大学英语对比类作文(通用27篇)

大学英语对比类作文 第1篇

The development of science and technology, is a majestic force pushing us back; the development of science and technology, is a spring breeze blowing a bright future; the development of science and technology, is the working people in beautiful sweat watered fertile soil, ah, in the development of science and technology, the future of the motherland is to light!

Once a year the spring came, we all have great expectations on the car, in the car on the scene can be regarded as successful! The scenery outside the window was unique, with a warm smell all over it. A car full of smiles was flying over the highway

Radar, military management. Just enter college, a thunderous roar in my ear: “. Two. Three. Four. Two. Three. One, four.” Its so neat, so steel. Again, a team as a team, hand in the dance, foot in the foot, Junzi how handsome `, neat, no trace of tiredness

In their rooms, its also militarized management. You look at the quilt, one piece, like tofu, cut. I really do not know what they used magic, the “soft” quilt into “hard” terrace.“ The most solemn flag raising ceremony to begin, only wearing a blue uniform uncles, holding a red flag, walked a steady step forward, to the podium, when the bright five-star red flag rose slowly, all eyes are condensed, with excited expression on everyones face.

What makes us wonder is the precise radar. You see that a frame was erected in front of us radar. The metal tube above the radar weaves a magic net.” It emits the wave of the battery and travels at the speed of light C. In the 30s of this century, radio technology made a major breakthrough, invented radar. Today, both day and night can detect distant radar is show in front of us, my heart is not caused by a feeling of admiration, what a great invention, perhaps this is the inevitable result of the development in science and technology!

Although we are a little tired today, we can see that the rapid progress of todays society is inseparable from the development of science and technology, but also adds to our strong interest in the military. With the development of science and technology, the shoulders of our generation are heavier!

大学英语对比类作文 第2篇

The development of modern technology has made peoples life more complex, so people should choose to have a simple and easy life without using technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

The advancement of modern technology is making peoples life more comfortable and at the same time less human. To those who enjoy the benefits of technology, there is no better time to be alive than now, but to others life has been increasingly complex and stressful. The issue is whether such new technological machines as computers and the Internet would be our servants forever or eventually could become our masters.

All kinds of inventions made possible by technology are designed to be the slaves of human beings, if human beings are not to be slaved by machines. Once upon a time, we were plain people, but that was before we began having relationships with technological systems. By getting involved with computerized machines, we could not help changing the way we live and the way we work, for better or for worse It can be realized that life is more complex because much of modern technology is not born to meet primary human needs, and many “unnecessary” inventions are producing negative effects on a living style that used to be relatively simple. Thus, there is an overwhelming feeling of complexity in the sense that machines act like humans and humans act like machines. Now that “intelligent” machines such as robots are widely applied to take the place of human beings because they are capable of doing many useful jobs, although making many people jobless. Those who cannot work with computers are disadvantaged and therefore helpless while the traditional skills and simple ways of life are fading away, never to return again.

Technology has turned this world into a different one full of wonders, some of them being too good to be true. For example, mobile phone is playing an important role in our social and professional lives, whereas the Internet has connected people at every corner on the planet and beyond. As a consequence, telecommuting may soon become a more common way of working as more people are doing part of their jobs from home. And so what? Actually people are no closer to feeling happy in various respects because such technological developments are destroying many basic values of simple and easy lifestyles. Computers in particular have made life less emotional since the more time people use the Internet, the less time they spend with human beings.

In sum, there are reasons to be worried about what will become of mankind as a whole facing an increasingly complex world in which they may enjoy all the conveniences of life and yet they do not feel any happier or wiser. Who knows that over-dependence on modern technology could not mean the beginning of the end of human sparks of creativity, spirit, compassion, love and understanding and other good things about a simple and easy life. In making peoples lives more enjoyable but more complex, technology seems as if sending plenty of blessings from heaven as well as sending plenty of evils from hell.

大学英语对比类作文 第3篇

没有细节就不可能有艺术作品，作品的题材无论多有意义，主题思想多正确，如果没有真实感人的细节，就无法给人以强烈的艺术感受。运用细节表现法刻画人物，首先要找到真实的细节。细节不真实，人物就不真，作品就必然失败。其次还要注意细节的选择，要选择那些最具有特征的。最能表现作品主题的细节。否则，就应该毫不吝惜地舍弃。

Bandingtroduction + review + 2 details the table below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories: A: Introduction: rewrite the question statement in your own words overview: point out which category is the highest each year and which is the lowest, of which the biggest change is the details: compare the categories, and then say what happened until the details: note What happened after the local call, compared with other categories. Finally, by comparing the figures in the bar chart and comparing the time spent by Britons on three different types of calls, it is clear that calls made through local landlines are the most popular type in terms of overall usage. The lowest number on the chart is mobile phones over the period shown, but the growth in minutes in this category is the most significant In the next four years, the use time of mobile phone is only about 100 million minutes, and the number of three types of calls is growing steadily.

With the increase of local call time using fixed line telephone, the number of these three types of calls will increase steadily The time reached a peak of 1 billion minutes, and then the number of this category dropped, but the number of other two types of telephone calls continued to rise. The number of domestic / international telephone calls exceeded 100 million minutes, while the number of mobile phones increased to about 100 million minutes.

中文翻译：

bandintroduction+review+2详细信息下表显示了英国电话通话的总分钟数（以十亿计），分为三类：a:引言：用你自己的话重写问题陈述概述：指出哪一类是每年最高的，哪一类是最低的，其中变化最大的是细节：比较中的类别，然后说出发生了什么，直到详细情况：注意本地电话以后发生了什么，与其他类别进行对比。最后，对比条形图中的数字，比较英国人在三种不同类型电话上花费的时间，很明显，就总体使用情况而言，通过本地固定电话拨打的电话是最受欢迎的类型，在所示的整个时期内，图表上最低的数字是移动电话，但这一类别的用户分钟增长最为显著，在英国，本地电话的用户分钟总数刚刚超过亿分钟，相比之下，国内或国际电话的用户分钟数约占这一时间总量的一半，在接下来的四年中，手机的使用时间仅为亿分钟左右，三种类型的电话的数量都在稳步增长，随着使用固定电话的本地通话时间的增加，这三种类型的通话时间达到了10亿分钟的峰值，之后这一类的数字下降了，但其他两种类型的电话通话量继续上升，国内/国际座机通话分钟数超过亿分钟，而手机的数字则上升到亿分钟左右。

我家是一个幸福的三口之家，家庭收入不是很高，但是我很幸福。有时候我想要一些东西，父母却因为太贵不给我买；有时候我放假了想出去旅游，父母会因为没时间不带我去；有时候我学习成绩下滑，父母还会训斥我。但我从不会感到生活不幸福，因为我会从对比中感受幸福。

有时候我要的东西父母不给我买，一方面是因为贵，而另一方面会因为不实用，但父母会每过一段时间请我出去吃一顿饭，因为父母认为吃得好些、多些是对我有好处的，能让我长得更好、更快。就这样，我虽然没有得到想要的东西，但我觉得我很幸福，因为我从和流浪人员的对比中感到幸福。不管在烈日炎炎的夏天，还是在寒风刺骨的冬天，我都会在不同的地方见到一些不同的行乞人员，他们不是因为不想靠自己的双手去劳动，而确实没有这个能力，他们大都是老弱病残。我碰见他们时，都会给他们一些零钱和食物，他们这一天可以吃饱了，但以后呢？他们以后还会过挨饿、吃不饱的日子。和这些流浪人员一对比比，我就觉得自己真幸福，还能吃到香喷喷的饭菜，所以我就不想要那些东西了，因为对比以后，我才发现只要能吃饱就很幸福。

有时候我要出远门旅游，但父母会因为没时间、工作忙而不带我去，但父母就算工作再忙，我每天还都能看见父母，晚上和他们一起吃饭、一起娱乐。所以我虽然不能出去旅游了，但我觉得很幸福，因为我和孤儿院的小朋友对比后，我感觉到了幸福。孤儿院的小朋友根本不知道什么是旅游，他们可能就连爸爸、妈妈是什么样子也不知道。他们没有人爱，没有亲人，更没有和别的孩子一样和父母出去玩、团聚的快乐可言。和这些孤儿院的孩子们一对比，我就觉得自己真幸福，还可以和父母团聚、在一起，所以我就不想出去旅游了，因为对比后我才发现只要能和父母在一起就很幸福了。

