高一书面表达范文 第1篇

浅谈高考英语书面表达

白伶俐

（陕西省甘泉县高级中学）

摘 要：高考英语书面表达一直是众多考生惧怕的一个难题，同时也是英语教学中的一个薄弱环节，许多考生的高考写作水平低，得不了高分，严重影响了英语整体成绩。分析关于高考书面写作表达中存在的问题及解决的对策有着深远意义。

关键词：书面表达；问题；对策

从高考英语试题题型来看，书面表达占的比例相当大，所以书面表达做得好与不好对考生的成绩影响特别大。根据历年高考评卷分析，相当多的考生在书面表达环节上失分严重。为了帮助考生解决这一难题，笔者从书面表达存在的问题及解决的办法两方面简要谈谈自己的看法。

一、存在的问题

1、用汉语的思维遣词造句

大多数考生在书面表达中，最常见的毛病就是“中文式英语”，平日里习惯了中文表达，在写英语文章时，也只是将句子直译出来，不能用英语思维，用英语表达意思，写作能力从根本上无法提高。如：If one side had trouble, eight sides came to help、（一方有难，八方支援。）这种句子中国人读起来较容易，也能够理解，但不符合英语表达习惯，也不规范。

2、语言使用有误，语法错误多

在高考的紧张环境下，许多考生不能灵活地运用所学知识准确地表达意思，总是会出现各种各样的错误，尤其是语法方面的错误。如，时态、语态、人称、单复数、大小写、前后逻辑关系等，使阅卷老师认为考生在基础英语方面存在的严重问题，从而失分情况在所难免。如，The professor gives us a speech the next week、这类句子在考卷中比比皆是。

3、谋篇布局与衔接能力弱

书面表达是对考生各方面能力的一个综合考查，但多数考生在阅读题目之后就直接动笔去写，根本不知在下笔之前对文章进行合理构思和巧妙布局的重要性，从而使文章句式单一贫乏，句意不够连贯，文章不符合逻辑，没有一定的语篇衔接手段等等瑕疵。

4、思想上不重视英语写作

许多学生在平时的写作训练中，不能给予写作足够的重视，只是草率地完成作业，根本不重视构思、条理等环节，往往还会出现文体与要求不符，忽略细节等问题，在书写规范上更是错误百出，字迹潦草。

二、解决的对策

1、培养学生用英语思维的能力

在平时的课文教学中，教师应对学生进行各种形式的.写作技能训练，培养学生用英语思维的能力。在课堂上，鼓励学生用英语记学习笔记，多听英文范文，运用所学的基本词汇和短语练习写一些简单的句子，但力求达到准确无误。还可以挑选一些精彩的句型、段落和语篇进行背诵，培养语感。除此之外，也可以做一些句型转换、汉译英、英译汉的专项练习，用各种方式培养用英语思维的能力。

2、掌握基本知识，避免语法错误

众所周知，构成语言的三个基本要素是：语音、词汇和语法。很多学生在语音方面存在着极大的问题，导致单词不会记，记不住，所以教师在平常的授课中，应该帮助学生复习语音知识，教会学生认识开音节、闭音节，运用字母组合发音规则来记忆单词，并且利用构词法来扩大词汇量，丰富写作中的词汇。在平时的学习中，学生应该积极主动地积累一些常用句型，用所学的短语自己构造简单的句子，力求使每一个句子都没有任何的语法错误。

3、了解高考书面表达题材，做到游刃有余

近年来，高考书面表达的题材主要集中在“议论文和应用文”上，了解写作题材，并根据题材写出正确的格式是写好文章的关键一步，然后再根据要求，先对文章进行整体的构思，在时间允许的情况下罗列提纲，打草稿并修改，修改的同时一定要注意文章的连贯性并恰当地使用连接词，最后定稿完成写作。

4、充分认识书面表达的重要性

写作属于语言输出形式，所以必须从思想上重视语言，在积累了一定的思想感受和大量的语言素材后，写作能力才有可能提高，文章才有可能写好，而且写出来的文章，只有书写规范、正确美观、卷面整洁才能给整篇文章锦上添花。

