6级作文范文1

一谈及作文，老师觉得难教，学生觉得难写，让学生觉得作文简直就是作难，而想要写好写景作文更是难上加难，关键还是在于观察的能力不够。以下是第一xxx网小编为大家整理的关于6年级写景作文xxx，给大家作为参考，欢迎阅读!

6年级写景作文xxx篇1

夜幕笼罩着玉环，当你来到灯光辉映之处便是玉环的热闹之地——步行街。

清晨的步行街没有特别之处，恰似普通的小道。夜晚来临，却清淅地看见一黑一白的石头铺成一排，铺向远方，远看如同一条黑白相间的河流，仔细一听，竟还有叮叮咚咚的声音，寻源而去，原来是木板搭上的绳桥撞击着铁柱，发出那清脆的声响。

步行街的一大特点便是一路的小摊，出售的东西也五花八门，大到录像机音响，xxx挖耳梳子，可谓是样样聚全，东西也是十分廉价，不少人聚集于此。

步行街的小摊如此之多，自然也少不街头小吃，小吃的种类有很多炸、涮、烧、烤、麻辣烫应有尽有，直到晚上九点，步行街的炊烟依旧袅袅升起，流动的小吃车前的人们拥挤也还丝毫不变。

步行街的另一端是人们溜旱冰理想之地，一到夜晚，一大群旱冰族便簇拥于此，练习旱冰，一双双五彩的旱冰鞋所发出的色彩在不交织着、渗透着、辉映着、变化着。真叫人目不暇接啊!一位位旱冰高手在这片属于他们的舞台上，尽情表演，施展着自已的绝招，一项项绝技，让人看得目瞪口呆。

步行街的尽头是一座石像，也许是玉环沿海，石像所塑的形状是一个巨大的海螺，周围是几根水草和几条鱼。这石雕活灵活现，栩栩如生，石雕并没有上色，似乎是作者故意留给我们想象空间。

这便是玉环的步行街，一个热闹的地方，一个别有风味的地方。

6年级写景作文xxx篇2

走在石子小路上，望着山下的美景，一股属于少年的豪气冲天而来，我不禁大吼一声，发泄内心的情感。低头一望，发现了春的气息……

地上枯黄的草坪上多了一抹翠绿，那属于生命的颜色，让人陶醉。虽与其它枯草格格不入，但也有一份特殊的美感。我蹲下来，仔细地观察那几株惹人怜爱的小草，它是那样的弱小，可却用顽强的生命向人们报告了春来临的消息……

走着走着，我的眼中一亮，在我的面前，一片片金黄的油菜花吸引了我的注意，那一颗颗油菜花宛如一个个金色的小精灵，又似一片片耀眼的地毯，那点缀在边上的一抹绿色更是使单一的颜色增添了几分美感。油菜花在我的眼中，也是无私的，它的一切都奉献给了我们。菜可食用，籽可榨油，它的无私、奉献我们也要向它们学习啊……

沿着上山的路往上走，一棵桃树映入眼帘，那花朵儿是那样的艳丽，醉人的粉色更是美丽，像一位亭亭玉立的少女，淡雅却不失妩媚，让人格外欢喜，它也在用自己独特的方式向人们揭示了春天已经来临，我不愿把它摘下一朵，因为这种美，是最自然的美，将它摘下，反而把这一丝美给破坏了……

一阵阵清玲般的笑声让我循声望去，原来是一群孩童与各自的家长在前方游玩，看着他们那般无忧无虑的样子，我的脸上也露出了一股怀念及淡淡的忧伤，曾几何时，我也是像这群孩子一般，只不过……人，是会变得，我望着他们，似乎闻到了春的气息。是啊，脱去了冬日里沉重的衣裳，人民也如春天一般充满着似乎无尽的活力与快乐。

我望着身边的聆风塔，嘴角勾起了弧线，今天看到的一切，小草的顽强，油菜花的无私，桃花的美丽，人们的活力，这一切的一切，向人们表达的只有一个字——春!