有时候我会因为学习太累而不想学习，从而学习成绩下滑，父母会因为这而训斥我，甚至还会打我两巴掌，但过后就是父母的鼓励和表扬。虽然我被父母骂了，并挨了两巴掌，但我觉得我很幸福，因为我和战争国家的同龄人的对比中，我感受到了幸福。在战火连天的国家不知何时就会有一枚导弹击中教学楼，使一个个生命就此结束，就算你是幸运者没有被打死，但你也会被卷入这场战争，做一名“童子军”，每天迎接你的将是枪林弹雨，别说能坐在宽敞明亮的教室里上课了，就算能活下来就是上帝对你的恩点了。他们不是不想上学，而是条件不允许，在教室里上课简直就是奢望，他们是多么想听到父母和老师的教诲啊！可是，父母是死是活他们自己也不知道，他们只能默默地祈祷。和他们一对比，我就觉得自己很幸福，还能在宽敞明亮的教室里上课，还能听到父母和老师的声声教诲，所以我便不怕累，好好学习了，因为对比后我才发现这点苦算什么呢？能每天上课、获得知识、听父母教导就是很幸福的了。

我们现在不能再对现在的生活抱怨什么了，我们不能再奢望什么了。我们要立足于根本，立足于社会，立足于全世界，用对比来感受幸福，来审视我们的所作所为，来反醒我们的要求和抱怨。所以不要再提要求了，不要再怕累了，不要再抱怨了。从对比中感受幸福，会得到更多的幸福！

1. In the first place,. In the second place,.

首先，。其次，。

2. First,. Second, .

首先，。其次，。

3. To begin with, . Secondly,. Last but not least,.

首先，。其次，。最后但并不是最不重要的，。

4. The first reason is that. The second one is. The third is.

第一个原因是。第二个原因是。第三个原因是。

5. First of all, . Secondly, . Furthermore, .

首先，。其次，。另外,。

6. For one thing, . For another, .

一方面,。另一方面，。

7. Firstly, . Secondly, . Thirdly, .

首先，。其次，。再次，。

8. Another reason why I disagree with the above statements is that I believe.

我不同意上述观点的另一个原因是我认为。

对比法

对比法是通过正反两方面的比较来阐释主题的方法。中间段中对比法的运用一般是先揭示图片内涵，再从正反两方面论证图片的内涵。对比法常用的素材有：

1. The advantages gained inoutweigh/are much greater than the advantages we gain from .

从中获取的优势远远超过我们从中获取的。

2.  bear(s) a close/striking resemblance to .

与极为相似。

3. On the one hand, . On the other hand,.

一方面,。另一方面,。

4. Similarly/Likewise/In the same way,.

与之相似地/同样，。

5. Although enjoy(s) a distinct advantage,.

尽管有明显优势，但是。

6. Many students like. Among them there are two different attitudes to. Some of them think that . Others, however, don't think so. They feel that.

许多学生喜欢。关于他们有两种不同的观点。有人认为。而另外一些则不赞同这种看法。他们认为。

7. Nothing/Few things can approach/equal/match.

没有什么能与相似/相等/相比。

8. Indeed, carries more weight than when is concerned.

的确，就而言，的重要性要超过。

9. Serious as the problem may be, it pales in comparison with.

这个问题可能很严重，但与相比就微不足道了。

10. In comparison/contrast, .

比较而言/对比起来，。

11. Indeed/Certainly,   play(s) a more/less important role when compared with .

的确/当然，与相比，的影响要大/小得多。

12. Despite the fact that most of them like , I would like to choose to .

尽管事实是他们中大多数人喜欢，我还是倾向于。

13. When the advantages and disadvantages are compared/weighed, the conclusion/finding is quite obvious/self-evident.

比较一下优缺点，结论就不言而喻了。

14. There is no consensus among people as to. Some people suggest that , while others argue that. I agree with the latter/former.

人们并未就达成一致意见。一些人建议，而另一些人则认为。我赞成后者/前者。

15. People differ greatly in their attitudes toward this problem. Some maintain that. Others, on the contrary, hold the opinion that. Personally, I stand on the side of.

人们对于这个问题的态度差异很大。有人认为。与此相反，另外一些人认为。就我个人而言，我站在这一边。

16. For most people today, have/has become their main source of . But as for me, should be regarded as a better source.

如今大多数人将作为的主要来源。但就我而言，

应被看作一种更好的来源。

17. may be superior to, but it poses problems for those who.

可能比更好一些，但它会给那些的人带来问题。

18. Different people have different ideas about. Some people take it for granted that . On the contrary, some other people think .

关于的观点因人而异。有人想当然地认为。相反，其他人则认为。

19. This case has aroused echoes throughout the country with more and more people following its lead, but ideas about it vary widely. Those who oppose/object to/are against it argue/hold that , but people who advocate/support/are for it maintain/assert/claim that.

随着越来越多的人加入它的行列，这一事件已经在全国引起了巨大反响。然而，人们对此的观点却迥然不同。反对者认为，但支持者则宣称。

20. People differ in their opinions on . Some of them believe that, while others deem that.

 人们对持有不同的看法。有些人认为,而有些人则认为。

21. Many surveys show that people in increasing numbers are beginning to realize that. Meanwhile, many people still live under the traditional idea that.

许多调查显示，越来越多的人开始意识到。同时，仍有许多人持传统观点，认为。

举例法

举例法是指通过列举事例或具体细节使主题句的抽象含义具体化，进一步说明主题句所表达的思想的方法。举例法能增强说服力和条理性。引出例子常用的素材有：

1. From my everyday experience and observation I can list several examples that defend the statement that .

根据我的日常经验和观察，我可以举出几个例子来证明这一论述。

2. There are many instances supporting my opinion.

有许多例子可以证明我的观点。

3. Perhaps the most important example of is.

有关的最重要的例子可能是。

case in point is . 一个恰当的例子是。

 for example. 以为例。

6. This is a concrete example concerning.

这是一个有关的具体例子。

7. Nothing could be more obvious/apparent than the evidence that.

再没有比更明显的例子了。

8. I can think of no better illustration of this idea than the example of .

要说明这个问题，是我能想到的最好的例子。

9. The latest surveys conducted by show/reveal/demonstrate/indicate that.

由开展的最新调查显示,。

10. No one can deny the fact that .

没有人可以否认的事实。

11. Talking about , the first thing that may occur to you and me seems to be.

说到，我们首先想到的似乎就是。

12. A common example, which is frequently cited, is .

一个被普遍引用的例子是。

13. Instances of the same sort might be quoted easily, but this will be sufficient to show that.

类似的例子不胜枚举，但这一个就足以说明。

14.  History abounds with the example of.

历史上有许多方面的例子。

15. The following example best illustrates the idea that .

下面这个例子很好地说明了。

16. As one writer/scientist/psychologist wrote/commented/pointed out/noted,.

正如一位作家/科学家/心理学家所写/说/指出的，。

17. It is a commonly accepted fact that.

是一个被普遍接受的事实。

18. This is a typical/striking/notable illustration/example of .

这是的典型例子。

19. To the already familiar examples/facts, a few more/a number of other examples/facts can be added.

除了这些已经熟悉的例子/事实，我们还可以举出一些/许多其他的例子/事实。

举例说明

1) When it comes to whether the university campus should be open to tourists, as more and more people list famous university as tourist attractions, there is no complete agreement among people. 2) Some people take it for granted that the university campus should

embrace tourists across the country. 3) However, others maintain that the university campus should be closed to tourists.

4) Those people who hold the former opinion believe that refusing tourists is contradicting universities proclaimed spirit of openness. 5) In addition, as a public place, no university has the right to reject taxpayers to enter its grounds. 6) However, sill others advocate the latter opinion. 7) They argue that too many tourists will add a burden to the security department of the university. 8) Besides, they hold that these tourists will destroy the quiet environment and influence students’ study.

9) Weighing up these two arguments, I prefer the former opinion.

10) For one thing, it enables high school students to get a general understanding of the university and stimulates them to study hard. 11) For another, a university should be a public place which imparts the spirit of openness. 12) Taking above-mentioned factors into consideration, I may reasonably conclude that the university campus should welcome all tourists.

The advantage of driving BMW lies in the feeling. It can let you experience the excellent driving control of BMW, bring you great driving pleasure and improve active safety. Choosing BMW is also a symbol of identity and grade, and also a symbol of humanized design of successful people.

What brings you is the core of BMW Concept: one of the most famous is the in-line six cylinder engine The biggest difference between BMW and other cars in the same class is the shape of the engine. Most of BMW's series are in cylinder, whether four or six cylinders are linear. The automobile technology generally can not achieve the front and rear: weight ratio, which enhances the stability of the vehicle, but also helps to improve the speed.

The cost of this technology is quite high Most of his cars are w, which can lead to a greater contrast between the front and rear cars, which is one of the biggest features of BMW.

