托福独立写作范文(必备10篇)

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The next two months will witness the graduation of a huge number of college students inChina， triggering an urgent issue whether it is better to seek an interesting and challengingjob with less vacation than finding those jobs with more vacation but less fun. From myperspective， a challenging and interesting job matters more.

For one thing， mentally challenging jobs can keep employees’ mind sharp even long afterretirement. To put it more specific， even a mentally demanding job may stress workers outtoday； it can provide important benefits after retirement. “Based on data spanning 18 years， astudy suggests certain kinds of challenging jobs have the potential to enhance and protectworkers’ mental functioning in later life，” said by Gwenith Fisher， a faculty associate at theUniversity of Michigan Institute for Social Research. The research analyzed data on 4，182participants in the U-M Health and Retirement Study， which surveys a representative sampleof more than 20，000 older Americans every two years and the final result reveals people whohad worked in jobs with greater mental demands were more likely to have better memoriesbefore they retired and more likely to have slower declines in memory after retiring than peoplewho had worked in jobs with fewer mental demands. Accordingly， being engaged in achallenging and interesting job will benefit employees’ mental functioning.

For another thing， the more challenging the job is， the higher salaries employees will bepaid with. Generally speaking， a challenging job will require employees to master multiplecapabilities and techniques and to undertake more responsibilities. Thus， they will be paid withhigh salaries， making it possible for them to do whatever stirs up their interest. For instance，one of my friends named Jason works as a top software engineer in a renewed IT company inChina and he is well paid. Besides， his hobby is photography and travel in foreign countries. Onweekends or public holidays he often chooses to take photographs in different places of historicinterest and scenic beauty or travel abroad. In the near two years， he has traveled in manycountries in Europe and Southeast Asia and take a lot of beautiful pictures. Obviously，compared with average citizens in big cities who are busy in dealing with a variety of problemsin daily lives， Jason’s life experience can tell us that his high-paid job gives him chances to live amore leisure life during vacation.

Admittedly， if people choose to take a less-fun job with more vacation， they can spendmore time with their families and doing what they like. In this way， they will live a less-pressurelife. However， from what I believe， people should try their best to play to their strengths andtalents on the career path especially when they are young and a challenging job will requireemployees to be fully devoted.

To conclude， a challenging job with less vacation is superior to a job with more vacationbut less fun. (498 words)

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement？

In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

范文：

The Earth today faces many problems. Among these problems， the top three， in some people's perspective， are probably global warming， pollution and energy crisis. All three， if we really look into them， can be connected with the pervasive use of private cars. It is because of this， I agree with the statement that there will be fewer cars in twenty years comparing with today.

First of all， people will definitely use fewer cars. If we look at the global media， we are seeing an increasing consciousness on environmental problems. Be it the famous documentay by Al Gore， An Inconvenient Truth， or the "Earth One Hour" movement. They all indicate a global consensus： "We need to help the environment". So what's the easiest way to help？ Using fewer cars. According to a survey conducted by the Ministry of Environmental Conservation in China， more than 40 percent of carbon dioxide produced by individuals are from private cars. If the trend of eco-friendly consciousness continues to grow in the next 20 years， people will， without a doubt， use fewer and fewer cars. So， in a nutshell， the first reason why people will drive less in twenty years is because they will be more environmentally-concerned.

Another key aspect is that， in twenty years， there will be fewer people in the world. If there are fewer people in the world， of course there will be fewer cars. If we are sensitive to global trends， we can see that a lot of countries in the world are facing a decrease in population. The biggest contributors to population growth， China and India， are also experiencing a decrease in the rate of population increase. In 20 years， I am confident that there will be， without a doubt， fewer people in the world. In this case， there will be a decrease in the needs of transportation. So， it is logical to assume that there will be fewer cars in the world twenty years from now.