6年级写景作文xxx篇3

春天是充满希望的，是充满生机的。这时，大家都会想到一点——去爬香山。瞧，那冰雪融化了的香山迎接了我们大家，也迎接了春天。

清晨，我们来到了香山。远望去，那香山已不是以前被冰天雪地覆盖住的样子了。而是一片苍茫的翠绿。只有几棵树还没有长出绿叶来。现在虽然还没有到“等闲识得东风面，xxx红总是春”的时候，但是已经迎来了“地上草如茵，两岸柳如眉”这种春天的景象。就是这美好的春的气息激励着我爬上了香山。

我们一口气就爬到了半山腰。由于运动非常剧烈，所以我感觉累极了。在登山途中，如果我累了，就把着路边的树，喝一口水，然后赶紧继续爬山。但这如果是平时登山的话，我一歇就会歇很长时间。在登山时，我有时被别人落下很多很多，有时则超过其他人很远很远，有时与大家同步。在半山腰的小亭子里休息的时候，同伴们都在悠闲自得地吃东西。而我却在考虑怎么样才可以爬到山顶，而且还不是特别累。因为我只有一个目标——一定要爬上山顶!与我同行的桃桃却是默默无语、慢慢悠悠地爬着，跟在队伍的最后面。别看她这么慢，可是她要比我轻松一百倍呢!

春天的香山不但景美，而且游人多。在我们登山的时候，我看见了好几伙人。虽然没有看到他们的表情，但我想：他们看见这万物复苏的景象，会是多么高兴啊!他们肯定在甜甜地笑呢!

如果有人问我从哪能体会到香山迎接了春天，我会说，只要你仔细观察游人的表情，你就可以体会到春天的香山的美!

可这次与众不同，为什么呢?因为我想赶紧爬上香山，欣赏这大好风景。

6级作文范文2

on friendship

friendship means being friendly to each other or making friends with one another. human beings are social animals. they do not live in need each other both physically and emotionally.

however, some people distort friendship by forming small groups that are harmful to others, or even to the whole community. in university some students from the same city or province form an association to help each other. but such associations often exclude students from other parts of the country, and thus do not promote friendship in a broad sense.

true and lasting friendship is based on a more solid foundarien. real friends share the same ideals. while marching toward their common objective, they help each other. if one makes a mistake, his friend will not hesitate to point it out for him, because he knows the frank criticism will help him. what we need is this type of genuine friendship.

论友谊

友谊意味着彼此友好相处或与他人交朋友。人类是一种社会动物，他们不能孤立存在，他们在生理上和情感上都彼此需要。

然而，有人却把组建对付他人、甚至于危害整个社会的小团体曲解为友谊。 大学里，来自同一城市或同一省份的一些学生组成一个社团，彼此互相帮助。但这样的社团往往排斥了来自其他地区的学生，因此从广义上讲，这并不能促进友谊。

真正而持久的友谊是以更为牢固的根基为基础的。真正的朋友拥有共同的理想。 当他们向共同的目标迈进时，彼此相互帮助。若一个人犯了错，他的朋友会毫不犹豫地为他指出来，因为他知道真诚的批评会对他有益。我们需要的就是这种真正的友谊。

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are neighbors important ?

in pioneer days, being a good neighbor was very important. neighbors helped one another raise a house, build a barn, and clear depended on one another for friendship and entertainment. but today in our cities and suburbs, neighboring is not common. a family may not even know the other families that live close by.

we live in an age of machines, and each family may have its own car, tv set, and washing machine. people no longer depend on neighbors as much as they once did.

machines keep people apart in other ways. in our grandparents' time, women met while they hung out their washing, and men stopped and talked while they mowed their lawns. today, women stay in the house with their automatic dryers. the men can't hear anything above the roar of their

power lawn mowers. and the children are inside watching their favorite tv show.

is the idea of being neighborly old-fashioned? in 1965, a power failure hit new york city, and many thousands of people were left stranded. suddenly, everyone shared the same problem, and our largest city became a group of eight million neighbors. people with cars offered rides to those persons helped direct traffic. trapped in elevators,people played word games and helped keep each other in good spirits.

in times of trouble, people still depend on one time goes on, people may once again feel that being a good neighbor is important.