中文翻译：

驾驶宝马的优势在于感觉，可以让你体验到宝马卓越的驾驶操控性，给你带来力量极大的驾驶乐趣的同时，也提高了主动安全性选择宝马也是身份和品位的象征，也是成功人士人性化设计的象征，带给你的是宝马理念的核心：乐趣之一最著名的是直列六缸发动机现在使用的nn比（mercedesbenz）同级别宝马和其他车最大的区别就是发动机的外形，宝马的大多数系列都是缸内的，是四缸还是六缸是直线的，汽车技术上一般不能实现车头和车尾：重量比，增强了车辆的稳定性，同时也有助于车速的提高，这种技术的成本相当高，其他车大部分是W，可以导致前后车对比度更大这是宝马最大的一个特点。

My type A, type B attitude (type A) shows your understanding of the symbolism of the following pictures. Take a specific example and give your suggestions on the best way to overcome the crisis. As the above figure shows, people are generally divided into two types: pessimists and optimists.

We can see in a picture some people with long faces, frustrated, counting the nights in the shadow, and In another picture, happy people are enjoying the starry night. In contrast, remember, it's not bad things that determine our mentality, but the way we look at it. An example is the recent outbreak of the SARS crisis.

Of course, apart from most parts of China, it has brought us a lot of losses. Some people's health has been damaged, some people have even lost their lives. Our economy has been temporarily frustrated and slowed down.

However, we still learn a lot from it. We are more concerned about our health and environment than ever before. We live in another world.

We have tried and constantly improve our mechanisms to deal with unexpected crises. These lessons and other teachings are at the cost of blood and tears. Hard work and sweat are benefiting us and will continue to make them Thanks to us and generations of Chinese.

The best way to overcome the setbacks brought about by the crisis is to always hold a positive outlook on life. As a famous ancient Chinese concept said, if we can remember the suffering, if we have not forgotten the lessons of the past, we are all good teachers, and we have experienced hardships, then our pain will not be unrequited, and we will adhere to the difficulties optimistically.

中文翻译：

我的A型B型态度（A型）展示你对下面图片象征意义的理解举一个具体的例子，并给出你关于克服危机的最佳方法的建议正如上图所揭示的，人们一般分为两种类型：悲观者和乐观者，我们可以在一张图片中看到一些人们，长着脸，心灰意冷，在阴影下数着夜晚，而另一幅图中，快乐的人们在享受星夜。对比一下，记住，不是坏事决定了我们的心态，而是我们看待它的方式很重要一个例子就是最近爆发的非典危机当然，除了中国大部分地区，它给我们带来了很多损失，有些人健康受损，有些人甚至丧命，我们的经济暂时受挫和减速。但是，我们还是从中吸取了很多教训，我们比以往任何时候都更关心我们的健康和环境我们生活在另外一个世界里，我们已经尝试并不断完善我们的机制，以应对意外的危机，这些教训和其他教训都是以流血、流泪为代价的，辛劳和汗水正在造福我们，并将继续造福于我们和几代中国人。

克服危机带来的挫折的最好办法就是始终抱着积极的人生观，正如中国古代一个著名的观念所说的那样，如果我们能牢记苦难，过去的教训如果没有忘记，对我们大家都是很好的老师我们经历过的磨难，那么我们的痛苦就不会得不到回报，乐观坚持困难。

Fujianese people are open. If someone asks me where your hometown is, Fuji people are proud to say yes. I have loved her since I was a child.

She used to be economically backward, but now with the implementation of the open policy, she has developed a lot. In recent years, great changes have taken place in my hometown. New buildings have been built, people's living standards have been greatly improved, especially in the development of agriculture and industry, On the street, you can often see people from all over the world to conduct business, trade or scientific and technological information exchange.

If you want to get in touch with them but do not understand foreign languages, obviously, the open policy requires more people who are proficient in foreign languages. It is also clear that English, as the most widely used language, has become more useful than anyone else. If I can study in University, I will choose English as my major.

Many parents' friends suggested that I choose a foreign trade college. The reason is : after graduation from such a college, I will get a high salary job, which will give me the opportunity to work abroad. However, I decided to choose the English Department of Fujian Normal University.

It is said that teachers are engineers of human soul. People often compare children to flowers, while teachers are gardeners who plant these flowers. I realized from my own perspective that without the help of teachers, I could not have any progress experience.

I thank my teachers for their dedication to the realization of the four modernizations. I want to study all the time. I want to be an English teacher.

I will try my best to be a qualified teacher and help cultivate more builders of the socialist motherland. I believe that with more people understanding foreign languages, the open policy will be implemented succesully and my hometown Fujian will be more prosperous. ④ Nevertheless, Fujian will become more prosperous.

③ Love [cause] n. ④ Prosperity [PR & SP R S] a seesaw model, but my hometown Fujian will be more prosperous.

中文翻译：

福建人开放，如果有人问我你的家乡在哪里人自豪地回答是的，我从小就爱她她她过去经济落后，但现在随着开放政策的实施，她发展了很多，这几年来，我的家乡发生了巨大的变化，新的建筑拔地而起，人民生活水平大大提高，农业和工业的发展更是如此，在街上，你经常可以看到来自世界各地的人们来进行商业贸易或科学技术信息交流，如果你想和他们取得联系，但不懂外语，显然，开放政策需要更多精通外语的人同样清楚的是，英语作为最广泛使用的语言，已经变得比任何人都有用。福州市第二中学毕业班的一个学生，如果我能在大学学习，我会选择英语作为我的专业。很多父母的朋友建议我选择一所外贸学院。

原因很简单：毕业后从这样一个学院，我会得到一份高薪的工作，这将给我出国工作的机会。然而，我决定选择福建师范大学的英语系。据说老师是人类灵魂的工程师，人们常常把孩子比作花朵，而教师则是种植这些花的园丁，我是从自己的角度认识到的没有老师的帮助，我不可能有任何进步的经验。

我感谢我的老师们，他们为实现四个现代化而献身的精神，我要一直学习。我想当一名英语教师，我会尽力做一名合格的教师，帮助培养更多的社会主义祖国的建设者相信随着更多的人懂外语，开放政策一定会成功地实施，我的家乡福建也会更加繁荣。④①掌握了②尽管如此，福建也会变得更加繁荣。

③热爱[事业]n。xxx[pr&sp r s]一种跷跷板式的模式，但是，我的家乡福建会更加繁荣。

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A Good Major or a Good University

There is no consensus of opinion among people as to the choice between a good major or a good university before college enrollment. Some people who are in favor of the idea of having a good major hold that it can ensure one’s future success. For one thing, a good major, even in a common university, can help its students become rare talents, thus gaining in advantages for future competition. For another, a good major boasts various exclusive learning recourses which makes it highly possible for students to further their education. Therefore, a good major is more important.

However, those who insist on choosing a good university argue that graduates from famous universities are popular in talent market. In their opinions, a good university can give students confidence, which is very helpful in their study and future work. In addition, a good university has a set of educating system, incomparable with common university. Thus it is wiser to choose a good university.

In my viewpoint, a good university should be my only choice. If there is a chance, who doesn’t want to enter Bejing or Qinghua, Harvard or Yale? That is to say, a good university is worthy of every effort. In a word, a good university is of great importance in one’s future development.

在星期六上午，我要去大剑桥参加全国英语技能大赛，听说奖品丰厚我就禁不住涌起喜悦之情但是我又有些紧张。

早晨起来我把稿子背了下来，直到自己感到满意为止。走在路上我的心怦怦地跳。

大剑桥到了，那还是以前得到大剑桥吗？楼梯旁、门口前、楼道上......站着寻到老师，胸前戴着：全国英语技能大赛。我想不会这么隆重吧！我紧张地，觉得心要跳出来了。

我正在侯考场等着看着一队队的同学拿着选手的编号牌走出去，回来时，有的拿着晋级证书回来，而有的愁眉苦脸。

当我进入考场时，心跳加速自己坐在椅子上，看着他们一个个流利的背下稿子，我觉得我很没用。

该我时，我深呼吸三次，嘴里唠叨着不紧张、不紧张、不紧张。我开始满脸通红，紧张地背下来。但是又看见了他们和蔼的样子，我放下心来，流畅的把自己的稿子背下来。我还是那么紧张，因为评委要发晋级证了，当评委念到我的名字之后，我的脸想笑开了花一样，我像把一块沉重的石头放下来了。

在比赛时我是那么紧张，发成绩是那么开心，就像是两个不同的我。今天我战胜了自己了弱点，把恐惧和害怕远远抛在一边，使我给自信。

关键词：评价理论；学术论文摘要；对比分析

1.引言

一直以来，学术论文写作是我们英语学习得一个重要环节。摘要是论文的缩影，是一篇论文的重要部分。因此，本文试图从评价理论的角度入手，通过对比分析英语专业研究生毕业论文和国际期刊上的论文摘要的评价资源实现形式以及分布情况，考察二者的异同，以期对学术论文写作提供一些有益的启示。