总之，要想写好书面表达，考试中得高分，平时的积累与训练至关重要，考生必须首先从思想上充分认识到书面表达的重要性，并在平时的日常训练中有步骤、有计划地进行系统的训练。

参考文献：

王宁。浅谈高考英语书面表达题的解题思路［J］。教学与管理，（27）。

高一书面表达范文 第2篇

Network school

Ladies and gentlemen, I\'d like to tell you something about our online school. First, it makes teaching and learning easier and much more interesting. Students can get more information online than they get from classes. Secondly, you can send your homework to the teachers by E–mail, which is very convenient. If your com*r has access to the Internet, you can study any subject provided by the online school at any time at home.

书面表达英语高一作文3篇（扩展2）

——书面表达的英语作文免费3篇

高一书面表达范文 第3篇

With the development of the Intemet, the net bar plays an important role in people\'s life. More and more people, especially students, like to go to net bars. They are absorbed in playing video games, making bad friends and having a chat with _Meimei_ on the net in the bar. Some students often go on playing late into the night in the net bar. As a result, not only does it do harm to their health but also produces a bad effect on their studies. Now a lot of net bars have been shut down in Beijing. But some students go by bus to the net bars at suburbs to play.

Fortunately, more and more parents and schools have realized it. Recently, more than six thousand students ensured that they would be far away from net bars in Jinzhou city, Liaoning Province. It is quite necessary for the students to get rid of the bad habit.

书面表达英语高一作文3篇（扩展3）

——书面表达英语优秀作文3篇

高一书面表达范文 第4篇

新华学校实施了改善学生健康的“蛋奶工程”。Wet Hua是该学校的一名学生。这天，Wei Hua 又得到了刚发下的鸡蛋和牛奶。他打开那盒牛奶喝了一点点，就不想喝了。连续吃了一段时间的牛奶和鸡蛋，Wei Hua感到吃腻了，就偷偷地把鸡蛋和大半盒的牛奶扔进了垃圾桶里。远处的王老师看到了他的举动，并对他进行了教育。他对此感到抱歉，决定今后要节约粮食，不再浪费粮食。

参词汇rubbish bin垃圾桶， be tired of 对感到厌(腻)了，throw扔， save节约

To improve students\' health, Xin Hua Middle School has carried on the Milk and Eggs Project for students .Wei Hua is a student at the school. Today Wei Hua got the milk and egg again as usual .He opened the box of milk and drank a little.

He felt tired of the egg and the milk. He didn\'t want to have them any more .Then he threw the milk and egg into the rubbish bin.

At that moment, Miss Wang saw this from far away. She came over and told him not to do this again .Wei Hua felt sorry to do so. He promised not to waste food any more.

书面表达英语高一作文3篇（扩展6）

——中考英语漫画书面表达练习及3篇

高一书面表达范文 第5篇

英语书面表达技巧

南昌市二十九中 邹伯瑶

（一）要注意英语习惯表达法

在进行书面表达时，要符合英语的习惯用法，否则容易杜撰出“中式”英语，使人难以看懂。所以不能先想汉语的.意思，然后再直译为英语，而要善于用英语思考（thinkinEnglish），使用常用的英语句型来表达。

例如：

1?他的身体很好。Heisstrong．（正）

Hisbodyisstrong．（误）

汉语说“某人的身体强弱”，英语中不必加body。

2?我想不会下雨。Idon’tthinkitwilrain．（正）

Ithinkitwilnotrain．（误）

凡说“我想……不……”时，英语中应该用“Idon’tthink……”句型。但“hope”一词却相反，我们可以说“Ihopeitwilnotrain．”而不可以说“Idon’thopeitwilrain．”