邻居重要吗?

在拓荒时代，成为好邻居非常重要。邻居们相互帮助养家糊口，修建谷仓，清理农田。家庭之间相互依赖获得友谊和娱乐。但如今在市区或者市郊，比邻而居并不常见。 一个家庭可能甚至不认识附近居住的其他家庭。

我们生活在一个机器时代，每个家庭都可能有自己的汽车、电视和洗衣机。人们不再像以前那样依赖邻居。

机器还在其他方面把人们分离开来。在我们的祖父母时代，女人们出去晾衣服的时候都能相互见面，男人们在除草的时候也停下来聊天。现在，女人们和她们的自动烘干机呆在家里。 男人们则除了他们电动除草机的轰鸣声外什么都听不到。孩子们则呆在家里观看他们最喜欢的电视节目。

与邻居友好相处的想法是否过时了?1965年，纽约城停电，使得成千上万的人手足无措。突然，所有的人都有着共同的问题，我们最大的城市变成了八百万人互为邻里的大集体。开车的人让走路的人搭载。另外有些人帮忙指挥交通。陷在电梯里的人们做着文字游戏，相互帮忙保持良好情绪。

遇到麻烦时，人们仍然相互依赖。随着时间的推移，人们有可能会再次感到成为好邻居的重要。

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the growth of fast-food restaurants in china

shanghai, with a population of more than ]2 million peppie, is the fastest-growing, richest city in eastern china. today shanghai has hundreds of fast-food restaurants including mcdonald's, pizza hut and the chinese-style california beef noodle king.

chinese customers like this new style of dining because it is fast, convenient and clean. these restaurant chains offer a wide variety of foods new to china. mcdonald's customers are still more likely to eat chicken or fish than the company's more famous hamburgers because they are not so familiar with beef. over time, however, the city's customers are eating more beef, cheese and french fries than previous generations since more young people like to eat western fast-food.

shanghai's western fast-food restaurants are more expensive than the chinese-style food outlets. as a result, it is members of the middle class earning more money and spending it on entertainment and food who eat in them , about half of shanghai's consumers are eating out at a restaurant at least once a month. most of them are young men under the age of 36.

how fast has the spread of fast-food restaurants been in china'? take a look at kentucky fried chicken (kfc) and mcdonald's: kfc had 40 restaurants in shanghai in 1996, and 250 in 1998, while mcdonald's had 180 restaurants across china in 1998. such popularity means that these figures will most probably double in two or three years.

快餐厅在中国的发展

拥有超过0万人口的上海，是华东地区发展最快、最富裕的城市。如今，上海已有包括麦当劳、必胜客、中式加州牛肉面大王等几百家快餐厅。

中国顾客喜欢这种新型的就餐方式，因为它快捷、方便、卫生。这些连锁餐馆给中国带来了大量全新的食品。麦当劳的顾客仍然更愿意品尝鸡肉和鱼肉，而对于这里更为出名的汉堡，却鲜有尝试，因为他们对牛肉并不熟悉。然而随着时间的发展，与上一代人相比，城市顾客对牛肉、奶酪、炸薯条的消费已经越来越大，因为越来越多的年轻人喜欢吃西式快餐。

上海的西式快餐厅价格比中餐馆贵。 因此经常来这里就餐的人以中产阶级为主，他们收入较高，同时也愿意在娱乐、餐饮方面消费。如今，大约一半的上海消费者每月至少外出在餐馆吃一次饭。他们大多是36岁以下的年轻人。

快餐厅在中国的发展到底有多快?让我们看一看肯德基和麦当劳：1996年上海共有40家肯德基餐厅，到了1998年已达到250家;1998年中国已有180家麦当劳餐厅。 西式快餐如此受欢迎，预计在两三年之内，这个数字还会翻一番。

[2017年6月四级作文范文]

6级作文范文5

6级作文

6级作文万能句子

1. in order to

为了实现他的梦想，他学习非常努力。

He worked very hard in order to realize his dream.