2.评价理论及其基本框架

评价系统（The Appraisal Systems） 是对系统功能语言学的新发展。系统功能语言学以系统功能语法为基础。评价理论是在20世纪90年代对澳大利亚新南威尔士的中学和其他场所语文水平研究的基础上发展起来的。该研究由Martin指导，Caroline Coffin，Rick Iedema，Henrike Korner，David Rose，Robert Vee 和Peter White 参与。这项研究是“写得得体”（Write It Right）科研项目的一部分。评价理论包括三大次系统：态度，介入和级差。三大次系统又可以次系统化。

态度系统指对文本，人类行为和现象所作出的判断。态度有积极和消极之分。任何句子都传递者积极和消极的评价。态度可以明确或者含蓄的表达。态度是指向文化的并与读者的意识形态相关。态度可以通过表品质的词来表达，如happy；可以通过心理过程和行为过程来表达，如like； 通过情态状语表达，如happily。态度包含三个系范畴：情感系统、判断系统和鉴赏系统。判断系统又可分为社会评判和社会约束。鉴赏系统又可分为：反应、构成和价值。

级差系统是对态度介入的程度的分级资源，包含语势和聚焦。语势有强势和弱势之分，聚焦有明显和模糊之分。级差可以通过一些表程度的词来实现，如 some，plausible等。

3.语料

4.研究结果及分析

本研究分别从三个次系统对语料进行分析：态度，介入，级差。首先对态度展开对比分析。

基于态度的对比分析

态度有明确和含蓄的表达，本论文只关注明确的态度词汇表达。二语料库都含有较多的态度资源，如例（1）中斜体部分显示。

（1）…this distinction has regarded as insignificant || （attitude： appreciation）…

基于介入的对比分析

介入资源表达的是声音的来源。介入系统包含对话扩展和对话紧缩。对话扩展包含包容和归属；对话紧缩包含宣言和弃言。首先考察对话扩展展开对比分析。

二者都采用较多的包容和归属资源来表达自己的观点，如（3）和（4）中粗体部分显示。

（2）mothers/fathers of twins or who may || （engagement： entertain） be strangers…

在对两语料库的分析中发现二者都采用的弃言资源区别不大。所以这里只针对宣言资源进行分析。二者采用的宣言资源都相对较少，比如例（3）中粗体部分显示。

（3）…hedge surely || （engagement： concur） has an effect on language.

期刊学者使用的宣称资源要远远大于学生；而学生使用的支持资源则较多。这说明，学生在表达结论时更倾向于使用支持。

基于级差的对比分析

（4）The conclusions tend to be more frequent || （graduation： force）…

5.结语

总之，将本文所做的对比分析应用于xxx文的写作教学中，让学生学会xxx文摘要评价资源的使用规律，以提高撰写英文论文摘要的能力。

参考文献

[1] Halliday，M. A. K. （1994）. An Introduction to Functional Grammar. London： Edward Arnold Publishers Ltd.

[2] Martin，J. R. & White，P. R. R. （2005）. The Language of Evaluation： Appraisal in English. London & New York： Palgrave Macmillan.

[3] xxx. （2004）. 体裁分析与英汉学术论文摘要语篇.《外语教学》. （2），32-36.

[4] xxx. （2004）. 评价理论：在话语分析中的应用和问题.《外语研究》. （5），1-6.

这几天军训，许多人说累，但我认为：这些累，值。因为我在对比中悟出了很多东西。

第一，通过对比能更清晰地理顺一件事。比如，许多人都认为读书苦，读书累。读书累吗？累！军训累吗？累！但我问你，哪个更累呢？我想只要是经受过军训的人，大多数人会毫不迟疑地回答：军训更累！其实，如果我们的思维再拉长一点点，就会明白，读书苦，军训更苦，生活最苦。既然这样，在我们还没有承受生活最苦的时候，就不要装腔作势地抱怨读书的苦了。这点苦，与以后生活的苦想比，算得了什么！

第二，通过对比能更清晰地看透一个人。比如，教官不苟言笑，刚开始我们给他贴的是“粗暴”的标签。后来发现他在“军容军姿”的训练中，会细心地帮我们理平翻卷的衣领，会悄悄地扶正我们歪斜的帽檐。比如，父母和孩子原本彼此嫌弃，既相爱也相杀，却在共同应对军训的“苦难”中，达成了难得的共识，尤其是被军训折腾的我们，回到家，“意外”地发现了父母真的爱我们。

第三，通过对比能更清晰地明白一个理。比如，努力不一定会成功，但努力一定会让你无愧于心。你是每次训练都全心投入的那个，但你不一定是最优秀的那个。你是练得最勤奋的那个，但你不一定是最标准的那个。但至少，你的心是安然的，你的眼神是坦然的，即使结果不如人意，你也能平静地接受。

我学到的虽然不多，但我认为这些很真实，很正确。所以，我觉得这次军训，有对比，没伤害。

现如今的社会都充满着“对比”，成绩高低决定择校的主动与被动，家与家的相比决定幸福指数，对比可化为动力，也可使人一蹶不振。

xxx说：“三人行必有我师焉，择其善者而从之，其不善者而改之”。对比可以使一个人认识到与其他人的差距，也可以发现自身的优点，发扬并保存坚持。适量的对比不管是对人还是对己都是有益而无一害的，不要低估别人，更不能够看高自己。

xxx的《阿房宫赋》中，以阿房宫的兴建和毁灭，大肆的讽刺了xxx统治的穷奢极欲，并借古讽今，阐述了天下兴亡的道理。以史为鉴才能让往后过的更好，汲取往日的教训才能够xxx贵，由此可见，生活中不可缺少对比，成绩的对比可以让人知道自己的优势和缺点，才能取长补短，才能进步。

在很多诗词中同样也存在着对比，《马嵬》中的“此日xxx同驻马，当时七夕笑牵牛。如何四纪为天子，不及xxx有莫愁”两句诗词就借用了两次对比，先是对比从前的恩爱情形到现在的天地永隔来批判皇上的昏庸无能，再是将天子与平常百姓的生活做对比，讽刺了天子即使高高在上却不如凡人自在，没有对比不知差距，知耻而后勇才能够进步。

但有时候，对比也不是一件好事，物极而必反，如果对比成了炫耀和攀比，那就是一件坏事情。现如今，学校出现了攀比之风，比名牌比价格比数目比穷富，这些不正之风日益增长，很多学生嘴里都流露出攀比，这样不仅影响学习还会使家庭负担变重，有些家庭并不算富裕，但是孩子却无比攀比，造成家庭压力过大，这对任何家庭都是有害的。对比可知差距，也可惹祸上身。

我们应该把对比降到适当的程度，多益而无害，对比固有好处，但需要度。

心中有一把尺，量准自己也量准别人，对比适量可以使人进步使人勇敢，对比过量便是害人害己，多一些正能量，让对比走进你的生活但却不浓墨重彩。

大学英语对比类作文 第4篇

考研英语作文经典例句：对比和比较

1) Of all American cities, San Francisco is considered by many to be by far the most beautiful.

2) Jobs and work do much more than most of us realize to provide happiness and contentment.

3) We are much less conscious of the extent to which work provides the more crucial(关键)psychological well-being that can make the difference between a full and an empty life.

4) Work is more than a necessity for most human beings; it is the focus of their lives, the source of their identity and creativity.

5) Rather than a punishment or a burden, work is the opportunity to realize one’s potential.

6) Few pastimes bring a family closer together than gathering around and listening to mother or father read good story

7) Man differs most from all the other animals in his ability to learn and use language but we still do not know exactly how this is done.

8) Generally speaking(In general), young people are less conservative(保守)than old people.

9) The way the brain works is far more complicated than they had thought.

10) The more scientists find out, the more questions they are unable to answer.

11) Many Americans choose to travel by car rather than by any other means of transportation.

12) Worse perhaps was the idea of Saturday afternoon cricket.

13) There is no surgical patient I cannot treat competently, treat just as well as or better that any other surgeon.

14) Social customs are different from what they used to be fifty years ago.

15) He has to feel that he’s good as and probably better than any other surgeon in the world.

16) Behavior which may be considered quite strange in one culture is often looked upon as completely normal in another.

17) It is as hard to pass her by without giving her some money as it is to ignore the collection box in church.

18) It is as morally hard to turn her away as it is a lost dog.

19) Attitudes towards daydreaming are changing in much the same way that attitudes towards night dreaming have changed.

20) We accept the authority of our parents when we are young, but as we mature we may begin to question their advice.

