历年高考英语作文范文 第1篇

My weekendLast weekend,we took part in a picking activity. We drove from the school, and the farm was about 2 kilometers away from our school. When we arrived at the farm, there are all kinds of animals, green fresh vegetables and fruit trees in the farm. We were divided into two groups. One group was responsible for picking fruits, the other packed up the fruits. Time flying quickly, the activity was over. But it was a meaningful day, when we learn a lot form it. Through this activity, we know how hard the farmers are and how precious the food is. We should treasure the food planted by the farmers.

历年高考英语作文范文 第2篇

Last Monday, my father would be on a business trip for five days. Having gotten my promise of being great at home and taking care of my mother, he rest assured and put his luggage into the trunk of his car. Seeing my father’s driving away, my mother and I waved our hands and said goodbye to him. For a moment, I began to miss my father, wishing that he would be safe and well the next days.

I thought everything would go well, as this was not the first time that my father had been away for several days. Yet, unfortunately, my mother caught a cold the next morning. Looking at her pale face, I experienced high levels of anxiety. However, I told myself that I had to calm down and look after my mum, as I promised to my dad. The moment I got my mum to sleep, I put cold towel on her forehead, found pills in the medicine box, and made some noodles for her. Luckily, she waked up and felt better, after taking the pills and the noodles. That her fever was gone relieved and satisfied me a lot.

In the next four days, I was taking her body temperature twice a day, ensuring that she was pletely well. To our delight, my dad went back home safely and healthily on Saturday. On hearing what I had done to my mum, he, as well as my mum, beamed at me and gave me a big thumb. Hearing their praises and seeing bright smiles on their faces, I really felt overjoyed and thrilled. Conceivably, taking care of my parents was, indeed and definitely, my mission and obligation.

历年高考英语作文范文 第3篇

近年高考文言复句试题简析

近年来,高考文言文阅读从复句关系的角度设题已经成为“热点”之一。为了便于备考,本文就近年来高 考文言复句试题作一些分析,对应试复习谈一些认识。

一、高考文言复句试题分析

试题形式具体地有以下四方面:

1.给译文试加关联词,考查复句关系。例如全国高考试题第15题:

文中“脱不获命,令有投劾而归耳”这一复句,如果给它的译文用上关联词,应当是

A.既然……只有…… B.倘若……那么……

C.只要……就…… D.宁可……也要……

此题型1992年“三南”题中曾用过。处理此类题,首先要把题干文言复句的意思弄清楚,这就要看它所处 的语言环境。本句之前是郭永指责太原帅征收超过朝廷规定标准之外的赋税供其“宴飨”享乐,之后是府里也 不敢紧逼,中间题干句,应有对太原帅威胁的意味。第二步再用四选项的.关联词逐个搭配,选取恰当的一项。 只有B 项表假设的关联词才恰当(题干句中的“脱”正是个表假设关系的连词)。

2.既考实词,又考复句关系。例如1992年全国高考试题第16题:

下列句子的正确意思是

以寿虽不远嫌,原情不至贬废

A.认为陈寿虽然未能远避嫌疑,但推究实情还不至于被贬废。

B.认为陈寿虽然未能远避嫌疑,但按原本情况还不至于被贬废。

C.认为陈寿即使未能远避嫌疑,推究实情也还不至于被贬废。

D.认为陈寿即使未能远避嫌疑,按原本情况也还不至于被贬废。

本题有两个考查点,一个是对“原”的解释,属于对实词的理解;一个就是辨析复句关系。句中有关联词 “虽”,但“虽”在文言复句中既可表示转折关系,又可表示假设关系,在句中的具体作用,只能结合语境分 析。答案为A。

3.形式上考虚词,实际上考复句关系。例如1993年全国高考试题13题:

下列各句中的“以”字与“不愈于养以遗患乎”中的“以”字意义、用法相同的是

A.吾必尽吾力以拯吾村。

B.故为之说,以俟夫观人风者得焉。

C.赵以诚盛兵以待秦,秦不敢动。

D.孤违蹇叔,以辱二三子。

在此题中,“以”都做连词,可考查点不在于让考生分辨它的连词用法与非连词用法,而在于它所连接的 两部分之间的逻辑关系,这就是题目的难度所在。题干中的句子,“以”前后是因果关系,选项中只有D前后是 因果关系,

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历年高考英语作文范文 第4篇

Should students make friends on line? Some people say yes. The internet helps make many friends. Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies.

Others, however, think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line.

It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.

历年高考英语作文范文 第5篇

Dear Ieslie:

As scheduled, we will have a Chinese lesson next weekend .Considering our students are preparing for their final exam,I suggest we have the lesson in the park near our school.

The mainly course of our class is to learn the poem of Tang \'s universally acknowledged that the poem of Tang Dynasty is one of the solid foundations of our culture. A large number of talent poets showed their view about the society and expressed their satisfaction with the beauty of our motherland. You can broaden your horizon and have a better understanding of our colorful culture through this study.

Knowing the history of Tang Dynasty is better for you before having class. It\'s the society that creates the brilliant poem.

Yours

Li Hua.

历年高考英语作文范文 第6篇

Sir, it so happened that I was on my way home and noticed who were around and what they were doing. A man in a dark suit was walking out of the door, with an umbrella in his hand. A man was sweeping near the telephone booth. A woman and her child were crossing the road. There was a basket on the woman\'s right arm. A man with a cap was on a ladder,cleaning the wall. A man was reading under the tree. In the telephone booth, a girl was making a call. By the side of the street, I found a black car parked there with a door open. In the car there were two persons. The driver was sitting in the front, and the passenger was in the back.

Sir, it so happened that I was on my way home and noticed who were around and what they were doing. A man in black was standing by the door, with an umbrella in his hand. A man with a cap was wiping the wall on a ladder. Under the tree there was a man reading a newspaper. A black car was parked by the side of the road with a door open. There was a driver sitting in the front and a passenger in the back. A lady with a child was walking across the street. She was carrying a basket on the arm. On the other side of the load, a man was sweeping the street near the telephone booth. There was a girl making a phone call in the telephone booth.

历年高考英语作文范文 第7篇

Dear Sir or Madame:

I’m very glad to be invited to the English summer camp.