（二）巧用思维拐弯法

当表达某一意思有困难时，巧用常用词语或自己熟悉的词语来进行表达，可达到同样效果，又可避免出错。

例如：

这些月饼很可口。

某同学因“delicious”一词想不起来，为避免拼错，这位同学思维一转，灵机一动，马上写成：

（三）巧用变繁为简法

当一个较长的中文意思，用一句英语表达有困难时，可分为两句或多句表达。

例如：这张照片中怀抱婴儿的那个妇女是我的母亲。

如有困难，可改成两句来表达就简单得多了：

Ababyisinherarms．

其实，英语书面表达有较大的灵活性，并不一定写很长的难句就好，只要叙述清楚，有条有理，让人一看明白就行。

高一书面表达范文 第6篇

电子书

If you ask someone that do they often go to library, I think they will answer you with no, the reason I am saying this because of the development of ebook. Many years ago, without computer, the only way to check the information that you need is from paper books, it means you need to go to the book shop or the library, while with the development of the Internet, people have access to the information very easily, you only need to click on the computer, then what you look for is in front of you. Ebook is a very popular form for reading, people can find what they want to read in the computer, like the novel story, then download. It is so convenient and fast, it can save a lot of time, we don’t need to go to the library if we are busy. Ebook is a good way for reading.

书面表达英语高一作文3篇（扩展9）

——高一英语作文

高一英语作文

高一书面表达范文 第7篇

Dear Mike,

I am glad to know that you are interested in learning Chinese. I am writing to give you some suggestions on how to learn it well.

First, you can go to Chinatown because a lot of Chinese people live and work there. Talking with Chinese shopkeepers provides you with good opportunities to practice your spoken Chinese.

Second, you can make friends with Chinese people, especially those from Beijing who can speak standard Chinese. Your Chinese will be greatly improved if you keep communicating with them, such as having parties and going camping with them.

Finally, you can also learn Chinese by listening to Chinese radio programs and watching Chinese movies, which can help you learn about Chinese culture as well as improve your Chinese.

Yours,

Li Hua

书面表达英语高一作文3篇（扩展10）

——高一英语作文(汇编3篇)

高一英语作文(汇编3篇)

高一书面表达范文 第8篇

In the English Reading Week, one of my classmates recommended a quote to us which goes like this: “Your future depends on many things but mostly on you.” I can’t agree more with this view. It\'s true that our future is determined by many things, such as opportunities and help from others, but our own attitude, determination, and hard work play a more important role. In other words, we are the master of our own future.

Take Abraham Lincoln for example. He was born in a poor family, and only received a limited education in his childhood. Yet through his painstaking efforts, he changed not only his own fate but also the history of America. Even to this day, Lincoln is regarded as one of the most inspiring figures in the world.

Therefore, I firmly believe that our future is in our own hands.

5. 20广东省高考书面表达

你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校报写一篇人物介绍。

【写作内容】 请根据以下信息，介绍一位传奇人物。

*硕士学位：master’s degree; **博士：doctor

[写作要求] 只能用5个句子表达全部内容

[评分标准] 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。

高一书面表达范文 第9篇

英语书面表达四忌

山东省淄博市临淄区齐都中学 崔海霞

书面表达是英语标准化试题的组成部分。虽然它比重小，但效度高，是试题中能测试学生真实水平的唯一的主观题，是决定考生能否取得高分的关键题。虽然该题只是测试学生最基本的笔头表达能力，并非传统意义的作文，要求并不高，但从考试的\'实际情况看，书面表达题的得分率和及格率均偏低。究其原因，主要是学生基础知识掌握不牢，基本技能运用较差。要想提高书面表达题的成绩，关键是要狠抓双基，在平时练习和应试时要力求四忌。

一忌文不对题，漏写要点。书面表达题前都有说明，明确指出所写材料的目的、对象、时间、地点、内容、长度等，考生必须看清说明，弄清题旨，努力做到根据指令审题，抓住要点作文。文不对题，休想多得分;遗漏或未讲清要点，会扣分;随意乱加又是画蛇添足，吃力不讨好，这里最需要的是耐心和细致，粗心大意难免要吃后悔药。

二忌文理不通、语无伦次。层次清楚，文理通顺是作文的基本要求，英文书面表达亦应如此，应试者对所提供的情景要作分析，先写什么，后写什么，应作统筹安排，既不能按中文说明逐句翻译，更不能颠三倒四，，语无伦次。

在表达的过程中，善于抓住表达的关键词语，正确使用过渡的关连词是使文章自然地承上启下，脉络清晰的有效之举。在平时教学中，注意做些选词造句，连句成文，短文完型填空，缩写课文，均有助于培养学生有条不紊的书面表达能力。