2. in order that

她拼命干活以便到六点时把一切都准备就绪。

She worked hard in order that everything would be ready by 6 o'clock.

3. so…that

他们太累了，除了伸懒腰什么都做不了了。

They were all so tired that they could do nothing but yawn.

4. such…that

天气非常冷，以致于街上一个人都没有。

It was such a cold day that there was nobody on the street.

5. would rather do…than do

他宁愿听他人讲而不愿自己说。

He would rather listen to others than talk himself.

6. prefer doing to doing

他宁愿在精心准备后去做报告。

He prefers ma-ki-ng speeches after careful preparation.

7. prefer to do…rather than do

比起女人，男人总是宁可在家睡觉也不愿花那么多时间来购物。

Compared with women, men always prefer to sleep at home rather than spend so much time shopping.

8. not only…but also

在短短的三年的时间里她不但完成了所有课程，而且还获得了博士学位。

In just three years, she had not only finished all the lessons, but also received her doctor's degree.

9. either…or

如果考试过关，你可以买一个MP3或去云南玩一趟。

You could either buy an MP3 or go to Yunnan for a visit if you pathe exam.

10. Neither…nor

他是一个无聊的人，既不爱娱乐，也不爱读书。

He is a boring man. He likes neither entertainment nor reading.

11. as well as

他善良又乐于助人。

He was kind as well as helpful.

12. …as well

这个小孩活泼又可爱。

The child is active and funny as well.

13. One…the other

你看见桌子上有两只笔吗?一支是红色的.，另一支是黑色的。

Have you seen two pens on the desk? One is red, the other is black.

14. Some…others

每个人都很忙，有些在读书，有些在写作。

Everyone is busy in classroom. Some are reading, others are writing.

15. make…+adj /n

我们所做的可以让世界更美丽。

What we do will make the world more beautiful.

16. not…until

直到他告诉我发生的事，我才了解真-相。

I didn’t know the truth until she told me what happened.

17. as if

他夸夸其谈好像什么事都知道。

He talks a lot as if he knows everything.

18. It is no use (good) doing…

假装不懂规则是行不通的。

It’s no use pretending that you didn’t know the rules.

19. find it + adj to do…

我觉得作听力时有必要作笔记。

I find it necessary to take down notes while listening.

20. It is + time since…

我已经有两年没见他了。

It is two years since I last met him.

21. It is + time when…

我到电影院时已经八点钟了。

It was 8 o’clock when I got to the cinema.

22. It is + time before…

不久我们就会再见面的。

It won’t be long before we can meet again.

23. It is…that…

我最珍视的是友谊。

It is friendship that I value most.

24. It is + n / adj + that / to do…

每个人都必须懂得如何使用计算机

It is a must that everybody should know how to use computers.

6级作文范文6

再过不久就要迎来六级考试了，而在同学们又可以积累一些优秀的英语句子来备考。下面是第一范文网小编整理英语6级作文开头结尾的相关资料,供你参考。

英语6级作文开头结尾

1. 人类正面临着一个严重的问题……，这个问题变得越来越严重。Man is now facing a big problem ______ which is becoming more and more serious

2. ……已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。______ has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way

3. ……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。______ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day lifeit has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well

4. 根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出……很显然……，但是为什么呢?According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph，it can be seen that______ whileObviously，______，but why?