I prefer to go in July because I’ll have to prepare myself for the new school term in August. It seems all the activities you offer are attractive and meaningful. But I’d like to attend the English lectures, from which I can get more information on British and American culture. With the coming of the 20xx Beijing Olympic Games, more and more foreigners are eager to know about China. So I hope to teach foreigners Chinese and spread Chinese culture.

It’s been a dream for me to visit Beijing. Could you organize a tour around the city during the camp?

Thank you very much.

Yours truly,

Li Ping

历年高考英语作文范文 第8篇

I\'m sorry to know that you\'re having such a bad time at the moment. Thetruth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to begoing wrong, so you don\'t have to worry much. The important thing is to learn tocontrol your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. Hereare three useful tips:

First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way ofletting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoorsand play team games with your ftiends as physical exercise is an effective wayto get rid of anger. And third, remain optimistic about your future. Such apositive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.

I hope you\'ll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.

历年高考英语作文范文 第9篇

There is no consensus of opinions among people about whether young people should live with their parents.

Some people are for the view that they prefer to live with their parents. While others take an opposite side, firmly believing that they need independent life. As far as I am concerned, the latter notion is preferable in many senses. The reasons are obvious.

First of all, we should make a living by ourselves and live independently.

Furthermore, we can seek greater freedom and get a place of our own, in which we can do whatever we want. Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest. That is, we have enough chances to face the society by ourselves, no matter what kind of experience we will have.

A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that living alone is necessary.

【译文】

关于年轻人是否应该与父母一起生活的观点,人们没有达成一致。

有些人持更喜欢与父母一起生活的观点。然而还有一些人持有相反的观点,坚定认为他们需要独立的生活。就我而言,后者的观点从多种意义上来说更可取一些。理由很明显。 首先,我们应该独立谋生,独自生活。另外,我们可以获取更大的自由并拥有我们自己的空间,做自己想做的事情。在所有的支持论据中,有一个是最有力的。那就是我们可以有足够的机会来独自面对社会,不管我们会拥有什么样的经历。

根据以上所述很自然得出结论,那就是独立生活是有必要的。 2015年高考英语写作答题模板及范文——提纲作文

历年高考英语作文范文 第10篇

近年高考英语满分作文

We live in a world full of competition. And the examination is one of the tools to exam whether we meet the standard or not. If we want to enter the key university, we have to get high marks on the College Entrance Exam;if we want to have a good job, we will go through a series of interviews and tests;If we want to drive a car, we have to pass the driving test. Some people complain that there are too many exams in our lives, and these exams cannot truly or fully reflect a persons ability. Unfortunately, our fate and future are depending on these exams. We cannot avoid them.

Its true that the examinations can only test what we remember instead of what we know. A student with a good memory may find it very easy to get high marks before the examinations. All he needs to do is to remember the knowledge from the textbooks. In this situation, its quite unfair to evaluate the students only through exams. Whats more, some unexpected accidents may happen to the students such as a high fever or a sudden headache; this will affect the final marks. Since no one can performs stable all the time.

历年高考英语作文范文 第11篇

Word came that a reading festival would be held by our school and there is a need for a picture for advertisement and I am writing to give my opinion. From my perspective , I am in favor of the picture in the top right corner.

As is vividly depicted in that picture, around the table sit three kids with a couple of books in their hands, having a heated discussion about the contents and sharing their thoughts for the themes, which shows their dedication and passion for reading.

Basically, several reasons are listed for my preference. First, nothing is more attractive than a proper and realistic picture. This picture serves as an epitome of our daily reading scene in the school and it is apt to let students recall the joy and harvest while reading.

Second, this picture stands for the fun of sharing and exchanging ideas. With regard to reading, there is a saying that there are a thousand Hamlets in a thousand people\'s eyes. After reading, bits and pieces of thoughts will appear in our mind, so it is beneficial to have a better understanding after comparing notes about what we have read.

From what is mentioned above, I, undoubtedly, approve of the picture in the top right corner. Thus, I would appreciate it if you could take my proposal into consideration and I wish this festival a complete success.

近年高考英语真题作文

历年高考英语作文范文 第12篇

中山大学博雅学院院长甘阳指出,用机械的方法永远无法精准地衡量出一所大学的好坏。要看一所大学的水平,还要看它的毕业生后都在做什么,在哪些领域取得成就。他建议,对于大学的评估,5年10年评一次更为可取,这才能看出大学的发展程度。上海交通大学高等教育研究院院长刘念才表示,大学首先还是要重视办学,重视人才培养、提高质量,而不是追着排名走,塑造大学根本精神比排行榜要重要得多。

高考即将来临。对于不少考生来说,媒体上发布的各种大学排行榜是填报志愿、选择大学的重要参考。然而各种大学排行榜的科学性、权威性和公信力也一直受到质疑。

受访者认为“好大学”的标准是“在排行榜上名列前茅”

“我读高中时,也和大多数同学一样,希望能进入排行榜中排名靠前的大学。在填报志愿时,对排行榜的印象也是我的一^v^标准。”张蒙告诉记者,她现在关注排行榜,一方面是想知道自己的学校和专业处于什么名次,另一方面是给向她咨询高校信息的亲戚朋友提供参考。

调查显示,的受访者发现大学排行榜对考生影响大,其中的受访者坦言非常大。仅的受访者感觉大学排行榜对考生影响小。

本次调查显示,大学排行榜影响着人们心中“好大学”的定义。调查发现,“在排行榜上名列前茅”是受访者心中 “好大学”的首要标准,的受访者选择这一项。接下来是知名度高()和国家财政支持力度大()。其他标准还有:分数线高、就业率高、985高校、所在城市发达、重点学科多、师资力量雄厚、校园美、科研成果丰富、设施好、财力雄厚、名人校友多、科研机构强大、研究生比例高、学科全等。

曾任复旦大学校长的杨玉良指出,“一流大学”正成为指标和数字里的“一流大学”。令人担忧的是,与这种大学排行榜相对应的评价、评估方法,正在成为一种“制度”。

北大前校长许智宏坦言:“大学排名像是悬在中国大学校长头上的一把剑,很多校长为了得到体面的排名,不得不按照排名的各项指标进行学校建设,导致我国很多大学没有了特色。”

近年高考热门专业

历年高考英语作文范文 第13篇

Good manners are necessary because one is judged by his manners. One’s manners not only show what kind of education he has received and what his social position is, but they also tend to show what his nature is.