A final argument I want to make is based on the ever developing technology. In the past twenty years， we have seen tremendous innovations taken place in the field of transportation. From high-speed trains to cars that run on electric， there is simply no telling what might happen twenty years from now. Considering how much we have achieved in the past twenty years， it is not so improbable for me to say that we might not even need cars in the near future. Who's to say that we won't be traveling on more efficient vehicles？ Or maybe public transportation may become so convenient that we won't even consider using private transportation ever again？ The fact is， we cannot deny these possibilities for they are very likely to happen. In this light， I am definitely supportive of the view that there will be fewer cars in the future.

From my arguments above， I think I am very optimistic about the future. I believe that， in twenty years， we will be living in a society with much fewer cars. And I am looking forward to that future.

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科技带来的弊端

In terms of life quality， there is no question that technology has revolutionized our life. Yet we still cannot ignore the problems coming along with the progress. While we are enjoying the convenience of searching information online and the notifications from the calendar， we might receive an email accidentally sent by someone with evil intentions， which could cause some problems.

A ransomware， ， has been passed around online recently. People who have received this email and clicked the link would find that their important documents stored in the computer are locked and they are blackmailed for large amounts of bitcoin， a kind of virtual currency. In order to get these documents back， people have no choice but to pay bitcoin or the real money. As a result， these victims could lose thousands of dollars， some of which would even lose all the important documents no matter they choose to pay or not.

Imagine that a to-be graduate who has already finished the final paper suddenly lose his paper， or a doctor who is going to do an operation suddenly lose all the information of his patients. You can understand how bad the consequence is caused by ransomwares such as .

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托福综合写作：海洋生物灭绝

某一地点所有海洋生物在同一时间灭绝

阅读给出的三种观点：

1.海洋蒸发

2.致命病毒

boom在食物链中积累

听力逐一反驳：

1.海洋蒸发应该还会有一些物种残存，但化石中并没有看到

2.单一的病毒一般只针对特定的物种或是两个相联系的物种进行攻击，不可能同时灭绝这么多生物

3.化石上有些生物是食草的，不会受到毒素在小鱼体内积累的影响

版本二：

主题

Topic：发现了一大批ocean animals死在了一起 有几个theories

R&；L对照

Reading：

1、原来这块地方是个lagoon，因为地震啥的，会堵塞河口，动物就被渴死了；

2、一些virus导致他们死了，比如现在就有个virus影响了dolphine；

3、algae会分泌一些toxic，如果很多fish吃了就会发生toxic concentration，一些位于食物链高级的动物就会死。

Lecture：反驳

1、如果这个地儿的ocean water evaporate还会留下mineral，但是并没有发现mineral；

2、一个virus只能影响一个species，少数情况下它能影响两个closely related species，但是不可能同时影响mammals和fish species；

3、plant-eating species不会受影响，这些fossils里还发现了large mammals他们主要吃植物，那他们体内的toxic应该不足以导致他们死。

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托福独立写作模板

托福写作论证篇

1、模糊论证

Range from...

2、举例论证

●自己的例子

I can think of no better illustration than the example of my own visit to Singapore. Only after going shopping on Orchard road， the main shopping district in Singapore，did I realize what "a paradise for shopping”really was. Only after roaming in the City Hall，the financial center of Singapore， did I experience the quick pace of modern life. Only after lying on the beach of Sentosa did I know about the Singaporean typical way of spending leisure time.

●社会的例子

For example， on account of the advent of the technologically advanced society， employers tend to hire people equipped with a wide range of knowledge rather than the ones with limited knowledge.

3、数据论证

I can think of no better illustration than the statistic. Experts from

the Department of Sociology in Peking University pointed out that

the average sleeping time an adult has everyday， compared with 8

hours in the 1970s， has decreased t0 hours due to the busy

work and study.