英语6级作文开头结尾精选

1. 相反，有一些人赞成……，他们相信……，而且，他们认为……On the contrary，there are some people in favor of ___At the same time，they say____

2. 但是，我认为这不是解决……的好方法，比如……最糟糕的是……But I don”t think it is a very good way to solve ____For example，____Worst of all，___

3. ……对我们国家的发展和建设是必不可少的，(也是)非常重要的。首先，……而且……，最重要的是……______is necessary and important to our country“s development and constructionFirst，______What”s more, _____Most important of all,______

4. 有几个可供我们采纳的方法。首先，我们可以……There are several measures for us to adoptFirst, we can______

5. 面临……，我们应该采取一系列行之有效的方法来……一方面……，另一方面，Confronted with______，we should take a series of effective measures to______For one thing，______For another，______

6. 早就应该拿出行动了。比如说……，另外……所有这些方法肯定会……It is high time that something was done about itFor example_____In addition_____All these measures will certainly______

7. 为什么……?第一个原因是……;第二个原因是……;第三个原因是……总的来说，……的主要原因是由于……Why______? The first reason is that ______The second reason is ______The third is ______For all this, the main cause of ______due to ______

8. 然而，正如任何事物都有好坏两个方面一样，……也有它的不利的一面，象……However, just like everything has both its good and bad sides, ______also has its own disadvantages, such as ______

9. 尽管如此，我相信……更有利。Nonetheless, I believe that ______is more advantageous

10. 完全同意……这种观点(陈述)，主要理由如下：I fully agree with the statement that ______ because______

英语6级作文开头结尾推荐

1. It is well-known to us that knowledge plays an important role in our life我们都知道知识在我们生活中扮演重要的角色。

2. Nowadays,the problem of the air pollution has been brought into focus如今，空气污染问题引起了关注。(成为人们瞩目的焦点)

3. Nowadays,the Internet has been playing an important role in our everyday life It has brought a lot of benefits but has also brought some problems如今,互联网已在我们生活中扮演越来越重要的角色，它给我们带来了许多好处，但也产生了一些问题。

4. With the development of our society，more and more people believe that knowledge is very important随着社会的发展，越来越多的人认为知识很重要。

lot of people think that knowledge is very necessary很多人认为知识很必要。

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英语作文xxx就是写的比较好的英语作文，你想知道如何写一篇英语作文的xxx吗?下面是第一xxx网小编给大家精心挑选的6年级下册英语作文xxx，希望大家喜欢!供你参考和阅读!

6年级下册英语作文篇1

Today is the National is our country's she is am very happy.

今天是国庆节，是我国的生日，现在她56岁了，我很开心。

Today in the afternoon . I go to the park. people all look so happy. Someone is doing exercise,someone is singing the nation song .A little girl came to me and said to me ,happy National know she loves the country,but I love her ,too. Today is a happy day.

今天下午。我去公园。人们看起来很高兴。有人在做运动，有人在唱这首歌，一个小女孩来到我的国家，对我说：国庆节快乐，我知道她爱这个国家，但我也爱她。今天是快乐的一天。

6年级下册英语作文篇2

Modesty is one of the national characters of Chinese people. There are many stories about modesty in the history of China. However, some people think that in the influence of the western culture, modesty seems not so important as before. I can't agree with them. I think it's the quality veryone should process. Many young people do not realize the importance of modesty. They are sitisfied with a little success, so that they don't try hard to make progress. Besides, some others have too high an opinion of themselves, totally ignoring others' suggestions and advices. All these will lead them to a bad consequence in the future.

谦虚是中国人的传统美德，中国历史上有很多关于谦虚的故事。然而，有人却认为受西方文化影响，谦虚没那么被重视了。我不同意这种说法，我认为谦虚是每个人都要学会的。很多年轻人没意识到它的重要性，他们满足于自己的小成就，不追求进步。此外，另一些人对自己评价过高，完全忽视他人的建议。这些都将导致对他们将来有坏的影响。

6年级下册英语作文篇3

When it comes to competition and cooperation, some people always emphasize competition but neglect cooperation. Their reasons run as following: to begin with, they believe only competition can help them defeat their counterparts; in addition, they think competition is the only way to lead to success.