Good manners means good behaviour in social coMMunication. A person with good manners is always agreeable companion, because he is always thinking of others and respect others. He will not push through a crowd, but wait quietly for his turn to advance. Good manners are not the exceptionally great deeds but they can tell that the person who possesses them is a man of highest standards.

To learn good manners, one must first of all bear in mind that they arise from one’s daily behaviour—the way he responds to others and the manner he behaves in front of people. To be a man of good manners, he must be genuinely polite to others and show respect for others. In short, politeness costs nothing and gains everything.

历年高考英语作文范文 第14篇

以下为近几年涉及到“倒装”的高考题。

can you expect to get a pay rise.

A. With hard work B. Although work hard

C. Only with hard work D. Now that he works hard

(NMET 春招)

2. Not a single song ____ at yesterday\'s party.

A. she sang B. sang she C. did she sing D. she did sing

(2000 上海)

3. I finally got the job I dreamed about. Never in all my life____ so happy.

A. did I feel felt C. I had felt D. had I felt

(NMET2000 春招)

4. -David has made great progress recently.

-____, and ____.

A. So he has... so you have B. So he has... so have you

C. So has he... so have you D. So has he... so you have

( 上海)

5. Not until all the fish died in the river, ____ how serious the pollution was.

A. did the villagers realize B. the villagers realized

C. the villagers did realize D. didn\'t the villagers realize

(NMET1995)

(Key: 1----5 CCDBA)

英语句子的正常语序(Normal Order)是主语放在谓语动词前。如果句子的谓语动词位于主语之前,这种语序被称作倒装语序(Inverted Order)。倒装语序有全部倒装和部分倒装两种。一般说来,英语中有两种情况需要使用倒装句:一种是由于语法结构的需要而进行的倒装,另一种是由于修辞需要而进行的倒装。

1)语法倒装

①疑问句中的倒装。例:

Is it necessary to keep the brushes in water?

How can we find out who are using these computers?

②在there be (或there十其他表示状态的动词) 结构中的倒装.例:

There are a lot of people in the room.

There stands a weather station at the top of the hill.

③在以here,there,now,then等引起的句子中,动词是be,come,go等

时,常用倒装形式以引起注意。例:

There goes the bell!

Now comes your turn.

如果主语是人称代词,则不用倒装。例:

Here we are.

④在so,nor,neither开头的句子中,须用倒装语序。例:

All animals need air and so do plants.

If you won’t go,neither shall I.

2)修辞倒装

①具有否定意义的副词或词组用于句首,担任状语时,要用倒装。常见的 词有:never,seldom,1ittle,hardly,not until等。另外,含有否定意义的关联词neither… (nor),no sooner…(than),hardly…when,not only…(but also)等位于句首时也须用倒装。例:

Never have I dreamed of it.

Not Until midnight did it stop raining.

Hardly had he arrived when he started complaining.

Nowhere else in the world can there be such a quite, beautiful place.

②as引导的让步状语从句中,要用倒装语序。例:

Old as he was, he studied English hard.

Brave as they were , the danger made them afraid.

注:though引导的让步状语从句中,也可用倒装语序。

③为了生动地描写动作,在in,out,away,up,down,off等副词开头的 句子中常用倒装语序。例:

Up went the rocket into the air.

Following a roar, out rushed a tiger from among the bushes.

在此结构中,当主语是代词时,用正常语序。例:

Away they went. / Down it flew.

④当“only +状语”用于句首表示强调时,要用倒装语序,如果不在句首,则用正常语序。例:

Only in this way can you hope to improve the situation there.

Only when we had a talk with him did we come to know that he was a Japanese .

○ 当“ so (such) ... that^v^ 结构中的so, such 放在句首加强语气时,要用倒装。

So excited was he ( = He was so excited ) that he couldn\'t speak.

Such was the force of the explosion(爆炸) that all the windows were

broken .

历年高考英语作文范文 第15篇

Nowadays, when we are in the public place, we can see the rubbish everywhere, people throw away the rubbish, what’s more, some people still jump the lines, all these behaviors are against the public morals. The public morals are advocated all the time, since we are small, we are educated to behave well in the public, but we still can see some people’s bad behavior in the public. The lack of public morals reflects a person’s bad personality, they will be condemned by others. No matter where we are, we need to behavior ourselves, we should not litter, jump the line or disturb others in the silent place. We need to self-controlled.

如今,当我们在公共场合的时候,可以随处看到垃圾,人们随处乱扔垃圾,而且。一些人仍然会插队,所有这些行为是违反了公共道德的。人们一直提倡公共道德,打从我们小时候起,就被教育要在公共场所自律,但是我们仍然可以在公共场合看到一些人不好行为。公共道德的确实反映了一个人不好的品格,他们会受到别人的谴责。无论我们在哪里,我们需要自律,我们不应该乱扔垃圾,插队或者在安静的场合打扰别人。我们需要自我约束。

历年高考英语作文范文 第16篇

诚信的重要性  The Importance of Promise

People always attach the importance to the promise, they hate people who break their promise. I remember once a time, my friend asked me to go to see the movie with her, I said yes without hesitation. But on that day, I forgot about the date, I just woke up late and then played computer games in my bedroom. My friends called me, she asked why did I disappear, I said I was sleeping at home, she became very angry, until then did I think about our date. I felt so sorry, I break my promise for the first time, I realize I did the very bad thing. Even though I apologized for many times, my friend was still angry with me. I learn the lesson, promise is very important, we must keep it, other people will see through our personality to decide what kind of person we are.

人们总是赋予承诺很大的重要性,他们厌恶那些不守信用的人。我记得有一次,我的朋友叫我去和她一起看电影,我毫不犹豫就答应了。但是到了那天,我忘记了我们的约会,我很晚才起床,然后呆在房间里玩电脑游戏。我的朋友打电话给我,她问我为什么我没有出现,我说我在家里睡觉,她很生气,直到到时我才想起我们的约会。我感到很抱歉,我第一次失信了,我做了很不好的事情。虽然我多次道歉,但是我的朋友当时仍在生气。我学到了教训,诚信是很重要的,我们必须遵守,别人会通过我们的人格来决定我们是什么样的人。

历年高考英语作文范文 第17篇

Dear Leslie:

How\'s it going? Have you absorbed all the knowledge I taught you last time? Now let me tell you the information of next lesson.