4、引用论证(开头)

5、假想论证

托福写作语言篇

1、基本句型

●因果

On account of/owing to/due to+ N

For the reason that/as/since+句子

It is due to_____that

eg：It is due to his persistence and perseverance that he eventually reached his acme.(琨调句)

derive/arise/stem from来源于

eg：His success derives from his persistence and perseverance.

ascribe A to B归结于

eg： His success can be ascribed/attributed to his persistence and perseverance

●条件

A serves as a catalyst for B(our further success)

If/on condition that/provided that /as long as _____

●让步

Despite the fact that/regardless of

2、经典句型

●倒装

compete

1) Only via(by/through /with/when/after)_____do/did/can we_____

ef： Only after going to the beach of Hawaii will I know about American typical type of spending leisure time.

2) Hardly/Seldom/Scarcely can_____

ef： Hardly can we imagine a world/our life without /devoid of

3_) So +adj+主谓倒装+that_____

4) Not only主谓倒装but also_____

eg： Not only should education prepare children to compete not only do people care their economic needs，they but also want to meet their spiritual needs.

5) 0n no account主谓倒装(决不…)

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2017年托福独立写作范文

Rather than help their children with schoolwork， parents should help their children to work independently.

审题之后会发现这道题目是一个“应不应该”的题目，笔者推荐使用最简单的，“总分总结构”来写作。首先，提出自己的观点，即父母应该帮助自己的孩子独立完成作业。然后，分别阐述两个理由，分别是可以更好的掌握所学知识和可以培养独立解决问题的能力，最后总结。

范文如下

In current society， according to the survey conducted by a newspaper titled China Daily， the study burden on the shoulder of students is increasingly heavier， which has attracted widespread public attention. When it come to what parents can do to help their children’s study， many people， if not most， are strong believers of the claim that parents should finish their kids’ homework for the purpose of relieving the study pressure. However， as far as I am concerned， parents are supposed to guide their children to complete their homework independently， for having a better command of knowledge imparted in class and cultivating their independent thinking ability.

First and foremost， it is undeniable that finishing homework by themselves can help children better absorb the knowledge they obtained. As is known to all， the purpose of assigning homework to students is to review what they learned in the class. In other words， teachers will view their assignments as a yardstick to evaluate how well their students have absorbed the knowledge. For example， a history teacher may require his students to write a paper about the Independence War after briefly introducing the background and process of this war. Due to the lack of sufficient information about this subject， kids may turn to their parents for help. Some parents may do everything for their children， including collecting data， outlining the whole article and even finishing the paper. However， other parents may just provide some information sources and ask their kid to select relevant information and design the structure of the article. After finishing the paper， those who finish it independently have understood the whole process of Independent War， while those who do not complete by themselves forget what they learned quickly.

Furthermore， it is indisputable that doing assignment independently can foster children’s ability of solving problems on their own， which is of great importance to their future success in their work and college study. The childhood is a critical period in which children shape characteristics or personalities. If a kid is accustomed to seeking helping from others whenever they encountered setbacks or troubles， he is likely to become emotionally attached to others and will never achieve success. By contrast， those who have formed the habit of resolving problems by themselves have a greater chance to succeed. Take my friend， Thompson， as an example. Whenever Thompson asks their parents for help in the process of doing homework， his parents never directly give him the answer to the questions or do the homework for him. They usually guide Thompson to figure out the answer by himself and thus he formed a good habit of independent thinking. Later in his college study and work， he will always stand out because of his independent ability.

In the final analysis， judging from what has been discussed above， we can safely draw the conclusion that parents should help their children to finish their homework independently instead of finishing it for them， in order to grasp what they learned better and develop the ability of solving problem on their own.

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Life is loaded with various difficulties and hardship， especially for old people who areincapable of taking good care of themselves because of their poor physical quality. Therefore，among the three choices of helping young students in nearby primary school， helping people tofind new houses for rent and assisting old people for caring them， I definitely choose the lastone.