谈到竞争与合作，有些人总是强调竞争，而忽视合作。其原因如下：首先，他们认为只有竞争才能帮助他们击败对手;此外，他们认为竞争是通向成功的唯一途径。

But some others hold different opinion. They think cooperation is as important as competition. They base their opinion on the following reasons: on one hand, cooperation can build trust between each other and help to bring long-term relationship; on another hand, cooperation can turn a small and weak business into a big and strong one.

也有人持不同的意见。他们觉得合作与竞争一样重要。他们根据他们的想法，理由如下：一方面，合作可以建立相互之间的信任并帮助建立长期的合作关系;另一方面，合作可以使一个弱小的企业变成一个强大的企业。

From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw a conclusion that both competition and cooperation are essential to success and thus should be emphasized at the same time.

通过以上讨论，我们可以得出一个结论，竞争和合作对成功都很重要，因此应同时被强调

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英语作文在很多学生看来是比较难的，其实英语作文也没有那么难写，你知道6年级的英语作文怎么写吗?下面是第一范文网小编给大家精心挑选的6年级英语作文范文3篇，希望大家喜欢!供你参考和阅读!

6年级英语作文篇1

My favorite Sports is basketball. It looks so cool in TV that I was crazy about those basketball stars ever since I was little.

Basketball requires speed, height and skills. I run, jump, switch, and try to hit! All parts of my body are exercised in this sport. I feel that I’m like wind flying in the playground for my goal, which makes me feel so GREat!

Basketball needs quick reaction and decision. When chance comes, it may disappear in the next second. I should keep an eye watching as an eagle, decide and judge quickly as a leopard, and run for it as a wolf.

Further more, basketball is a sports more than just exercising, It needs team work. No one can play himself. A team should work together. So I learn to cooperate with others in this game. I should understand what my teammate doing and what he needs me to do for him. On the other side, I should learn to show my teammate what I need. At the same time, I need to keep an eye on the whole game, knowing how is the situation of our team and how is the other team. It involved more cooperation and strategy.

I played basketball more for about 5 years now. I make many good friends throught this sports. It is proud to win honor for my team and my school. Also I enjoy all games with my friends. Basketball will be my best friends in the future and my best memory about school life.

6年级英语作文篇2

A long time ago,there was an emperor who told his horseman that if he could ride on his horse and cover as much land area as he liked,then the emperor would give him the area of land he would have covered.

Sure enough,the horseman quickly jumped onto his horse and rode as fast as possible to cover as much land area as he kept on riding and riding,whipping the horse to go as fast as he was hungry or tired,he did not stop because he wanted to cover as much area as possible.

Finally,the horseman came to a point when he had covered a substantial area but was exhausted and asked himself,"Why did I pushmyself so hard to cover so much land area?Now I am dying and I only need a very small area to bury myself."

The above strory is similar with the journey of our push very hard everyday to make more money,to gain power and neglect our health,time with our family and to appreciate the surrounding beauties and the hobbies we day when we look back,we will realize that we don't really need that much,but then we cannot turn back time for what we have missed.

So,take it easy!Do what you want to do and appreciate is fragile;life is 't take life for a balanced lifestyle and enjoy life!

6年级英语作文篇3

Everything in the world is in constant struggle, 'struggle' in the sense of competition in natural selection among organisms.

Animals and plants struggle for their existence. Nature provides them with weapons for that struggle. Lions have claws; fish have scales; roses have thorns. They use their weapons for the un-avoidable war of existence. Nature also orders us to struggle;when we obey Nature, we win our existence.

世上万物都置身于不断的竞争中，“竞争”就是生物体之间在自然选择过程中竞赛的意思。

动物和植物为生存而竞争，大自然赋予了它们进行竞争的武器。狮子有爪，鱼有鳞，玫瑰有刺。它们使用这些武器为不可避免的生存之战而战。大自然也迫使我们去竞争;如果我们遵循自然规律，我们就能生存。

The result of struggle is the evolution of a better order to surpass others, one has to devote himself to what he does. If every individual does so. the society will make progress.