I will give the lesson on next Saturday morning, from 8:00 . to 11:30 . at 101 Room in the teaching building in our school.

We are going to learn about Tang poetry, which is an extremely important part of not only Chinese language but also Chinese culture. What you need to do in advance is to know briefly about the history of Tang Dynasty. You can consult the Internet or the books I gave you. Besides, don\'t forget to review what you have learned before.

I am looking forward to our meeting. See you next week!

Yours,

Li Hua.

历年高考英语作文范文 第18篇

As the development of high technology, the function of high-tech products improves greatly. People can type the text through the cellphone and they can write down whatever they want with computer. It seems that typing the information is so fast and convenient, so most young people don’t pay attention to write the words by their hands. When they learn to write the Chinese, their hand-writing is really bad. Though computer is popular, we need to practice our hand-writing. The one who writes the good words will impress the other person. As the saying that writing is the reflection of a person’s character, so we should not abandon our tradition.

随着高科技的发展,高科技产品的功能发展得很快。人们能通过电话来输入信息,通过电脑,他们能写下一切。似乎输入信息是如此的方便和快速,因此大部分人不关注用手写字。当他们学习些中文字的时候,手写是如此的糟糕。虽然电脑很流行,但是我们需要练习手写。写得一手好字的人能给别人留下好印象。就像有句话说书写就是一个人性格的体现,因此我们不应该丢掉我们的传统。

历年高考英语作文范文 第19篇

近年高考满分作文常出现的名人名言

1. 孝子之至,莫大乎尊亲;尊亲之至,莫大乎以天下养。——孟子

2. 哀哀父母,生我劬劳。——《诗经》

3. 共产主义不仅表现在田地里和汗水横流的工厂,它也表现在家庭里、饭桌旁,在亲戚之间,在相互的关系上。——(前苏联)马雅可夫斯基

4. 丑恶的海怪也比不上忘恩的儿女那样可怕。——(英国)莎士比亚

5. 仁爱和打人都先自家中开始。——鲍蒙特和弗莱彻

6. 慈善行及至亲,但不应仅此为止。——富勒

7. 形成天才的决定因素应该是勤奋。——郭沫若

8. 灵感不过是顽强的劳动而获得的奖赏。——列宾

9. 智慧源于勤奋,伟大出自平凡。

10. 天才就是这样,终身努力便成天才。——门捷列夫

11. 贵有恒何必三更眠五更起,最无益只怕一日曝十日寒。

12. 成功=艰苦劳动+正确方法+少说空话。——爱因斯坦

13. 天才不是别的,而是辛劳和勤奋。——比丰

14. 驾驭命运的舵是奋斗。不抱有一丝幻想,不放弃一点机会,不停止一日努力。

15. 天行健,君子以自强不息。

高考作文素材名人名言【热门篇】

1. 天下事以难而废者十之一,以惰而废者十之九。——颜之推

2. 智慧是勤劳的结晶,成就是劳动的化身。——卡莱尔

3. 勤奋的人是时间的主人,懒惰的人是时间的奴隶 ——朝鲜民谚

4. 勤奋和智慧是双胞胎,懒惰和愚蠢是亲兄弟 ——(古巴)何塞·马蒂

5. 勤奋者废寝忘食,懒惰人总没有时间 ——日本民谚

6. 智慧源于勤奋,伟大出自平凡 —— 民谚

7. 建立和巩固家庭的力量——是爱情,是父亲和母亲、父亲和孩子、母亲和孩子相互之间的忠诚的、纯真的爱情。——苏霍姆林斯基

8. 父母的爱应该是这样的:它能激发起孩子对周围的世界,对人所创造的一切关心,激发起他为人民服务的热情。——苏霍姆林斯基

9. 母亲的安宁和幸福取决于她的孩子们。母亲的幸福要靠孩子、少年儿童去创造。——苏霍姆林斯基

10. 成为母亲之后,女性美像一朵盛开的鲜花焕发出全部的力量和美。——苏霍姆林斯基

11. 作为一个父亲,最大的乐趣就在于:在其有生之年,能够根据自己走过的路来启发、教育子女。——蒙田

12. 所有杰出的非凡人物都有出色的母亲,到了晚年都十分尊敬自己的母亲,把他们当作最好的朋友。——(英)狄更斯

13. 在孩子的嘴上和心中,母亲就是上帝。——(英)萨克雷

14. 在这个世界上,我们永远需要报答最美好的人,这就是母亲。——(前苏联)奥斯特洛夫斯基

15. 就是在我们母亲的膝上,我们获得了我们的最高尚、最真诚和最远大的理想,但是里面很少有任何金钱。——(美)马克·吐温

高考作文素材名人名言【经典篇】

1. 常思奋不顾身,而殉国家之急。—— 司马迁

2. 热爱自己的祖国是理所当然的事。 —— 海涅

3. 母羊要是听不见她自己小羊的啼声,她决不会回答一头小牛的叫喊。——莎士比亚

4. 黄昏,你把清晨驱散的一切收集回来;羊群归棚,孩子回到母亲身边。——萨福

5. 我看见过挨饿的孩子。我看见过母亲和妻子们的悲痛。我痛恨战争。——罗斯福

6. 母爱是一种巨大的火焰。——(法)罗曼·罗兰

7. 亲人不睦家必败。——(美)林肯

8. 家是父亲的王国,母亲的世界,儿童的乐园。——爱默生

9. 慈母的心灵早在怀孕的时候就同婴儿交织在一起了。——狄更斯

10. 所有杰出的非凡人物,都有出色的母亲。——狄更斯

11. 没有无私的、自我牺牲的母爱的帮助,孩子的心灵将是一片荒漠。——狄更斯

12. 父亲,应该是一个气度宽大的朋友。——狄更斯

13. 天下最苦恼的事莫过于看不起自己的家。——狄更斯

14. 要用希望孩子对待你的方式去对待父母。——苏格拉底

15. 在家庭中,孩子最微小的欢笑,就是使父母认识统一能得到巩固的伟大精神动力。——苏霍姆林斯基

16. 读书勤乃有,不勤腹中虚。——韩愈

17. 百倍其功,终必有成。——康有为

18. 勉之期不止,多获由力耘。——欧阳修

19. 有几分勤学苦练,天资就能发挥几分。天资的充分发挥和个人的勤学苦练是成正比的。——海涅

20. 一分耕耘,一分收获;要收获得好,必须耕耘得好。——徐特立

高考作文名人名言素材积累

1. 坚毅战胜强力(莫桑比克)