For one thing， because of being committed to their career， the middle-age can hardly takegood care of their parents. To address a sequence of job assignments， city employees， themajority of whom have turned to the middle age， are required to be immersed in their ordinary citizens as examples. When it comes to businessmen， dealing with thecomplicated relationship with their counterparts or consumers will lead them to be shortage oftime to accompany their families， given that all their time and energy are occupied. Speakingof policemen， to maintain stable social order and crack down on any happening or underlyingcrimes， they are supposed to be on duty at any time， making it impossible for them to caretheir families. And it is also an episode likely to be applied in the movie by the film maker thatpolicemen are woking on the investigation and cannot keep promises they make for theirfamilies ， impressing audiences again and again. As for the career of teachers， what theynormally do is either to prepare for their presentations or remedy their students’ ， the contemporary middle-age citizens cannot take good care of their parents andcollege students had better provide their help.

For another thing， the process of helping the old can cultivate college students’ sense ofresponsibility that matters in their future life and profession. Many more universities will， literally，decide whether to admit students by checking if there is any volunteering experience like takingcare of the old in a nursing home in their application materials. In an era of both highlydeveloped economy and technology， it tends to be easier for children to develop the unwantedbehaviors and unhealthy values and world outlook. Nowadays， people can often hear the Newsabout college students failing to graduate from schools because of their addiction to videogames and many overseas students catching the affluenza which refers to wealthy people wholike to show their richness by purchasing many unnecessary luxuries. Therefore， many youngpeople’s ideology has been distorted seriously and it is urgent to call on their sense ofresponsibility. And taking good care of the old can teach them a lot. For instance， they will beconscious of the fact that there is still a vulnerable group that needs to be assisted and theircontribution to the society can drive away the solitude of the old. Thus， they will increasetheir confidence in undertaking more social responsibilities.

Admittedly， some others may lay emphasis on the importance of helping the young sincethey are the future of a nation. From what I believe， it is hype since the education of youngchildren does not count on the help from college students. As for the statement that collegestudents should help others rent a house， that is ridiculous since there have been a widerange of choices for tenants among diverse Apps via the Internet. To conclude， helping theold can be of enormous benefits for both the old and the young.

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2017托福独立写作范文

Rather than help their children with schoolwork， parents should help their children to work independently.

审题之后会发现这道题目是一个“应不应该”的题目，笔者推荐使用最简单的“总分总结构”来写作。首先，提出自己的`观点，即父母应该帮助自己的孩子独立完成作业。然后，分别阐述两个理由，分别是可以更好的掌握所学知识和可以培养独立解决问题的能力，最后总结。

范文如下

In current society， according to the survey conducted by a newspaper titled China Daily， the study burden on the shoulder of students is increasingly heavier， which has attracted widespread public attention. When it come to what parents can do to help their children’s study， many people， if not most， are strong believers of the claim that parents should finish their kids’ homework for the purpose of relieving the study pressure. However， as far as I am concerned， parents are supposed to guide their children to complete their homework independently， for having a better command of knowledge imparted in class and cultivating their independent thinking ability.

First and foremost， it is undeniable that finishing homework by themselves can help children better absorb the knowledge they obtained. As is known to all， the purpose of assigning homework to students is to review what they learned in the class. In other words， teachers will view their assignments as a yardstick to evaluate how well their students have absorbed the knowledge. For example， a history teacher may require his students to write a paper about the Independence War after briefly introducing the background and process of this war. Due to the lack of sufficient information about this subject， kids may turn to their parents for help. Some parents may do everything for their children， including collecting data， outlining the whole article and even finishing the paper. However， other parents may just provide some information sources and ask their kid to select relevant information and design the structure of the article. After finishing the paper， those who finish it independently have understood the whole process of Independent War， while those who do not complete by themselves forget what they learned quickly.