Struggle is inevitable. But we should struggle with sportsmanship, not stand in the way of others in order to achieve our own success. It is Only by struggling in such a way that mankind will see a world getting more glorious day by day.

竞争的结果是社会向好的方向发展。一个人为了超过其他人，应该致力于自己的工作。如果每个人都做到这点，社会就会进步。

竞争是不可避免的。但是我们应该以运动员所具有的道德去参与竞争，而不能为了自己的成功去挡住别人的路。

只有通过这种方式的竞争，人类才能拥有一个日益辉煌的世界。

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Teaching is the most glorious and respected career. On Teacher’s Day, I’d like to express my innermost appreciation and gratefulness to all the teachers in the world! Teachers are the shapers of human souls. I still remember how my teachers pulled my through a critical moment. I did a bad job in the first preparation test for the entrance examination and I was considerably depressed. Then my teachers came to my rescue. Patiently, my English teacher analyzed the paper word by word and encouraged me to carry on My Chemistry teacher also gave me a precious gift. He told me not to be obsessed with the test results and encouraged me to find fun in learning. Their help enabled me to survive the competition and will surely benefit me in the future.

Perhaps I’ll never have a chance to repay all that I have received from my teachers. But I’ll try to be a useful person and become their pride

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6级英语作文范文

6级英语作文范文

1. 考查学生综合运用语言的能力。本题相对比较容易，因为题目中提供了比较具体的情景，而且是学生常见的'语言情景。但要注意表达要点要全面，写本文的要点基本包括以下要点：

1.讨论

2.爬山

3.捡拾别人(或收拾自己)的垃圾

4.投放垃圾

还要注意表达内容要点时要使用丰富多样的表达方式。包括词汇多样、句法多样，段落结构多样。也要注意描述事实和议论的结合，不能只描述事实而忽视议论。以上是本题获得高分数的关键。请参考下列范文：

Last Thursday, we had a clameeting to discuwhere to go for our spring outing. We came up with several choices such as going boating, climbing a mountain, and going to an amusement park. Finally, we decided to go mountain climbing.

The next day, we set off early in the morning. While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view. However, when reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and banana peels. Then we started to pick up the litter. Afterwards, we put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively.

We were tired but happy.

2.

马虎搞到两张全兴队对国安队的足球比赛入场券。他电话通知好友xxx，约他放学后在新华公园门口碰头，一起吃晚饭，然后去看球赛。二人在饭店美美吃了一顿，到付账时马虎才发现自己把钱夹忘在了家里，入场券也在他的钱夹中。

Ma Hu got two tickets of (1) a wonderful football match between Quanxing and Guoan. He was thinking of invite (2) his good friend Zhao Huayang to watch it together. He gave him a call and told him to meet at the gate of Xinhua Park after claand then had dinner (3) together.

They met each other on time and had good dinner (4) in a restaurant. When the waiter brought them the bill. Ma Hu found that he left (5) his wallet at home. The two tickets kept (6) in the wallet, too.

(1)of在这里不是表示所有关系，所以应把of改成for，表示"用途"。

(2)动词invite在介词of的后面，应把它变为-ing形式。

(3)连词and连接的应该是两个并列的动词不定式，所以应把had改为to have。

(4)这里注意dinner前面有形容词修饰时，那么应在形容词前面加a。

(5)应把left改成had left。因为到"发现"时为止前面的动作已经完成，要用过去完成时态。

(6)此处是被动语态，应加上were。

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英语6级作文

2009年6月大学英语六级考试作文预测(有例文)

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[6] 知识与文凭

[7] 山寨现象

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1. 前段时间校园火灾频发，造成生命和财产损失

2. 分析火灾发生的原因

3. 作为学生，如何预防校园火灾发生

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这是一分析火灾原因和如何预防火灾为中心的文章，撰写时重点即在于此。开篇综述校园火灾频发情形及造成的`生命和财产损失，然后说明火灾原因，最后提出可能的火灾预防措施。第一段，主要概述;第二段，说明原因;第三段，详细论述措施。