2. 有毅力的人,能从磐石里挤出水来(柯尔克孜族)

3. 一个有毅力的人,再远的路程也是近的(维吾尔族)

4. 得道多助,失道寡助。(孟子公孙丑)

5. 民为贵,社稷次之,君为轻。(孟子尽心上)

6. 穷则独善其身,达则兼济天下。(孟子尽心上)

7. 天时不如地利,地利不如人和。(孟子公孙丑)

8. 富贵不能淫,贫贱不能移,威武不能屈。(孟子滕文公)

9. 锲而不舍,金石可镂。(荀子劝学)

10. 吾生也有涯,而知也无涯。(庄子养生主)

11. 君子之交淡如水,小人之交甘若醴。(庄子)

12. 博学之,审问之,慎思之,明辨之,笃行之。(中庸)

历年高考英语作文范文 第20篇

I\'ll never forget the person who helped me The person I shall never forget is my junior high English teacher, Linda. She speaks beautiful English and she\'s very kind and friendly. She helped me a lot in my English learning. She always encouraged us to practise more. We often did pair work, group work, discussions and reports. She also brought us a lot of really nice English songs and chants. We never found it boring to learn English. As a result, I made great progress in English. What\'s more, I really enjoy learning English. I\'ll never forget Linda who helped me in my English study and I\'ll try to help others as much as I can like Linda.

我永远不会忘记曾经帮助过我的人,我永远不会忘记的是我的初中英语老师,琳达。她说漂亮的英语,她非常友好和友好。在我的英语学习中,她帮助了我很多。她总是鼓励我们多练习。我们经常做对工作,小组工作,讨论和报告。她也给我们带来了很多非常好的英文歌曲和歌谣。我们从来没觉得学英语很无聊。结果,我在英语上取得了很大进步。更甚的是,我真的很喜欢学习英语。我永远不会忘记在我的英语学习上帮助过我的琳达,我会尽我所能地帮助别人,就像琳达。

历年高考英语作文范文 第21篇

Dear Forbes,

It is amazing for me to know that you show great preference for Tai Chi and are willing to learn it soon. I’ m quite sure that I can give you a hand gladly.

Tai Chi is not only an ancient martial art, but has also been widely acknowledged as an effective health exercise. Famous for its graceful and well-balanced movements, Tai Chi provides the mental relaxation and physical fitness that are so essential in our modern stressful lives.

Concerning your learning location and instructor, I’m so proud to tell you that I have the ability to recommend the best school and best trainer in our city to you, for actually my uncle is a master of Tai Chi who is always invited to instruct others all over the country. As a result, you can rely on me.

Looking forward to your coming!

Yours,

Li Hua

历年高考英语作文范文 第22篇

Not only do our parents give us life, but they also give us endless love and support, always sharing our happiness and sorrow.

I’m very grateful to my give me so much love and spare no efforts to support still remember once I was seriously ill,they were so worried and almost kept me company the whole night. Now I’m in Senior for me, my parents can understand my stressful condition and often communicate with me with encouraging give me enough personal space,which I appreciate so I should do now is to study hard.

When I grow up,I will try my best to make my parents live a happy life.

历年高考英语作文范文 第23篇

Dear Tom,

How are you? I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me. I made them myself with red silk threads, cloth and other materials. They look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond, about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide. In china, these knots stand for friendship, love and good luck. People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses. They are only US dollars each. If anyone wants to know more about the knots, let them write to me. Also, do let me know if you need further information. Thank you

【参考译文】

亲爱的汤姆,

你好吗?我想知道如果你可以卖一些中国结给我。我让他们自己用红丝线,布和其他材料。它们看起来非常漂亮形状的钻石,大约5英寸,宽4英寸。在中国,这些结代表友谊、爱和好运。人们既可以把它们作为礼物送给朋友或挂在他们的房子。他们只有美元每个。如果有人想知道更多有关节,让他们给我写信。同时,让我知道如果你需要进一步的信息。谢谢你!

历年高考英语作文范文 第24篇

Last weekend, I took part in a picking activity in a remarkable modern farm with several classmates, which has impressed and inspired all of us. With green vegetables and fruits, the farm covers an area of 2,000 acres, where advanced technology is used for efficient farming. After the instruction of the staff, we were divided into two groups to do the picking work separately. Not only did we collect vegetables and fruits, but we also ate some fresh fruits there. What this activity has taught me is how hard the farmers work and we should treasure everything we own! Besides, I really appreciate this opportunity to get close to nature. What a meaningful day it is!

历年高考英语作文范文 第25篇

还记得《欧也妮·葛朗台》中,老葛朗台在临死前贪婪地抢金属十字架,正是这_后一抬手使他送了命。这样一个杯具,不禁让我思索,倘若_后他不是贪婪地抢十字架,而是让欧也妮给他读几页诗歌,不明白他的死相还会不会那么狰狞。同样是临终时刻,在临终前几小时,^v^还起身,在护士的帮忙下,读了二十几页的《楚辞》。两相比较,我不禁要说:读书要与生命同行。

读书之于青年,意在使其成长,催其奋进。青年时期的我们,对知识的渴求就像大旱中的秧苗求水一样,书籍就像甘霖,极大地满足了青少年的需求。同时,书籍也为青少年打开了一片广阔天地。《巴黎圣母院》里写的法国大革命,《套中人》中的沙皇俄国,《活着》中写的解放战争《平凡的世界》中的农村改革开放初期……尽管你没有经历过这些时期,但是书籍能带领你遨游古今、纵横八方。有人曾说:“要么旅行,要么读书,身体和灵魂,务必有一个在路上。”青年人,请快出发去寻找自我的路吧!

