雅思高分作文范文 篇1

Some people think the university education is to prepare students for employment. While we admit that preparation for employment is an important function of education, it is not the only one. We should see this issue with an all-sided view. In the perspective of society, education is for improvement. Students make use of what they have learned to create new theories and tools. This is the way in which our human society develops. And also, through education, government can teach people how to be appropriate citizens, thus in this way, people’s moralities and behaviors are constrained in a value system and the social stability can be maintained.

In the perspective of individuals, education can enrich personal lives. Through education, we can explore different cultures and customs. Thus in this way education can open our eyes and broaden our mind. And education can also meet interests of each student.

While of course, all the functions mentioned above have one common prerequisite: one can make a living in the first place. For this society is practical, many university students have studied for four years, but their ability to deal with practical things is too low to be acceptable. So education should provide the basic general knowledge to university students, so that they can be get employed and make a living. And if a nation wants to develop and to compete with other nations, it needs skilled workers to support economic development and to maintain the people creative, which can only be achieved through education.

So it has some sense to realize that students’ preparation for employment is the function of education, but it has far more function which should not be neglected. (280 words)

雅思高分作文范文 篇2

It is common for enterprises to have seniors as top executives nowadays. However, there is an argument that young people should also be offered the opportunities to be the leaders as the age should not be the glass ceiling that bars them from upper management in large corporations. From my perspective, I agree with this idea.

First of all, young leaders, especially those employed in high-technology companies, are easy to keep pace with the rapidly changing market. Admittedly, compared with senior employees, they do lack experience of the past, but facing this rapid shifting market, their inadequate experience can be in turn seen as an advantage, as being in the same age of the targeting customers,they can understand the current popular tendency and are less likely to be inhibited by self - consciousness. Therefore, they are able to absorb the latest information and use their lateral thinking to make adaptations to meet the demand,. Besides, young people have more abundant time and vigorous to be a leader. Being managers means catering to enormous tasks simultaneously, and as most young people have not been married and formed their families, they can devote themselves to their work and maximise their output, which is impossible for older people.

Undeniably, when facing an emergency or a dilemma, compared with the aged leaders, the young generation tend to be less responsible and considerable, resulting in impulsive decisions due to their immaturity. Consequently, organisations might be at risk. However, young candidates who have the potential to be the manager can be first recruited as the management trainee, and after having the professional training ranging from six months to five years, they are sure to have the capability to deal with diverse situations.

In conclusion, despite the defects of young managers, young people are eligible for leadership. Therefore, organisations should be encouraged to employ the young generation in top positions.

雅思高分作文范文 篇3

In recent years, there has been growing interest in therelationship between equality and personal people believe that individuals can achieve more inegalitarian societies. Others believe that high levels of personal achievement are possible only if individuals are free to succeed or fail according to their individual is your view of the relationship between equality and personal success?

平等社会个人成就大；放任自由发展的社会个人成就大。你认为呢?

In my opinion, an egalitarian society is one in which everyone has the same rights and the same opportunities. I completely agree that people can achieve more in this kind of society.

Education is an important factor with regard to personal success in life. I believe that all children should have access to free schooling, and higher education should be either free or affordable for all those who chose to pursue a university degree. In a society without free schooling or affordable higher education, only children and young adults from wealthier families would have access to the best learning opportunities, and they would therefore be better prepared for the job market. This kind of inequality would ensure the success of some but harm the prospects of others.

I would argue that equal rights and opportunities are not in conflict with people\'s freedom to succeed or fail. In other words, equality does not mean that people lose their motivation to succeed, or that they are not allowed to fail. On the contrary, I believe that most people would feel more motivated to work hard and reach their potential if they thought that they lived in a fair society. Those who did not make the same effort would know that they had wasted their opportunity. Inequality, on the other hand, would be more likely to demotivate people because they would know that the odds of success were stacked in favour of those from privileged backgrounds.

In conclusion, it seems to me that there is a positive relationship between equality and personal success.

雅思高分作文范文 篇4

My name is___. There are 4 people in my family. My father is a Chemistry teacher. He teaches chemistry in senior high school. My mother is an English teacher. She teaches English in the university. I have a younger brother, he is a junior high school student and is preparing for the entrance like to read English story books in my free time. Sometimes I surf the Internet and download the E‐ books to read.

