very critical, I will make efforts. The next semester, I will not Tanwan, will be a good school, in order to achieve a good result, as well as to their future. Refueling, the third day in a beautiful! 6. Today is Grandpa\'s birthday, a lot of people went to. Grandpa really old, and I really hope that his health. At the time with her sister and sister out to play. We went to KTV, singing the original people really happy. After that, we went to Deke Shi, De Keshi, we watched the women\'s volleyball match, but still lose Lak, good pity.。

编导故事续写范文 篇5

初中写作指导_扩写与续写作文怎么写

一、剖析原文，把握要点。

要指导学生在写前先认真阅读，剖析原文，领会原文的思想内容和形式特点，在充分把握全文的中心思想和篇章结构的基础上，确定每个层次的要点。

二、广开思路，合理想象。

指导学生扩写、续写时要围绕原文的要点，进行由此及彼，由小到大，由少到多地想象和联想，这是最主要的一环。

三、编写写作提纲，理清顺序。

为了使学生易于展开想象，在指导时，可根据原文的要求，协助学生编拟出要点提纲，供学生借鉴，便于学生展开想象。

四、谋局布篇，完整地写下来。

在此基础上，学生假设处在这种环境中，为篇章合理安排好结构，准确地把握文章的重点和中心，运用学过的写作方法，写出符合要求的作文。

编导故事续写范文 篇6

My diary

I had a good time this weekend.

On Saturday morning,I did exercise with my the aftrenoon,I did my had a boring day.

On Sunday morning,I went to the library .I read an interesting the afternonn,Iwent to the flew the kites with my

flew very felt very happy.

What a wonderful weekend!

My weekend

This weekend, I went for a trip with my are many great places for us to have fun .Finally,I decided to Wu is a beautiful is some water around the can take bus to go \'not far from visited many old are many interesting things in these old also went boating.

If I have a chance ,I will go to Wuzhen again.

懒的写了

编导故事续写范文 篇7

森林的一角，有一扇神奇的大门。每天只要是第一个到达大门的小动物，不管它许下什么愿望，大门都会帮它实现。

森林的另一角，住着一匹小马，小马有许多愿望：它想要吃不完的美味糖果；它想要喝不完的酸甜果汁；它还想要每次考试都是一百分……在所有的愿望之中，让它最牵挂的是远方的朋友小鹿。小鹿是小马最好的朋友，可是不久前匆忙搬家了。小马不知道它的新家在哪里，所以没法去看望它。这便成了小马心里最迫切的愿望。

“我一定要第一个到达大门！”小马暗下决心。于是，它第二天一早起床，什么都来不及做，就急不可耐地往神奇大门的方向奔去。可是小马还是晚了一步。当它到达时，大门那已经聚集了许多小动物，它们似乎起的比它还要早。小马只好蔫蔫地往回走，准备第二天继续努力。可是，第二天、第三天？第十天，不管小马起得多早，都会发现大门那已经有其它小动物的身影了。

对小鹿的思念，让小马迫切希望许下愿望。所以在第

十天，它没有像往常一样回家，而是一直站在大门前。直到太阳落山；直到身边没有了任何小动物；直到第二天，天蒙蒙亮时。它的腿酸了，脚麻了，身上的毛也乱糟糟的，它真想躺下好好地睡一觉啊。但它没有，它强打起精神抖了抖身子，甩了甩腿脚，脸上露出了会心的微笑。它知道今天它将实现自己的愿望了。

终于，小马向神奇的大门许下了愿望。“叮”的一声之后，

小马听到了小鹿惊喜的声音“小马，你怎么会在这里？”“我来看你啊。”小马露出了灿烂的笑容？

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一天，一只饥饿的小巢鼠正四处寻找着食物，他找呀找呀，终于在田间找到了一小片农民伯伯未收割完的麦穗，他兴奋极了，一跃而上跳到两根麦穗中央。

金黄金黄的麦穗看着真是秀色可餐，这些麦穗不仅可以填饱饥饿的肚子，剩下的还可以搬回家囤起来过冬吃。

他小心翼翼地掰下一颗麦子，正想要喂进嘴里大快朵颐地吃起来，忽然，一个微弱的声音自下而上传来：“我好饿，能给我吃点吗？”小巢鼠闻声，低下头一看，原来是只鸡宝宝啊，正眼巴巴地望着自己手里的食物呢。