读书之于中年,意在使其沉稳。人到中年,经验阅历都较青年丰富许多,精力较老年也旺盛许多。这便造成了一个后果——悸动,抑或称为躁动。中年人往往是有精力去做一些事的,但是限于经验阅历,他却不会去做,心却在不停地躁动。这时便需要书香来平复心境。俗语云:少不读《水浒》,老不读《三国》。然而却没给中年人读书加以限制,这可能意味着太多书都适宜中年人阅读。一本书,一杯茶,些许午后的阳光,让中年人躁动的心得以平复、沉静下来。非宁静无以致远。

读书之于老年,意在体味幸福。一位白发苍苍的老者,儿孙事业学业尚未完成,老者形单影只,一份孤寂落寞油然而生。这时,一本书,一杯茶,陪老人度过一天的闲散时光,让老人体味书中人的幸福。不知不觉,已近黄昏,买菜做饭,等儿孙团聚,共进晚餐,体会一家人的幸福。“叮咚——”当幸福来敲门,儿孙归来,一份幸福感自然也就来了。

高尔基说:“书籍是人类进步的阶梯。”诚然,人由生到死的过程就是在不断学习、不断进步的过程。读书吧,让书籍与生命同行!

历年高考英语作文范文 第26篇

Last Monday, my father said goodbye to my mother and me and went on a business trip. He would be away for three days. Just the next morning I found my mother wasn’t feeling well. She had a cold. I immediately went to get her some medicine and then prepared some noodles for her.

With my special care, my mother recovered quickly. When my father came back home, my mother told him what had happened. He praised me for what I had done.

I feel very happy that I have done something for my mother.

历年高考英语作文范文 第27篇

Hi Worried,

I\'m sorry to know that you\'re having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don\'t have to worry much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. Here are three useful tips:

First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your ftiends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger. And third, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.

I hope you\'ll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.

Yours,

Jamie

历年高考英语作文范文 第28篇

近年湖南高考科技文阅读大盘点

一、命题特点

近三年湖南卷科技文阅读在选文上,都是生物科学领域方面的文章。是早期教育方面的文章,是基因组图谱,是嗜盐菌实验。这样的选文既强调了科学类文章内容新、语言专、行文简的特点,又兼顾了考生的知识面和对新信息接受的可能性,具有人文性。

在命题形式上,近三年的湖南卷都是4道选择题,考查点的设计,都圈定在“理解文中重要词语的含义”“筛选并整合文中的信息”“根据文章内容进行推断”等能力上。

在科学类文章阅读命题意图和能力要求上,湖南卷注重对段落和篇章的阅读理解,强调阅读深度。

二、答题误区

科学类文章阅读选项的设置一般不会照抄原文的语句,而是另外改换一种说法,也正是在这“改换”当中,有意设置一些不符合原文的干扰项,来故意迷惑考生,这就是所谓的“误区”,即考生的“丢分点”。近三年湖南卷科学类文章阅读的常见误区主要有以下几点。

1.偷换概念

这种选项乍看与原文的说法一样,但仔细推敲就会发现实际上二者并非一回事。混淆所指的对象,颠倒陈述的主体与修饰语,省略一些关键的修饰语,均可导致表述不当。如20湖南卷第10题A选项“通过对人幼年生长期时间程序产生规律的研究,我们可以得知,新生儿的睡眠与清醒昼夜周期是不可能改变的”。原文提到的研究主要是针对婴儿阶段,本选项将它改成“幼年生长期”,偷换了概念,造成前提无据。

2.不合逻辑

主要指命题者在设置根据原文内容进行合理推断和想象题的选项时,从逻辑角度设置陷阱。如年湖南卷第10题B选项“实验清楚地表明,新生儿生命的寿命早在出生之前就已经开始了,因此我国现行对人寿命长短计算的方式是错误的”。“新生儿生命的寿命早在出生之前就已经开始了”是原文中的句子,前提是成立的。但是,由此而得出“我国现行对人寿命长短计算的方式是错误的”推论是不合理的,因为一个是站在生命科学的角度上说的,一个是站在传统的约定俗成的角度上说的,而且后一个角度并不会对人类与科学造成危害,说它“错误”就不免失之武断了。

3.曲解原意

历年高考英语作文范文 第29篇

Students long to attend colleges or universities for various reasons. In my opinion, the most common reasons are to prepare for a career, to have new experiences and learn to be independent.

Career preparation is becoming more and more important to young people. For many, this is the primary reason to go to college. They know that the job market is competitive and in order to be employed in the future they have to be well equipped with knowledge and skills.

Also, students go to colleges or universities to have experiences and learn to live on their own. Going to colleges often means having the opportunity to meet with different people from different parts of the country. They learn to communicate and co-operate with each other. For most students, we guess, it is the first time that they have been away from home. They are faced with many new situations and have to learn to solve them independently, making decisions on their own and dealing with various things themselves. So colleges and universities help them grow up.

Surely, colleges and universities become their first choice.

历年高考英语作文范文 第30篇

传统文化的继承  To Inherit the Tradition

Today, we live in the modern world, most things we do can use the machine. The technology brings so many convenience to us, it facilitates our life. As we are facing the new products all the time, the traditional things are fading away. Take the paper-cut for example. When I was very small, paper-cut was so popular in my grandma’s generation, most women could cut all kinds of interesting shapes. While today when I went back to my hometown, I found that most of them had stopped cutting papers, because they could buy them at the very low price. What’s more, the young people don’t learn such art, for the parents think it is not necessary for their children to learn the old-fashion thing. The tradition should not be abandoned, it is the reflection of our culture. Even facing the challenge, we need to inherit the tradition.