大学英语对比类作文 第5篇

1. When asked about ——,differentpeople will offer different opinions.

2. Some people take it forgranted that——.

3. In their opinion, ——.

4. Besides ——

5. However, others hold——.

maitain——

up these arguments, Iam for——

9. For one thing——. anther,——

instance,——

, as stated above——

1．开门见山直入主体，表明对某事人们的不同看法。

2．提出观点一。

3．观点一的理由一。

4．观点一的理由二

5．提出观点二。

6. 观点二的理由一。

7.观点二的理由二。

8 我的观点。

9.个人观点理由一。

10. 个人观点理由二。

11. 举例说明。

12.综上所述再次强调自己的观点。

大学英语对比类作文 第6篇

选择大城市英语作文

‘avoid the rush-hour’ must be the slogan of large cities the world over。 if it is， it’s a slogan no noe takes the least notice of。 twice a day， with predictable regularity， the pot boils over。 wherever you look it’s people， people， people。 the trains which leave or arrive every few minutes are packed: an endless procession of human sardine tins。 the streets are so crowded， there is hardly room to move on the pavements。 the queues for buses reach staggering proportions。 it takes ages for a bus to get to you because the traffic on the roads has virtually come to standstill。 even when a bus does at last arrive， it’s so full， it can’t take any more passengers。 this whole crazy system of commuting stretches man’s resources to the utmost。 the smallest unforeseen event can bring about conditions of utter chaos。 a power-cut， for instance， and exceptionally heavy snowfall or a minor derailment must always make city-dwellers realize how precarious the balance is。 the extraordinary thing is not that people put up with these conditions， but that they actually choose them in preference to anything else。

large modern cities are too big to control。 they impose their own living conditions on the people who inhabit them。 city dwellers are obliged by their environment to adopt a wholly unnatural way of life。 they lost touch with the land and rhythm of nature。 it is possible to live such an air-conditioned existence in a large city that you are barely conscious of the seasons。 a few flowers in a public park(if you have the time to visit it) may remind you that it is spring or summer。 a few leaves clinging to the pavement may remind you that it is autumn。 beyond that， what is going on in nature seems totally irrelevant。 all the simple， good things of life like sunshine and fresh air are at a premium。 tall buildings blot out the sun。 traffic fumes pollute lost。 the flow of traffic goes on unceasingly and the noise never stops。the funny thing about it all is that you pay dearly for the ‘privilege’ of living in a city。 the demand for accommodation is so great that it is often impossible for ordinary people to buy a house of their own。 exorbitant rents must be paid for tiny flats which even country hens would disdain to live in。 accommodation apart， the cost of living is very high。 just about everything you buy is likely to be more expensive than it would be in the country。

in addition to all this， city-dwellers live under constant threat。 the crime rate in most citis is very high。 house are burgles with alarming frequency。 cities breed crime and violence and are full of places you would be afraid to visit at night。 if you think about it， they’re not really fit to live in at all。 can anyone really doubt that the country is what man was born for and where he truly belongs

大学英语对比类作文 第7篇

城乡生活对比英语作文

i have lived in this city for two years, but before that i lived with my family in a village about a hundred miles away from here. life is very different in the two places, but there are things that i like about each of them.

in the country it is quiet and beautiful since there are not many people. the air is clean, and there is beautiful scenery all around. the people who live in the country seem friendly and helpful to their neighbors. the cost of living is low there, because food is usually cheap. i like living in the city, too. in the city there are interesting things to do all the time. people have a big choice of activities. there is a wide selection of movies, and most of the theatres are good. everything is convenient here, since in the city you live close to grocery stores① and schools. traffic is efficient② with regular schedules③, so it is easy to get from one place to another.

i was happy in the country, but there are good chances for work and study in the city, so i will probably stay here for a period of time and there for another period of time.

大学英语对比类作文 第8篇

高中生如何选择英语作文

Many senior school students are faced with the headache choice between big universities and small ones。 Apart from different requirements， each has advantages and disadvantages。 If you ask me what my preference is， my answer is that I would like to go to a big university。 A big university attracts me for sound reasons。 More qualified teaching staff， higher aims and better conditions are helpful to students studying there。 What is more， various lectures organized by more colleges and departments make students in different majors form all round opinions on things。 And diverse activities enrich students＇ life after school。 Additionally， a big garden campus provides a satisfying environment for studying and living for four or more years。

Though more students might mean more competitions， though I might be a small fish in a big pond， I will be motivated to work harder。 In a big university， I believe， my visions will be broadened， and my college life will be a more fruitful and colourful one。 In word， I am inclined to study in a big university。

大学英语对比类作文 第9篇

Fujianese people are open. If someone asks me where your hometown is, Fuji people are proud to say yes. I have loved her since I was a child.

She used to be economically backward, but now with the implementation of the open policy, she has developed a lot. In recent years, great changes have taken place in my hometown. New buildings have been built, people's living standards have been greatly improved, especially in the development of agriculture and industry, On the street, you can often see people from all over the world to conduct business, trade or scientific and technological information exchange.

If you want to get in touch with them but do not understand foreign languages, obviously, the open policy requires more people who are proficient in foreign languages. It is also clear that English, as the most widely used language, has become more useful than anyone else. If I can study in University, I will choose English as my major.

Many parents' friends suggested that I choose a foreign trade college. The reason is simple: after graduation from such a college, I will get a high salary job, which will give me the opportunity to work abroad. However, I decided to choose the English Department of Fujian Normal University.

It is said that teachers are engineers of human soul. People often compare children to flowers, while teachers are gardeners who plant these flowers. I realized from my own perspective that without the help of teachers, I could not have any progress experience.

I thank my teachers for their dedication to the realization of the four modernizations. I want to study all the time. I want to be an English teacher.

I will try my best to be a qualified teacher and help cultivate more builders of the socialist motherland. I believe that with more people understanding foreign languages, the open policy will be implemented successfully and my hometown Fujian will be more prosperous. ④ Nevertheless, Fujian will become more prosperous.

③ Love [cause] n. ④ Prosperity [PR & SP R S] a seesaw model, but my hometown Fujian will be more prosperous.

中文翻译：

福建人开放，如果有人问我你的家乡在哪里人自豪地回答是的，我从小就爱她她她过去经济落后，但现在随着开放政策的实施，她发展了很多，这几年来，我的家乡发生了巨大的变化，新的建筑拔地而起，生活水平大大提高，农业和工业的发展更是如此，在街上，你经常可以看到来自世界各地的人们来进行商业贸易或科学技术信息交流，如果你想和他们取得联系，但不懂外语，显然，开放政策需要更多精通外语的人同样清楚的是，英语作为最广泛使用的语言，已经变得比任何人都有用。福州市第二中学毕业班的一个学生，如果我能在大学学习，我会选择英语作为我的专业。很多父母的朋友建议我选择一所外贸学院。

原因很简单：毕业后从这样一个学院，我会得到一份高薪的工作，这将给我出国工作的机会。然而，我决定选择福建师范大学的英语系。据说老师是人类灵魂的工程师，人们常常把孩子比作花朵，而教师则是种植这些花的园丁，我是从自己的角度认识到的没有老师的帮助，我不可能有任何进步的经验。

我感谢我的老师们，他们为实现四个现代化而献身的精神，我要一直学习。我想当一名英语教师，我会尽力做一名合格的教师，帮助培养更多的社会主义祖国的建设者相信随着更多的人懂外语，开放政策一定会成功地实施，我的家乡福建也会更加繁荣。④①掌握了②尽管如此，福建也会变得更加繁荣。

③热爱[事业]n。xxx[pr&sp r s]一种跷跷板式的模式，但是，我的家乡福建会更加繁荣。

大学英语对比类作文 第10篇

As is shown by the figure/percentage in the table/picture,____ has been on rise/ decrease, significantly/dramatically rising/decreasing from ____ in _____ to _____ in _____. From the sharp rise/decline in the chart, it goes without saying that _____.

There are at least two good reasons accounting for _____. In one hand, the other hand, _____ is due to the

fact that addition, ______ is responsible for _____. Maybe there are some other reasons to show itis generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.

As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.

A Good Major or a Good University

When asked to choose between a good major or a good university before college enrollment, people have different opinions. Many people believe that a good university means great advantage for job application after graduation. On the one hand, a good university has good reputations, which adds credits for its graduates. On the other hand, a good university has all sorts of channels to help graduates get a good job. All these point to the indispensability of a good university.

However, others claim that a good major is all that counts. As far as they are concerned, excellent teaching staff of a good major makes sure that the student are sufficiently trained in the chosen field. Moreover, if one chooses a major that is most needed by the society, not only will he/she find a job easily, but they will contribute much to the society.

As for me, such choice should be made according to our academic interest. Because whether a major or a university is good depends on how we look at it. If certain major or university fits our interest, it will be considered good. What’s more, interest is the best teacher, so a choice of our own interest can help us overcome difficulties in the study. Therefore, let our interest decide for us.

China is a great rejuvenating country with rapid and stable economic development. Only a few countries are socialist countries composed of ethnic groups. China is led by the Communist Party and extends from the east coast to the West.