可是，我也很饿啊，麦子只有这么一点点，如果给了鸡宝宝，那我就没有过冬的食物了。但若不给，那鸡宝宝可能会被饿死。小巢鼠心里嘀咕着，到底给还是不给呢？他犯难了。

“孩子，你要做一个善良的人。”妈妈的话忽在耳畔响起，小巢鼠心里一咯噔，像被什么东西撞击了一下似的。小巢鼠脸红红的，对于自己刚刚自私的想法，他感到羞愧难当，从小妈妈就教育他要善良、仁爱，可是为了一点点食物，那一瞬间他竟将妈妈的话抛诸脑后。

小巢鼠从枝头跳了下来，把手中的麦子递给鸡宝宝：“鸡弟弟，给你吃。”鸡宝宝接过麦子狼吞虎咽地吃了起来。“别着急，鸡弟弟，你慢点吃，小心噎着，不够还有呢。”“谢谢你，巢鼠哥哥，你真好！”鸡宝宝眨着一双水汪汪的大眼睛感激地看着小巢鼠。小巢鼠的脸烫烫的，他羞涩地挠了挠头，看着鸡宝宝吃得津津有味的样子，他的心里不由地泛起了一层小浪花，竟比自己吃还要高兴呢。为什么会这样呢？难道这就是妈妈说的“赠人玫瑰，手有余香”吗？

虽然小巢鼠肚子还空空的，过冬的食物也所剩无几了，可心里却有一种前所未有的满足感。原来，一个小小的举动竟能让人感到如此幸福啊……

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从前有一只蜗牛叫小小。小小的个头背着重重的壳，慢吞吞地一步一步爬着走。边爬边想：“唉，好几天了，都嫌弃我慢，真没用，这样下去，再找不到工作，肯定会饿死的。”走了不知道多久，小小真的太累了，而且几天没吃东西，一股脑子饿晕了过去。于是它做了一个很长很长的梦。

梦里，一只老鹰趁小小不注意府冲下去，小小一溜烟就跑了。小小回过神来发现，它逃跑的速度跟往常不一样，变快了不是一点点，简直可以跟豹子媲美。小小想：我的速度变快了，我肯定能找到工作了。于是它便来到森林动物肯德基应聘外卖小哥。对着兔子店长说：“兔子店长，我想来你们这当个外卖小哥，您看可以吗？”兔子店长仔细一看，居然是一只蜗牛，便嘲笑道说：你速度这么慢，外卖准得晚点，这不是给我添麻烦吗？不行不行，你不适合这份工作，快走吧。”小小苦苦哀求，说道：兔子店长，我跑的很快的，不信你让我试送一次，我不收钱。”店长想了想说：好吧，有一单比较远，其它人都不想去，让你送一单试试，如果你迟到的话你就离开吧。”小小听了立马精神起来。

没过多久小小就回来了，对着店长说我送好了！店长被它惊人的速度给惊呆了。立马给顾客打电话询问。顾客反馈非常满意，送得快还热乎。兔子店长问小小：“你是怎么做到的？”小小说：“我跑得很快，我的壳还可以当保温箱。”兔子店长说：“你真是送外卖的能手。”便爽快地把它收下了。因为它的速度很快，又努力，顾客们都点名让它送外卖。它很快就成了森林里最赚钱的外卖小哥。很快它便创建了一个外卖集团公司，公司开张那天，鞭炮齐响，震耳欲聋。