Furthermore， it is indisputable that doing assignment independently can foster children’s ability of solving problems on their own， which is of great importance to their future success in their work and college study. The childhood is a critical period in which children shape characteristics or personalities. If a kid is accustomed to seeking helping from others whenever they encountered setbacks or troubles， he is likely to become emotionally attached to others and will never achieve success. By contrast， those who have formed the habit of resolving problems by themselves have a greater chance to succeed. Take my friend， Thompson， as an example. Whenever Thompson asks their parents for help in the process of doing homework， his parents never directly give him the answer to the questions or do the homework for him. They usually guide Thompson to figure out the answer by himself and thus he formed a good habit of independent thinking. Later in his college study and work， he will always stand out because of his independent ability.

In the final analysis， judging from what has been discussed above， we can safely draw the conclusion that parents should help their children to finish their homework independently instead of finishing it for them， in order to grasp what they learned better and develop the ability of solving problem on their own.

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题目

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement？

Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Sample Responses

范文

Nowadays more and more families have personal computers at home， and children are more likely to expose to the computers at a very young age. As a result， many computer games are available for children in recent years. Many people are concerned about this fact and they believe playing computer games is a waste of time. However， I couldn’t disagree with this view of point more since I believe playing computer games could somehow benefit children. First off， playing computer games offers children another way to meet more people and gain communication ability. Nowadays many computer games， such as World of War craft， need cooperation among lots of people. Children who involved in such kind of games have extra access to gaining social abilities. They can learn how to communicate efficiently with each other while playing. Furthermore， playing computer games could help to improve children’s intelligence. This means that children who play games may be cleverer than their peers and can learn more things without suffer. Many games available today， such as Angry Birds， really need some knowledge and deep thought so that you could complete the tasks. Under this circumstance， children can be better at solving problems and smarter in the future. What’s more， computer games can be a very good way for relaxation. Children is modern society usually have more pressure and are more burdensome. By playing computer games， they can forget their worries and relax themselves. Their mind will be refreshed and they may be better at their work. However， I have to admit that some children are just addicted to computer games and they waste their entire time sitting in front of the computers. In addition， there are many computer games which contain lots of violent scene which is harmful to children. Anyway， these problems can be solved by letting parents to supervise their children about what is the proper game to play. All in all， I draw the conclusion that computer games can benefit children by offering opportunities to gain social abilities， improving intelligence and relaxing. Computer games are good things to enrich a child’s life rather than ruin it.

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写作题目

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement？

At universities and colleges， sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

范文

Some people claim that universities and colleges should not spend a great deal of money on sports and social activities，as their budgets should prioritize classes and libraries. However， as educational institutions， universities and colleges have an obligation to provide a wide range of knowledge to their students to help them develop academically and socially.

More and more businesses require people who are not only specialists in their fields， but also skilled in social the rapidly changing environments of science and the economy， no task can be done by a single person. Given the needfor collaboration， social skills and team spirit are necessary qualities for any successful person. Clearly， sports and social activities in universities and colleges provide students with the perfect settings to practice their social skills. By playing football on a team or joining in a protest， for instance， students can develop a sense of belonging and experience team spirit， both of which may prove very important in building a career.

Aside from fostering social skills and team spirit， sports and social activities can greatly improve students’ need not play sports or participate in social activities at the expense of their academic study. Indeed， for some students， playing sports and joining in social activities are good stress reducers. Even the most enthusiastic people feel tired if they concentrate on one thing for too long. Frustrated and tired people can do nothing well if they do not recover from their bad situations. Students who have been frustrated in their academic work would be well-advised to play some sports or join in social activities.

Academic education will always be at the heart of a university. In universities， sports and social activities should by no means take the place of a focus on academic study. What I believe is that universities and colleges should spend adequate money on academics as well as sports and social activities. For instance， in the United States， almost all famous universities have plenty of sports teams and social groups， and universities provide adequate financial support with these events. None of these universities have weakened their academic standards because of social movements or sports.

For these reasons， I maintain that universities and colleges should spend enough money on academic education and social movements to prepare students for their future computer games can expand a child’s outlook. Some computer games that can be played on the Internet were devised by foreign companies. Playing these games gives children an excellent opportunity to communicate with “game friends” from all over the world， allowing them to learn about other countries and cultures.