It creates rich landscape changes. The average altitude of the western region is as high as meters, while that of the eastern region is as low as meters. According to the different climate, the country is roughly divided into three categories China is an ancient country with a long history.

It is also the most populous country in the world. It has a population of more than 100 million, with yellow skin, brown or black eyes, black hair. The official language is Mandarin.

The United States is a developed country, and its dominant position in the world is quite different. The United States is a capitalist country. There are two political parties, the Democratic Party and the Republican Party, ruling in turn.

The East and west coasts are mountains. The Great Plains in the middle of the country are quite young. Its history began about the century.

The population is relatively small. Most Americans are white and have brown or gold With colored hair and blue eyes, there are also black and mixed race because of intermarriage. Finally, English is its official language.

Although there are great differences, China and the United States do have a lot in common. They are both big countries. No matter in terms of strength or scale, the terrain and climate have changed even more.

The people of the two countries are friendly and industrious, and their cultures are diverse and open. In other words, there are always many places of interest to visit in the world.

中文翻译：

中国是一个复兴大国，经济快速稳定发展，只有极少数国家是由民族组成的社会主义国家，中国是由党领导的，从东部沿海延伸到西部，它创造了丰富的景观变化，西部地区的平均海拔高达米，而东部地区的平均海拔低至米，根据气候的不同，全国大致分为三级，南部为带，而华北地区则有着明显的季节差异中国是一个古老的国家，有着悠久的历史，也是世界上人口最多的国家，有着超过亿的人口，黄皮肤，棕色或黑色眼睛，黑头发，语言是xxx。是一个发达国家，在世界上的主导地位大不相同，是一个资本主义国家，有两个政党，党和共和党，xxx，东西海岸都是山脉，中部的大平原是一个相当年轻的国家，它的历史大约从世纪开始，人口相对较少，大多数人都是白人，有棕色或金色的头发和蓝色的眼睛，也有黑人和混血儿，因为通婚。最后，它的语言是英语，尽管差别很大，中国和确实有很多共同点，他们都是大国，无论是实力还是规模，后来地形和气候变化更大，两国友好勤劳，文化多样开放，也就是说，世界上总有许多名胜可供参观。

The Pros and Cons of Dormitory Life

There is a heated debate over whether students should be required to live in dormitory. It is commonly accepted that dormitory life is a very important part of college life, so students should live in dormitory. In contrast, others think that students have the right to choose other places for accommodation.

Those who hold the first opinion suggest that dormitory life is colorful and interesting. In their view, when young people live in one dormitory, they tend to create and enjoy a culture of their own. However, others think dormitory life can be annoying. They argue that dormitory is always crowded and one can hardly feel convenient and comfortable.

Considering one after another, I stand on the side of the first group. First of all, I am interested in living with students from different places so that I can contact with special cultures. Furthermore, I can learn how to get along with other people from dormitory life. Thirdly, I like making friends and dormitory life gives me such chance. Therefore, I think dormitory life is worthy of living.

高中英语作文万用模板-图表作文

As is shown by the figure/percentage in the table/picture,____ has been on rise/ decrease, significantly/dramatically rising/decreasing from ____ in _____ to _____ in _____. From the sharp rise/decline in the chart, it goes without saying that _____.

There are at least two good reasons accounting for _____. On one hand, the other hand, _____ is due to the fact that addition, ______ is responsible for _____. Maybe there are some other reasons to show ______.

But itis generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.

As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.

高中英语作文万用模板-书信作文模板

Your address

Month, Date, year

Receiver's address

Dear ...,

I am extremely pleased to hear from you. And I would like to write a letter to tell you that_____.

I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience/I am looking forward to your replies at your earliest convenience.

Best regards for your health and success.

Sincerely yours,

高中英语作文万用模板-话题作文

Nowadays, there are more and more __ _ in __ _. It is estimated that ___. Why have there been so many ____? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.

The first one is ______. Besides,_____. The third one is _____. To sum up, the main cause of it is due to _____. It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing,_____. For another thing, _____.

All these measures will certainly reduce the number of _____.

高中英语作文万用模板-对比观点作文

_____ is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions of it. Some people say ____ is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ____. What is more,_____。Moreover,______.

While others think that _____ is a better choice for the following three reasons. Firstly,_____. Secondly (besides),______. Thirdly (finally),_____.

From my point of view, I think _____. The reason is that _____. As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice.

Today is the most unfortunate day on my way to school. When I found myself no longer in my pocket, I lost myself. I was shocked and panicked.

I feel like it's over. I was very worried. I went back to the road I used to walk on.

I looked around carefully. xxxHow I wish I could find mine. If it could appear in front of my eyes, I would cherish it I thought to myself, the road is so clean that nothing seems to fall on it.

xxxMy God, do you know I'm looking for you?xxx xxxGod bless me, help in the process of my search, I kept asking God for help, but I failed in the end. I was really disappointed and angry because of my carelessness. I will never forget this experience.

中文翻译：

今天是我上学路上最不幸的一天，当我发现自己不再在口袋里的那一刻，我失去了自我，我感到震惊和恐慌。我觉得一切都结束了。我非常担心，我回到了我曾经步行的路上，我仔细地环顾四周，“我多么希望我能找到我的，如果它能出现在我的眼前，我会永远珍惜它的。

”我心想，路是那么的干净，好像没有什么东西掉在上面。“天哪，你知道我在找你吗？”“上帝保佑我，帮帮我”在我寻找的过程中，我不断地向上帝寻求帮助，但最终失败了，我真的很失望，也很生气，因为粗心，让我失去了教训，我永远不会忘记这段经历。

Many of us spend most of our time staring at computer screens. This article means that you are probably looking at computer screens now, but is it harmful to your eyes to look at them? Nathan evron, a professor of optics at Brisbane, does not think that computer screens are bad for our eyes, Nathan Efron admits that if you use a computer screen frequently, you will increase the risk of myopia. Your eyes will only focus on close objects, while distant objects will appear blurred, especially children and young people, whose eyes are still developing in the short term.

Watching the computer screen for a long time will make any slight visual defects more obvious, and it will bring you some time Symptoms known as xxxcomputer vision syndromexxx - eye fatigue, headache, hoarse eyes and blurred vision, but they are only temporary and can be minimized by adjusting the screen display so that the contrast is high, the brightness is comfortable, the light does not glare on the screen, and your eyes rest regularly while watching the screen (Australian optometrist Every one to two hours of computer use is a good time to make phone calls or do other things.

中文翻译：

我们很多人每天大部分时间都在盯着电脑屏幕看这篇文章意味着你现在很有可能在看电脑屏幕，但是看电脑屏幕是否会损害你的眼睛布里斯班验光学教授内森·埃夫隆并不认为电脑屏幕对我们的眼睛有害Nathan Efron承认如果你经常使用电脑屏幕，你会增加患近视的风险，你的眼睛只会聚焦在近距离的物体上，而较远的物体会显得模糊，尤其是儿童和年轻人，他们的眼睛在短期内仍在发育，长时间观看电脑屏幕会使任何轻微的视觉缺陷变得更为明显，它也会给你带来有时被称为“计算机视觉综合症”的症状——眼睛疲劳、头痛，沙哑的眼睛和模糊的视觉，但这只是暂时的，可以通过以下方式将其最小化：调整屏幕显示，使对比度高，亮度舒适，光线不会在屏幕上产生眩光，让您的眼睛在观看屏幕时有规律地休息（澳大利亚验光师协会建议您这样做）每使用一到两个小时的电脑，这是打电话或做其他事情的好时机。

大学英语对比类作文 第11篇

对比观点题型

（1）要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。

1. 有一些人认为......

2. 另一些人认为.......

3. 我的看法......

The topic of ①-----------------(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions of it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------(支持A的理由一)What is more, ③-------------理由二). Moreover, ④---------------(理由三).

While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥------------------(理由二). Thirdly (finally),⑦------------------(理由三).

From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------(我的观点). The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice .

（2） 给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点

Some people believe that ①----------------(观点一). For example, they think ②-----------------(举例说明).And it will bring them ③-----------------(为他们带来的好处).

In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing,④-------------(我不同意该看法的理由一). For another thing, ⑤-----------------(反对的理由之二).

Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥------------------(我对文章所讨论主题的看法).

对比观点题型的思路比较简单，但非常重要。整体思路是，先陈述别人的意见，再表明自己的立场，通过对比，就能很清楚看出观点间的区别。遇到这类写作话题，大家不要慌张，一定要理清自己的写作思路。加油，预祝大家都取得好成绩。

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大学英语对比类作文 第12篇

1） Nowadays many college students take part-time jobs intheir spare time.

2) It is no doubt that taking a part-time jobbrings about several advantages to college students.

3) Above all, part-time job provide students a valuable chance to put their knowledge into practice.