小小被震醒了，它四周看了看，摸着嘎扁的肚子，唉！生活还是原来的样，它还是那只慢吞吞的蜗牛。

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In the morning,I got up earlier and had breakfast went to the nearest bathhouse with my father. On the way back home,we bought plenty of fireworks and firecrackers. What I liked most was a set of fireworks called Xingguangcuican in was told that It was beautiful enough to pete with any other kinds of fireworks. At three o\'clock in the afternoon, we had a big meal. All the family members got togerther around the my parents and me, there were my grandparents,my cousins and their were elven people altogether. During the dinner, we talked and laughed eight in the evening, we began to watch annual gala on CCTV. Needless to say ,everyone gave their ments on TV program.. The most exciting time came when it was half hour ahead of the middle night----the beginning of the new year. we all went out and lit the fireworks and fire crackers,which were exploding and lighting in the sky. It would bring us good luck and fortune in the new an unfettable day! It will stay with me all of my life The Spring Festival is the most important traditional one in China. As an important part of it, fireworks bring us happier atmosphere than usual. This Spring Festival, Dad bought lots of fireworks as last year. On the eve, he lighted them, and then they blossomed like flowers in the sky, with sweet sounds and brilliant light. How beautiful! I was deeply moved, though every Spring Festival I felt it. It brought me the beautiful feelings. At that moment I was buried in the sea of happiness. And also it made me feel more about the prosperity of our homeland. Meanwhile, However, I was worried about the fireworks. First, setting off firecrackers made a tremendous noise and caused serious air pollution. Also children\'s safety faced the crisis of getting burned or injured in the eyes. What\'s worse, many dustmen\'s valuable time was wasted for fireworks pieces after being set off dirtied the environment. So I thought some day we\'ll have to forbid making and setting off fireworks, though it\'s a Chinese custom for hundreds of years. Spring festival is on the first day of the first lunar month. Chinese people most like the Spring Festival. During Spring Festival, Chinese people like having meals with their families, playing fireworks in the open air. My sisters and I played fireworks on that day. We had many fireworks. They were very beautiful. They were running into the sky and breaking into pieces. They looked like flowers in the sky. We were very happy and excited. After that, I made a wish. I hope that, we can have a happy and healthy life next year and everyone in my family can be happy. I enjoy the festival very happy.。

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《山河故人》第一段故事从质感上依然保持了贾樟柯原有风格。当第一段落结束时，山河故人四个字的片名出现在银幕上，让人一度纳闷这电影怎么这么短，谁知画幅一变，时空转换，第二个段落开始了。老实说，如果电影真的就此结束，至少从质感上讲，它还是贾樟柯的老粉丝们心中的贾樟柯电影应有的样子:灰暗的县城、热闹的迪厅、缓慢的节奏，这一切似乎都在告诉观众:没错，这跟你在大银幕下看到的那些电影一样，都是出自那个县城青年之手。然而，后面的两个段落却出现了和之前的段落完全不一样的风格。明快轻巧的叙事节奏，平滑工整的镜头流转，娴熟的深焦、浅焦切换，频繁出现的特写，明亮的灯光、鲜艳的色彩，当然最重要的是故事本身，感情充沛、情节通俗，甚至还有“每个人只能陪你走一段路”这样的鸡汤金句。还好，我们在贾樟柯的变化中还能感受到不变，那就是电影镜头对准的依然是小人物的人情变故、爱恨挣扎。把普通人被时代洪流裹挟的际遇变迁放在过去、现在和将来三个不同的时空里呈现出来，以旁观者的姿态和视角，把对小人物的深沉炽热的关照寓于对大跨度时代背景的冷漠观察中，由此产生的强烈反差和戏剧张力也就只有贾樟柯才能拿捏得如此得心应手游刃有余。

《山河故人》对符号运用也达到了一个新的极致。贾樟柯用虎、犬和枪支来寓意和强化梁子、沈涛和晋生的命运。梁子追求自由爱，结果是虎嗅蔷薇的悲情；涛告诉我们“每个人只能陪你走一段路”，唯家犬讽刺地相伴到老；导演在第一段故事里用寻枪来突出晋生暴烈，在第三段里又用得枪来衬托他处境的哀凉。片中还有大量的符号关联来做榫卯。第一段扛大刀的孩子在第二段中长大成人，上一段涛找梁子偶遇坠机的地方，下一段梁子路过时有母子默默烧纸。第二段故事里涛交给幼年儿子的钥匙，第三段时成为成年儿子向情人开启心门的钥匙。在第二个故事里以视频方式交代儿子移民去向的“十二门徒”景观，到了第三段以儿子和情人的揽胜画面代入，此处贾樟柯借张艾嘉之口道出:“我第一次来的时候还有八个，现在只剩下三个了！”以此表达一众主人公精神世界的崩塌与缺失。

影片的前两段落出现了那位关刀少年，这处“闲笔”与主干剧情毫无关联，没有台词，没有特写，只是沉默流浪着的风景。这一幕确实与影片的漂泊主题极为合衬。关刀是义气的象征，这个独行的少年在熙攘人群中有着强烈的行侠味道，联系“现代武侠片”《天注定》中姜武的那把抢，不难理解关刀少年与社会不公之间的呼应关系。换一种解释说，历史故事里的关刀逆车流行，也凸显着传统与现代的文化冲突，在急剧现代化与城市化的快节奏中，与社会格格不入的关刀，恰是民间传统文化在遭遇现代性时所特有的“孤独”，一如片中反复出现的那座文峰塔，千年古塔被一片仿古建筑包围，见证人事变迁。当然，关刀少年也可视作贾樟柯电影中惯用的抒情装置，具有空镜头的美学特征，与《三峡好人》里的川剧变脸艺人和走钢索者一脉相承，他们都是潜伏于现实表象下的幽灵。