今天,我们生活在摩登时代,我们可以使用机器做大部分的事情。科技给我们带来了很多方便,它便利了我们的生活。我们每天都面对着新产品,传统的东西正在慢慢消失。以剪纸为例。在我很小的时候,在我祖母的那一代,剪纸很受欢迎,大多数女性可以剪出各种有趣的形状。现在当我回到家乡时,我发现他们中的大多数已经停止剪纸,因为他们可以以很低的价格购买。更重要的是,年轻人不了解这种艺术, 以为父母认为他们的孩子没有必要去学习这种不时髦的东西。传统不应该被放弃,这是我们文化的反映。甚至面临挑战,我们仍然需要继承传统。

历年高考英语作文范文 第31篇

A new park for children has been set up to welcome\' the coming of Children\'s Day,

The park is in the south of our city, covering an area of 500 mu. Entering the park you can see statues of children in different races, hand in hand,which is the symbol of the world peace. In the middle is a lake, around Which are all kinds of trees and flowers. There are many boats on the take and some children are boating happily, To the south of the lake is a hill with a lot of monkeys on it. The Children\'s Pa]ace lies to the east, in which all kinds of exhibitions are on show. To the west of the lake is a place for children to play, where there are many recreational facilities.

I\'m sure the children in our city will have a happy festival this year

【译文】

一个新的儿童公园已经成立,欢迎\'的儿童节的到来,

该公园是在我们的城市南部,占地500亩。走进公园,你可以看到来自不同种族的儿童雕像,手挽着手,这是世界和平的象征。在中间有一个湖,周围是各种树木和花卉。上有需要,有些孩子愉快地划船,要在湖的南方许多船只是一个有很多山猴子上。儿童的王牌在于东部,其中各种展览展出的。为了在湖的西面是儿童玩的地方,那里有许多娱乐设施。

我敢肯定,在我们城市的孩子有一个快乐的节日!

历年高考英语作文范文 第32篇

一张奖状,一座奖杯,是我们用汗水换来的奖品;一个微笑,一份祝福,是亲人、朋友送给我们的奖品;一米阳光,一泓清水,是大自然赋予我们的奖品……这些奖品,有的你已经拥有,有的你曾经赠予,有的你还在期盼。

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历年高考英语作文范文 第33篇

第一次见着父亲的手,是在家中翻箱倒柜时无意寻着的一张照片上,那是在一九九五年的冬天,父亲与母亲结婚时照的。照片上的父亲,意气风发,蓄着当时流行的中长发,伸出去替人递烟的手干净而且自然,手背上晒得有些黑,但厚大而踏实,给人一种非常有力量,非常有精神的感觉。

我拿着照片端详了好一会儿,兴冲冲地拿去给母亲看,母亲看了有些惊喜,问我是从哪里找到的,没待我说话,她又感叹道:“看你父亲那时候多年轻,现在都老了啊。”我指照片上父亲的手对母亲说:“看,那时候父亲的手多好看,手掌又大,手指又长。”母亲看了好一会儿,喃喃道:“那时候没干活,手当然漂亮,看看他现在的手成什么样了。”我本想去看看父亲现在手成何样,但终因事耽搁,竟也忘记了。

那时候,同学不知从哪里学来看手相的游戏,一个个小半仙们拿起对方的手指指点点,神神道道的样子,也让我颇有些相信,回到家,拿起母亲的手煞有介事地替她讲解:“这是生命线,这是爱情线,这是事业线……”父亲坐在一旁看我替母亲看手相,突然说要我也替他看看,我放下母亲的手,慢慢坐了过去。伸手拿起父亲的手,触到他的皮肤的那一刻,我愣住了,那种感觉让我想起了戈壁滩上的胡杨树干,是毫无生机的枯树皮叠出的沟壑,充满了刺痛的粗糙感。我的心头涌上一股心疼,轻轻将父亲的手移到眼前端详,这是一只怎样的手啊,黯淡的`肤色映不出一丝生命的光彩,因为常年与金属机油打交道,指甲里满是黑色的油渍,大大小小的划伤痕迹布满了手背,连手背上的伤痕都是黑色的,这油污已随他多年的劳动深浸了他的手,将他的手侵蚀得似一块锈迹斑驳的铁片,这手心里哪里还辨得出生命线的痕迹,几十条油污墨线纵横在生命线的上方,将他的生命线分割得七零八落,却也扩展得非常宽非常宽。我的眼眶湿润了,心疼变成了心酸,我亲爱的父亲的手,从光滑年轻到苍老可怖,这么多年的劳作,他却从未向我提及。

在泪眼朦胧中,我依稀看到了父亲在烈日下劳动的模样,他蹲在地上,手上满是油污,他面对着滚烫的发动机,他拧着细小的螺丝,他的汗滴进尾气的浓烟里,他的手背上,黑色的伤口上覆着红色。在严冬,他也不能停下坐在火炉边烤烤火,父亲说每一桩生意都是收入,每一次收入都不能放弃,为这个家,在严冬里,他也咬牙坚持着。手里拿着铁制的工具,冷得刺骨,他的手又冻得裂开了,如形容枯槁的老人奄奄一息。我的父亲,就是用他的这双手撑起这个家。

我吸了吸鼻子,我想对他说:“您的生命线非常长,我愿意伴您终老。”

历年高考英语作文范文 第34篇

高考倒计时

203月(还有14周)

有志者事竟成,破釜沉舟,百二秦关终属楚

苦心人天不负,卧薪尝胆,三千越甲可吞吴

三月的晨风,吹面不寒,真像朱自清比喻的那样:像母亲的手抚摸着你;豁达的路灯默默伫立,笑看人间花开花落,静观天上云卷云舒。公交车一辆辆从身边呼啸而去,白日沙丁鱼一样的车厢现在空荡荡,多少人正在梦中流连,做着不愿醒来的梦,可是曙色降临,黑暗渐尽,天就要亮了。

高考倒计时

年4月(还有9周)

眼泪不是我们的答案,拼搏才是我们的选择。

坚 持 就 是 胜 利

高考倒计时

2014年5月(还有4周)

因为我不能,所以一定要;因为一定要,所以一定能!

天 道 酬 勤!

[近年高考倒计时日历]

历年高考英语作文范文 第35篇

Dear Lesile:

How are you? I have learnt your progress in your Chinese with my help and your hard work. I am writing to tell the plan that what should you do in advance.