4) Furthermore, students can get some money to help relieve the burden on their families.

5) However, problems may also arise.

6) For one thing, some students may neglect their studies due to their failure in manage their time spent on part-time jobs.

7)For another, not knowing how to protect themselves, some students may be cheated or hurt by their employers.

8) Weighing the advantages and disadvantages, I think that we college students should step out of campus and take some part-time jobs.

9) undoubtedly, it offers us opportunity to know the society.

10) But it is worth nothing that we cannot put too much time and energy in part-time jobs and neglect our study .

11) To conclude, if the schedule permits, doing part-time jobs in spare time is a good choice for college students.

大学英语对比类作文 第13篇

Our city in our country is very big, it is beautiful and mild climate, it has a million people, people friendly and hard work, there are many new changes in our city, many bridges have been built across the river, there are also some new highways and overp in our city travel is convenient and convenient, shopping is very easy, you can also go to any shop and supermarket I feel happy and comfortable living in such a city. I am Wenlu. I graduated from Industrial Vocational College at the age of, majoring in computer engineering.

Now I work in a large company. I am a secretary. I answer the phone, receive visitors and type letters.

I am very busy every day. I often work overtime. I can learn a lot in the company Some foreign guests come to our office, so I have to talk with them in English.

They say that my spoken English is very good. I am competent for this job. I like this job.

I want to work harder. So I will. Our company is Wanxing electric appliance company, a big company in this city.

We have worked in this company for five years and the business is developing very fast. Now we need a secretary (accountant, manager, engineer, operator, technician). She / he should have a college degree, speak English well and be easy to get along with others.

She / he must work hard and be able to handle daily problems well. We will hold an interview for you on Friday and September 9. My hobby is playing Basketball I started playing basketball after school when I was old.

I would stay on the playground and play basketball with everyone. Since then, some of my friends have always regarded it as my hobby because it is good for my health and I like it very much. I work in a big foreign company now.

I'm busy working every week, so I don't often play it. When I have a holiday, I'll find some old friends to go to the gym to play basketball for a few hours. I will feel very happy and relaxed.

This sport is very good for me because I am very, very strong now.

中文翻译：

我们的城市在我们国家是非常大的，它是美丽和温和的气候它有一百万人口，友好和努力工作在我们的城市有许多新的变化，xxx梁已经建成跨越河流，也有一些新的高速公路和天桥在我们的城市里旅行是方便和方便的购物很容易，你也可以去任何商店和超市挑选任何你喜欢的东西我觉得生活在这样的城市我感到快乐和舒适我是文路，岁我从工业职业学院毕业，主修计算机工程我现在在一家大公司工作，我是秘书我接电话，接待来访客人，打字信件等，每天我都很忙，经常加班加点我可以在公司学到很多东西，有时一些外宾来我们办公室，所以我必须用英语和他们交谈，他们说我的英语口语很好，我很能胜任这份工作，我喜欢这份工作，我想更加努力，所以我会的我们公司是万兴电器公司，这是本市的一家大公司。我们在这家公司工作了xx年，业务发展很快，现在我们需要一名秘书（会计、经理、工程师、操作员、技术员）她/他应该在大学里学历，英语口语必须良好，容易与人相处她/他必须努力工作，能很好地处理日常问题在星期五，xx月xx日为你举行面试欢迎我的爱好是打篮球我从岁开始放学后就开始打篮球，我会呆在操场上和大家一起打篮球从那以后，我的一些朋友一直把它作为我的爱好，因为它对我的健康有好处，而且我非常喜欢它。我现在在一家大的外国公司工作我每周都在忙着工作，所以我不常玩它，当我有假期休息的时候，我会找一些老朋友一起去健身房打几个小时的篮球。

我会感到非常高兴和放松。这项运动对我非常有益，因为我现在非常非常强壮。

大学英语对比类作文 第14篇

Today is the most unfortunate day on my way to school. When I found myself no longer in my pocket, I lost myself. I was shocked and panicked.

I feel like it's over. I was very worried. I went back to the road I used to walk on.

I looked around carefully. _How I wish I could find mine. If it could appear in front of my eyes, I would cherish it forever._ I thought to myself, the road is so clean that nothing seems to fall on it.

_My God, do you know I'm looking for you?_ _God bless me, help me._ in the process of my search, I kept asking God for help, but I failed in the end. I was really disappointed and angry because of my carelessness. I will never forget this experience.

中文翻译：

今天是我上学路上最不幸的一天，当我发现自己不再在口袋里的那一刻，我失去了自我，我感到震惊和恐慌。我觉得一切都结束了。我非常担心，我回到了我曾经步行的路上，我仔细地环顾四周，“我多么希望我能找到我的，如果它能出现在我的眼前，我会永远珍惜它的。

”我心想，路是那么的干净，好像没有什么东西掉在上面。“天哪，你知道我在找你吗？”“上帝保佑我，帮帮我”在我寻找的过程中，我不断地向上帝寻求帮助，但最终失败了，我真的很失望，也很生气，因为粗心，让我失去了教训，我永远不会忘记这段经历。

大学英语对比类作文 第15篇

观点对比的英语作文模板

（1） 要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。

1． 有一些人认为。。。

2． 另一些人认为。。。

3． 我的看法。。。

The topic of ①-----------------（主题）is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions of it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------（支持A的理由一）What is more, ③-------------理由二). Moreover, ④---------------(理由三).

While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥------------------（理由二）. Thirdly (finally),⑦------------------(理由三).

From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------（我的观点）. The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice .

（2） 给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点

Some people believe that ①----------------（观点一）. For example, they think②-------------（举例说明）．And it will bring them ③-----------------(为他们带来的好处).

In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing,④------(我不同意该看法的理由一). For another thing, ⑤------(反对的理由之二)．

Form all what I have said,I agree to the thought that ⑥----------(我对文章所讨论主题的看法)．

大学英语对比类作文 第16篇

选择朋友英语作文

如何选择朋友how to choose Friends)

As the saying goes, “A friend in need is a friend indeed”. Friends play a very essential role in our daily life. However, how to make goods friends is a problem for most of us. As for me, I have three principles to choose friends.

In the first place, good friends should have their own principles. We should take into account the fact that people who insist on their principles have high quality. Therefore, it is worth making friends with them.

Then, I want to point out that good friends should be full of trust. This kind of person has a pure heart, so we can communicate with each other by heart.

Finally, active friends are just like beautiful sunshine. They can light up our blue mood, drive away the dark clouds and give us courage.

Friends who have above three characteristics will be great wealth for us.

正如谚语所说的那样，患难见真情。朋友在我们日常生活中扮演着非常重要的角色。然而，如何交到一个好朋友是我们大多数人都遇到过的问题。

首先，好朋友应该是有他们自己的.处事原则。我们应该认识到这样一个事实，坚持自己原则的人一般都是具有高尚的品格。因此，这样的人值得我们去交朋友。

然后，我想说的是，好的朋友应该是充满真诚的。这样的朋友有一颗赤子之心，我们能用心来彼此交流。

最后，拥有积极心态的朋友就像美丽的阳光。他们能够照亮我们忧郁的心情，驱走乌云，给我们鼓励。

能交到有以上三个特征的朋友将会是我们巨大的财富。

How to Make Friends(如何交朋友)

Everyone needs friends. A friend can give us help and share our difficulties and happiness. But how can we make friends?

First, to make friends, you must be friendly to others. Smile at others and you are sure to get a smile in return. You should try to make a stranger feel at home wherever he happens to be. Think more of others than of yourself and never judge a person by his appearance and clothes.

Second, friends should negotiate instead of quarrel. When you don't agree someone, please discuss with him.

Finally, never believe in those who leave you when you are in trouble. And never leave your friend when he is in trouble. Remember, a friend in need is a friend indeed.

Friends should be faithful to each other. So long as you can put your friend's interests in front of yours, you will have a lot of good friends.

CHOOSING FRIENDS(选择朋友)

A man who is careful in choosing friends will certainly derive benefit from them. Why? Because there are more false friends than real ones in this world. To have one real friends is better than a hundred false ones. Friends who flatter you to your face are not true friends.

We must make friends with those who have good character and kindness of heart. On the other hand, we should do our best to a void keeping company with bad people.

一个小心选择朋友的人一定会从他们那里获得益处。为什么?因为在这个世界里假朋友比真朋友要多。有一个真朋友要比有一百个假朋友来得好。凡是当面奉承你的朋友不是真朋友。

我们必须和凡是具有良好品格和心地善良的人交朋友。反过来说，我们应尽力避免结交坏人。

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It was a fine Sunday. There were many people playing beach volleyball on the beach. A man was lying on a chair.

A man was swimming. He was swimming very well. A man was talking to him.

He was learning from him. Everyone had a good time.