故事的结尾转回汾阳，晚年的涛恍若听到谁的呼唤。她放下给儿子包的榆钱馅饺子，带着狗走进漫天大雪，彼岸的海鸥声和涛声被开篇的舞曲替代，涛像年轻时候舞动起来。故事至此，脑中不由闪过晏殊的那句:“满目山河空念远，落花风雨更伤春。不如怜取眼前人。”涛在纷飞的暮雪中跳起1999年的舞，这一幕如此感人跳舞的场景是情感的释放，同时又有种广阔的对命运的理解；是被损害与被放弃的形象，可又如此沉静广大，你会突然发现，快要失明的涛是这剧中惟一一个没有失魂落魄的。被抛弃的地球已经没有了未来，但大地仍然是不可战胜的，生命也是。这一刻，宏大叙事和个体命运融合，对着观众的潜意识低声诉说，如泣如诉，就像完美无暇的雪，绵密地落在满目疮痍的大地上。

编导故事续写范文 篇12

能出来不容易，，记着加分呀1\\\\As the captain of China,Beijing has been the most popular city of china。

So more and more people want to visit think the best time to visit Beijing is spring ,for the weather of that time is very fine ,neither too hot nor too cold . The warm wind will make you fell people visit Beijing for it\'s beautiful sence and cultural inheritance .If you want to have a enjoyable journey ,I suggest you to pay a visit to the Great Wall,the Summer Palace ,the Olympic Park and many other you feel tired after one day\'s journey ,you can taste the ^Zha Jiang Mian^,a kind of traditional food in are many other things you can do in Beijing,as shopping in the big shopping mall,visit the different kinds park ,visit the^Si He Yuan^and so hope you can have a happy time in Beijing. 2\\\\Hello, Everyone! Today, I am going to tell all of you about my invention which is the a time machine as it \'s been my dream in my life. Time machine allows people to travel back in time to prevent disaster to happen. It also allows people to tavel into dinstant future to find out solution for Incurable illness including cancer and aids. However, this machine may be abused by people to create chaos in our world or even pletely change our history. Therfore, security features are essential for my invention. The future invention of time machine will definately bring more advantages for human \'s all, thank you!3\\\\I like reading,so I love many different kinds of books very much,because they not only broaden my horizons（视野）but also give me inspiration（灵感）. Up to now I have read a lot of books,for example,magazines,novels and storybooks and so one of the books that I like best is ^Harry Porter^ . The story is very long but I am interested in it. Harry was such a brave and clever boy that he dared to fight against powerful enemies. His Z-shaped scar and magic stick brought me into a magical world. In fact, the fiction story is so meaningful that I can learn a lot from it. I think it\'s the best book I\'ve ever read. 4\\\\My Favourite ProgrammeThere are thousands and thousands of wonderful programs on TV everyday. Of these, news program has always been my favorite. Almost everyday, I turn on TV at 6:30 . and wait early for the news program. This has almost bee apart of my lifeNews program contains a large amount of latest information from the most serious international political affairs to the most enjoyable football games. The most important feature of the program is its fast rhythm. Because of this fast rhythm, it can contain so much information in such a short like this program because I think this program is more than just a TV program itself. In fact, it is a way of munication. From this program, people can be well informed about the affairs both at home and abroad in time. The world is developing fast, but if you watch this program everyday, you will feel that you are always in pace with the development of the \\\\dear teacher: I am just writing to say thank you for teaching us things we need to learn, thank you for being there for us when we have any problems, thanks for your devotion and willingness to help us, thank you for the love you\'ve shown to us. I am lucky to have a teacher like you. and no matter what kind of person i will bee, you will always have your influence on me. You taught me how to study, how to live and even how to be a man. From you I learned what kind of person i want to be and what should i get from life. this means everything to me. my dear teacher, no matter what you will always have a special place in my heart and i will remember what i have learned from you and carry the knowleges through my life! I will make good use of the school, teachers would also like to be able to impart a better learning methods, such as English will be able to make progress there is a greater interest in education teachers and thanked the ex Thank you! 6\\\\Dear students In some parts of our country, there are many children out of many students are too poor to go to don\'t have enought school things and student should have the right to go to shuold help them as possible as we can,such as we can send them some hope that they can have chance to get knowledge as the same as we doThanks for your joining! Students\' Union。