First, let\'s make it at eight o\'clock in school library. We can consulted a number of books about the subject there. Second, the next theme is about Chinese culture especially the Tang poems that are full of history and act. I believe you will be attractive once you put your heart. Third I need you to perpare some work. The Tang poems are based on the Tang dynasty so you should to look through the history and great happening.

As the saying goes no pains, no gains. Chinese is so beautiful and difficult that you need be involved sincerely. I am looking forward to starting our study.

Yours,

Li Hua

历年高考英语作文范文 第36篇

I went on a gathering with my friends last weekend, and it was a fantastic experience.

We arrived at the gathering site early in the afternoon, when it was still very hot. We walked through the bushes and looked for fruits and vegetables to gather. I competited with my friends to see who gathers with the most speed and quality. In the end, all of us not only gained many fresh and tasty fruits, but also learnt efficient ways to gather crops.

Personally, this was a very meaningful experience and I had a lot of fun. I had a great time with my friends.

历年高考英语作文范文 第37篇

前段时间闹得轰轰烈烈的“虎妈”、“鹰爸”事件想必仍记忆犹新。他们培养出的孩子各个品学兼优,才华横溢,教育方式引来一批人追捧。但冷静思考之,才发现这不过是教育的“懒政”。

父母望子成龙、望女成凤无可厚非,但虎妈鹰爸们却把孩子们当成了他们达到某种目标的工具;制定各种高强度的学习方案,规定凌晨5点起床、晚上12点才睡觉的严苛作息,成绩必须得到全优……但试问,这些孩子了一摞高过自己的证书,他们的童年还剩什么呢?

漫画向我们展示了两种完全不同的教育方式:一种是分分必争纯粹以分数至上为目标,另一种却是注重于孩子的点滴进步。我为后者击节叫好!

父母是孩子的启蒙老师,他们的一言一行无不潜移默化地影响孩子的成长。故父母要担当起人生导师的责任,在孩子的人生各方面为他们点亮明灯。而不是为了成为别人眼中羡慕的成绩优异生,成为自己口中骄傲的谈资。这种父母无疑是自私的,无疑是最懒怠、最没有用心关注孩子成长的。

千年的儒家文化为何能生生不息,历久弥新,屹立于世界文化之林?我想那便是孔老夫子的那一句“因材施教”化为春风沐阳,化为每个人心田里的一丝希望。孔子弟子三千,情形各异的人不胜枚举,但他却能以谆谆教诲培育出无数优秀的后辈。反观某些家长,抱怨自己孩子难管,将孩子的失误责任推向学校、老师,不免过于失职。三千弟子都能成长有素,何况一个孩子呢?

再者,教育绝不能粗暴行事。以理服人,以情动人,才是教育应有的生态。家长要学会具体问题具体分析,拒绝往规则、制度里框住孩子,要灵活变通,根据孩子的个性特点采取适当的教育方式,讲求“精准教育”,也不要在语言上抱怨责备孩子,恶语伤人三分寒,暖语人间四月天。多给予他们鼓励、支持,不但要善于做一个“批判者”,也要善于做一个“建设者”。

成长的塑造不单是由学识堆砌而成的。无知肤浅如“北大炫证女”,凭自己聪慧头脑与努力在大学内考过了大大小小各式各样的证件,但目的却是将证件铺在床上显示自己很有本事的照片,来哗众取宠,夺人眼球。你能说这是教育的成功范例吗?过多的“功利主义”“实用主义”已使他们迷失方向,让原本纯洁的求学心染上了“利欲色彩”。所以,父母更多的应该让孩子学会树立正确的人生观。因为那些公序良俗远比冷冰冰的知识重要。

莫让孩子成为机器,让他们成为一个有血有肉深入社会的人。莫让“懒政”使孩子走向深渊!

历年高考英语作文范文 第38篇

讨论的主题是:公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表所提供的信息,给报社写一封信,客观地介绍讨论情况。

60%的同学认为

40%的同学认为

1.不应该收门票

2公园是公众休闲的地方

3l如收门票,需建大门、围墙,会影响城市形象

1.应收门票,但票价不要太高

2.支付园林工人工资

3.购新花木

注意:1.信的开头已为你写好。

2.词数:100左右。

3.参考词汇:门票---entrance fee

Dear editor

I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. 60% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee do not meet people’s expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either at home or at work. If an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls. In the end a city will take on a bad look. 40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive. The money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees.

With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protect a park. Do we share the same opinion, dear editor?

历年高考英语作文范文 第39篇

As we all know, most of us middle school students feel somehow nervous whenever we’re taking an important exam. There is no doubt that exams are important to us students, but it’s more important to have a right attitude towards them. As a matter of fact, exams are no more than a means of evaluating, therefore, there is no need to worry too much about the results. Only studying hard very day and making good preparations for exams can we avoid suffering from the pressure of exams.

我们都知道,大多数的中学生都会感到紧张,每当我们参加一个重要的考试。毫无疑问,考试对我们学生来说很重要,但是对他们正确的态度更重要。事实上,考试不仅仅是一种评价手段,因此,不必过于担心结果。只有努力学习,做好考试的准备,才能避免了考试的压力。

We’d better go out for a walk or do some outdoor exercise before exams. Besides, having enough sleep can make us full of energy and make it possible for us to perform well in the exam, A hot bath or a cup of hot milk before going to bed night help you have a sound sleep.

在考试前,我们最好出去散步或做一些户外运动。此外,充足的睡眠能使我们充分的精力,使我们有可能表现良好,在考试中,一个热水澡或一杯热牛奶睡觉前的晚上,有助于你有一个健全的睡眠。

So, my suggestion is: don’t worry about exams, try to relax yourself.

所以,我的建议是:不要担心考试,尽量放松自己。

历年高考英语作文范文 第40篇

1. 时间与地点:4月10日,大青山(Daqing Mountain);

2. 活动的过程;

3. 你对于这次活动的评论。

注意: 1. 词数120左右。

2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a mountain-climbing on April 10. Hundreds of us took part in it.

It was a nice day. At 8:00 am, we gathered at the foot of Daqing Moutain and set out for the top in high spirits. All the way we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. When some fell behind, others would come and offer help. About 2 hours later, we all reached the top. Bathed in sunshine, we jumped and cheered with joy.

The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work, it also promoted the friendship among us. What a wonderful time!