三忌语法出错，拼写有误。用词恰当，语言准确是书面表达的又一基本要求。考生应正确运用词汇、短语、句型，努力避免词法、句法、拼写错误。英语基础知识的好坏，直接关系到语言的准确性。只要基础教学抓得好，并做到卓有成效的训练，准确运用语言是可以做到的。如一些固定词组的用法，动词的时态、语态，主、谓语的一致关系等是写作中易出毛病的地方，但这些却是学生在初中应该解决的问题，在这些方面造成过多失分是不应该的。

同时应努力避免单词拼写错误，关键单词写错或不会写直接影响意义的表达。在应试中，对于写不来的单词，应设法避难就易，寻找替代词(同义词、反义词)。现在英语高考实行标准化考试，大多是选择题，有些人放松了对单词拼写的要求。学外语不抓单词拼写这个基本功，是极其荒谬的。

四忌书写马虎、卷面邋遢。秀丽的字体、整洁的卷面会使人赏心悦目，产生良好的心理感受，即使有些错误，也可能不多扣分。反之，书写潦草，卷面邋遢，会使阅卷人心烦意乱，油然而生反感，那怕错误不多，也可能得不到应得的分数。

在应试时，考生要严格按照要写材料的要求，在心里或在草稿纸上“排好版”，拟好草稿，誉清时应写好每一个单词，打好每一个标点，切不可写得词不成形，句

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高一书面表达范文 第10篇

Echo,my favourite teacher,is a pretty and slim of the most important reason that I like her is that she is very she talks to others,she always has a smile on her face.

I think Echo is a natural teacher beacuse she has a lot of good methods on is not only quite friendly ,but also class is full of fun that you have never feel improve our grades,she usually gives us some advices about how to learn English \'s more,she sacrificed her own time to help every student,no thought of nearly has no time to have I ask her questions,she must spare no effort to make me understand,with patience and have never seen such a good teacher as her before.

A good teacher can point out the direction and give you endless strength when you get into \'m lucky enough to have such a good teacher present to my life. Echo has a great inflence on \'m thankful her help very much.

书面表达英语高一作文3篇（扩展5）

——中考英语书面表达3篇

高一书面表达范文 第11篇

近期，我国一名中学生随父母旅游时，在埃及一著名景点文物上刻写“××到此一游”，此事经****后，在**引起极大反响。作为一名中学生，你就“如何文明旅游”这一话题，谈谈自己的看法。

提示：

1、旅游中不文明的陋习，如……;

2、文明意识和行为，如……;

3、词数80左右(首句已给出，不计算在总词数之内)。

Nowadays, traveling is becoming a more and more important part of our

书面表达(满分15分)

One possible version:

Nowadays, traveling is becoming a more and more important part of our life. But some travelers have some bad behaviors and habits while visiting some places of interest. Some make noises in public places. Others throw rubbish and write or draw everywhere and so on. As a middle school student, I think we should pay attention to our behaviors.

For example, throw rubbish i nto dustbins and don’t write or draw on the relics. Don’t make noises in public places. We’d better follow guides and obey orders.

At the same time, we should not only protect natural environment but also respect local customs and traditions.

书面表达英语高一作文3篇（扩展7）

——初中英语书面表达的材料3篇

高一书面表达范文 第12篇

should our parents accompany us in studying at school?

in recent years, many parents choose to accompany their children in studying, which has aroused a wide concern.

these parents are willing to leave their hometown, even quit their jobs to follow their children into the campus. most of them rent an apartment nearby so as to take good care of their children. parents consider it necessary to offer a better living condition to the kids. meanwhile, it can allow them to keep track of the kids’ academic performance.

nevertheless, what they’ve ignored is that it will get their kids into the habit of being dependent. thus, they will never develop the ability of self-control in the future.

trust leads to independence. so it seems to me that parents should create room for children’s growth and study, in order to ensure their overall development.

书面表达英语高一作文3篇扩展阅读

书面表达英语高一作文3篇（扩展1）

——中考书面表达高分英语作文3篇