Reading E‐ books is fun. In addition, it also enlarges my vocabulary words because of the advanced technology and the vivid animations。I hope to study both English and computer technology because I am interested in both of the subjects. Maybe one day I could combine both of them and apply to my research in the future.

阅读电子书很有趣。此外，它还扩大了我的词汇，因为先进的技术和生动的动画。我希望学习英语和计算机技术，因为我感兴趣的科目。也许有一天，我可以把两者结合起来，并应用到我未来的研究中。

雅思高分作文范文 篇5

1. 积累写作词汇

所以这里我说的积累写作词汇并不是让各位去可以去刻意去积累高级词汇，而是积累一些自己可以在写作里但是自己当时没有想到的词，或者想到了但是不会写的词

随便举个例子，剑10 Test 1 WRITING TASK 2 ：

我相信大家都知道，大作文第一段可以写成引入题目背景（改写）+表述自己观点

接下来一起来看看范文中的在第一段的第一句是如何引入题目背景的这句话的

It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age.

这句话说的：是孩子们在很小的时候就了解是非的区别是很重要的。

范文第一段第一句：One important stage in a child\'s growth is certainly the development of a conscience,which is linked to the ability to tell right from wrong.

这句话说的是孩子成长的一个重要阶段当然是良心的发育，这与辨别是非的能力有关。

大家再注意到我标注的-conscience良心，跟stage阶段

引入题目的背景的时候，把句子整个同义替换是很low的，范文里面就把区别是非对错可以理解成跟良心的功能有关；小的时候的确就是我们人生中的某个阶段，这样一换，引入题目背景就很自然的同时，还体现了你对题目背景的合理延伸。

所以写作中词汇并不是越高级越好，而是需要你恰当表达意思的时候有恰当的词汇进行表达，能做到就很厉害了，像范文中这些自己没想到用或者想到了不会写的词汇难道不值得你积累下来吗。

2. 积累好用的句型

这里我说的积累好用句型，并不是指非要各位通篇都能做到长难句，而是恰当的意思用恰当的句子进行表达就好了

比如，剑10 Test 1 WRITING TASK 2 范文中的这句话（题目还是上面）

To punish a very young child is both wrong and foolish,as an infant will not understand what is happening or why he or she is being punished.

惩罚一个年龄小的孩子是错误又愚蠢的，因为婴儿不明白发生了什么或为什么要惩罚他或她。

这个句子是由主句+原因状语从句构成，说明了惩罚小孩是错误又愚蠢的原因，因果关系显得有理有据。

那么as+句子表达原因的句型，大家就完全可以积累起来，不要碰上原因就统统写because...

3. 形成自己的写作框架

上面谈的词汇跟句型其实都是属于写作的细节，写作除了细节重要外，更加重要的是你的写作框架是否具有合理逻辑。

所以平时除了自己多写之外，记得多分析范文，形成一个自己的写作框架，比如我自己很喜欢的一个大写作框架就是分析Simon的范文形成的

个人见解，仅供参考，你杠你对

开头段：引入题目背景+明确表达自己的观点

主体段（2段）：核心论点-分论点（如有）-再展开论据-再重复核心论点（我觉得没必要，看自己）

注意：论据一定是可以去支持你论点的，别瞎套模版

结尾段：呼应开头段就行了，说白了，重申你的观点

请一定注意！！框架只是参考而已，个人有个人的喜好跟习惯！

最后自学党们，想要提升写作能力，除了积累写作词汇跟句型，多分析范文去形成自己的写作框架之外，还可以多参考高质量的免费公开课（主讲老师是曼切斯特大学语言学教授兼雅思前考官），直接学习大小作文的写法，好用的句型等等，学会了之后，自己多练习，写作不练习是不会有提高的，有条件的话找专业人士给你批改一下，提升得会更快。

雅思备考并不容易，尤其是像写作这种主观性题目，很多学校申请的时候还要看小分，就更加恶心了，所以各位心态放好，该多写就多写，不要让写作拖你出分的后腿。

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