中文翻译：

这是一个晴朗的星期天，公园里有许多人在快乐地玩（有些人在沙滩上打沙滩排球一个男人躺在椅子上一个男人游泳他游得很好一个男人在跟他说话他在向他学习每个人都玩得很开心。

大学英语对比类作文 第18篇

任何事物，只有通过对比才能显出高低、大小、好坏、多少。写人也是如此，通过对比可以反映出先进和落后、高尚与卑贱，优秀和不良。对比写人法有两种。一种是同一个人前后相比，说明这个人的变化。另一种是一个人和另一个比，歌颂其中一个人或使另一个人受到教育。采用对比法写人时，要注意突出主要人的和主要问题，做到主次分明，切不可喧宾夺主。其次，对比时要合情合理，不能采取故意拔高或贬低的方法，把好的捧上天，把差的贬入地，使人不可信。此外要注意前后照应。

大学英语对比类作文 第19篇

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write acomposition on the topic: Living alone or Living with Roommates?You shouldwrite at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese。

1.有人认为大学里应独自生活

2.另一些认为大学里应与别人同住

3.你的看法

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A possible version: Dear headmaster, I'm just writing to tell you something about the service in our school can. I'm the Minister of life of the student union. The service is very satisfactory.

The food looks attractive and tastes good. The price of the food is OK for us. The variety of dishes changes every week, and the workers there regard us as friends.

This makes me We are very happy. We often have to wait for a long time to eat. You can understand how precious time is to us students.

Therefore, I can suggest some measures to solve the problems of food quality and environment, so that we can all enjoy our food in school. Thank you for your concern, Li Ming.

中文翻译：

：一个可能的版本：亲爱的校长，我写这封信只是想告诉你一些关于我们学校食堂服务的事情我是学生会生活部的部长，服务很满意，菜看起来很诱人，味道很好，饭菜的价格对我们来说还可以，菜的种类每星期都在变化，而且那里的工人把我们当作朋友，这让我们感到非常高兴，我们经常要排很长一段时间才能吃到饭。你能理解时间对我们学生来说是多么宝贵。因此，我可以建议采取一些措施来解决菜的质量和环境等问题，以便我们都能在学校里享用我们的饭菜谢谢你的关心，xxx。

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Failure is the mother of success. Where there is a will, there is a way. There is no harvest.

Diligence is the mother of success. You must believe in yourself. This is the secret of success.

Everything is difficult. God closes one door but opens another.

中文翻译：

失败是成功之母滴水穿石有志者事竟成，没有收获勤奋是成功之母你必须相信你自己这是成功的秘诀所有事情都是困难的上帝关上了一扇门却打开了另一扇门。

大学英语对比类作文 第22篇

When it comes to/When asked about谈论主题， different people will give different answers/offerdifferent views/have different choices/preferences. Some people take it forgranted/believe大学里应独自生活。理由一. Inaddition,理由二。

However, others maintain/argue大学里应与别人同住. In their opinions,理由一. Besides,理由二。

这两段也可写成：

When it comes to/When asked about谈论主题， different people will give different answers/offerdifferent views/have different choices/preferences. Some people take it forgranted/believe大学里应独自生活. However, others maintain/argue大学里应与别人同住。

Those people who hold the first opinion/make the formerchoice/have the first preference believe理由一. Inaddition, in their eyes/they insist/they maintain/they point out 理由二. However, still others think differently/do not agreethis/have different choices/preferences. In their opinions,理由一. Besides,理由二。)

大学英语对比类作文 第23篇

21st century is the century of is everywhere around development of technology has a significant affact toward the technologies that we usually use are the internet,computer,and new technologies make our life much easier and better.

First,the development of computer changes our ago,people needed to do lots of complex calculation on hand because they did not have computer,and more obvious,they did not have the software for the result of that,people spent hours on the equations that a computer can solve in just a the development of computer,people are able to use some kind of software to compute lots of complex functions and mathematical becomes the most helpful equipment for the sciencists because they can use their time more efficiently.

Also,internet is another useful tool for us development of internet brings a great impact toward the of going to library and fliping all the books to figure out some information,we can just simply use a mouse and click on the website to do internet leads us to a place where we can find unlimited information and makes our life much easier and better.

The last technology is people have a it just appears on the market for about 10 is very convenience to the users because we can talk to anyone we want with a phone as small as a can communicate with others by making a phone call instead of sending is very fast and useful way to communicate.

In conclusion,I believe the development of technology brings significant impact to our is very helpful to us and I believe technology will keep improving in future.

大学英语对比类作文 第24篇

关于对比的观点英语作文

Now people in significant numbers are beginning to compare themselves with others. They harbor the idea that comparison can not only make them realize the differences between them and others, but also make them strive. They retreat surpassing others as success.

现在很多人都拿自己和别人比较。他们怀着这样的想法，对比不仅能让他们意识到自己与他人之间的差异，也能使他们更加努力。他们把超越他人作为成功。

Opinions vary from person to person. Some people take the attitude that comparing ourselves with others does have the passive effects to our life. On the one hand, if you compare yourself with the one who is weaker than you, you will be so satisfied with the current situation that you will lose the ambition. On the other hand, compared with the ones stronger than you, you can not find the confidence.

不同的`人对此有不同的看法。有些人认为把自己与他人相比对我们的生活有消极影响。一方面，如果你把自己和比你弱的人相比，你会满足于现状，从而丢失了野心。另一方面，与那些比你强的人相比，就会失去信心。

All in all, every coin has two sides. So we should not compare us with others blindly. But, we can compare ourselves with ourselves before. Only in this way, can we find out our advantages and weakness.

总之，每个硬币都有两面。所以我们不应该盲目与他人对比。但是，我们可以与以前的自己相比。只有这样，我们才能发现自己的优点和弱点。

大学英语对比类作文 第25篇

高考英语作文万能句子：比较和对比句型

1. A is completely / totally / entirely different from B.

2. A and B are different in some/every way / respect / aspect.

3. A and B differ in.

4. A differs from B in.

5. The difference between A and B is/lies in/exists in.

6. Compared with/In contrast to/Unlike A, B.

7. A, on the other hand,/in contrast,/while/whereas B.

8. While it is generally believed that A , I believe B.

9. Despite their similarities, A and B are also different.

10. Both A and B . However, A on the other hand, B.

11. The most striking difference is that A, while B.

大学英语对比类作文 第26篇

对立观点型

* 基本结构：

* 1. 对事物进行整体评论或介绍(主题句)

* 2. 分别陈述两种不同的观点/做法，阐释理由(扩展句)

* 3. 给出自己的观点、结论(扩展句)

* 主题句(Topic sentence)：文章的主题、每段的中心论点

* 扩展句(Supporting sentence):支撑中心论点的理由、例证

写作思路 四段式写法

第1段：提出观点

主题句---扩展句(观点A)---扩展句(观点B)

* 首段扩展句：亮出对立的观点A和观点B

* 有些人认为。。。

* 然而，另一些人认为。。。

* 主题句 When it comes to…, there is no complete agreement among people.

It goes without saying that… has become a hotly debated topic in our country

There is no denying the fact that … has become a hotly debated topic in our country.

* 单词表认为：argue，claim，believe, hold, maintain, contend, assume, believe, emphasize, assert, point out

* 短语表认为: firmly believe that…，be deeply convinced …

* A large number of people argue that…

* In contrast, there are also numerous Chinese citizens who hold that...

* 第2段：论证观点A (两个认为，两个理由)

扩展句(观点A理由1)---扩展句(观点A理由2) ---主题句

* 第一种人的支持者主声称 。

* 另外，他们认为 。

* 所以， (小结) 。

* ① Supporters of the first group claim that (正方理由1

* ②In addition, they assume that ( 正方理由2) .

* ③Consequently, ( 重复观点1 ) .

* 第3段：论证观点B (两个认为，两个理由)

扩展句(观点B理由1)---扩展句(观点B理由2) ---主题句

* 然而，其他人坚持第二种观点因为 。

* 另外， 。

* 所以， (小结) 。

* ①Nevertheless, their critics maintain that ( 反方理由1 )

* ②Moreover, they assert that ( 反方理由2) .

* ③As a result, ( 小结 ).…

结尾段：总结全文，表明立场

* 主题句(我的立场) ---扩展句(我的理由1)---扩展句(我的理由2) ---结尾句

* 在我看来，我更喜欢后一种说法。

* 一方面，。。。。

* 另一方面，。。。。

* 综上所述，重申我的立场。

* As far as I am concerned, I prefer the former/latter point of view.

On the one hand, I am deeply convinced that.....

On the other hand, it is my firm belief that......

Based on the analysis above, it can be safely concluded that...

* 支持者：supporters，champions, advocates, 反对者：opponents, critics，objectors

大学英语对比类作文 第27篇

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