专四写作高分范文 第1篇

To whom it may concern:

I’ve learned that an art exhibition is to be held and that you’re collecting suggestions on its location. I’m writing this letter to share with you my opinions.

In my opinion, it is more advisable to hold the art exhibition in Shanghai Museum than in community libraries. My reasons are as follows.

On one hand, it is more convenient for people to get to Shanghai Museum which is located in the center of the city. And the museum is much more spacious than community libraries, which provides visitors with a more comfortable environment for appreciating art.

On the other hand, as a well-known museum, Shanghai Museum is more professional and experienced in holding art exhibitions. Its professional security guards and advanced facilities can better protect those famous paintings from being damaged or stolen.

Therefore, I suggest the exhibition be held in the museum.

Wang Min

解析：本次高考作文考查观点论述，题型较为常见，要求对画展的展出场所做出选择，并且说明理由，而且已经提示了可以从便利性和专业性两个角度来分析，难度不算太大，要写好这篇作文，只要观点明确并且言之有理即可。

范文按照书信的形式，首先要提出给收信人，To whom it may concern这里表示的是敬启者，是在读者身份不明时用在信件、通知和证明书开头的套语，也是除了Dear xxx之外英语书信的常见用语。

信的第一段交待了自己的身份，并且表明了些这封信的目的。

第二段明确提出了自己的观点，用了it is more advisable to do...句型，表明“……是更合理的”，常用在提出建议时。段落最后用My reasons are as follows.“我的理由如下”作为一个过渡句引出下面的理由论述。

第三、四段用on one hand... on the other hand... “一方面……;另一方面……”进行连接，层次清楚。在论述观点时连词的使用可以使逻辑显得更清晰。第三段从便利性角度进行分析，博物馆交通更便利而且环境更舒适，其中用到了which引导的非限定性定语从句。第四段从专业性角度说明博物馆的优势。

大家通过这篇2013上海高考英语满分作文的解析也能看出来，这篇作文中运用了高级的句型还有一些固定词组，这也是这篇作文能够得到满分的一个原因，由此也可以看出，在作文中运用一些高级的句型是非常重要的。另外，大家要注意的就是，一定要确保自己写的作文思路是清晰的，不要有错别的句子，如果大家不确定自己运用的是不是正确，那么最好就换一种自己熟悉的.句型。

一些在高考写作方面有困难的同学，就要多下一些功夫，多读多背诵满分的作文，只有通过反复的背诵才能够将写作方面的弱势给提高上来。不要遇到困难就放弃，即便是在英语写作方面有困难也要努力的去学习，相信这一篇2013上海高考英语满分作文的解析一定能够帮助你找到一些写作的技巧，大家要做得就是多去练习写作，提高自己的作文成绩。

专四写作高分范文 第2篇

Live with a Goal

According to the French writer Alexander Dumas, living without an aim is like sailing without a compass. It signifies that without a goal, one would live a passive life~just like the dead water in a muddy lake.

Frankly speaking, to live with a goal is of tremendous significance to one’ s life. For one thing, a proper aim helps foster the realization of the visions, as people are better motivated when they want to attain the goal they set for themselves and have a sense of fulfillment when they succeed. For another, by setting goals one could take good control of his/her life, without wasting time or energy being confused about what to do. With a clear direction and certain plans, one will readily get what he/she wants.

Consequently, we could draw the conclusion that we should live with a target, as a goaloriented life is an active way of living. Without a clear purpose, we might feel at sea, squandering our time and opportunities.

英语专四满分作文 (菁选3篇)（扩展2）

——英语专四高分 (菁选3篇)

专四写作高分范文 第3篇

Many people propose the idea that higher education should be available to only qualified students-students with certain aptitudes, who have achieved an excellent academic performance. However,l beg to differ for the following reasons.

To begin with, the general level of education nationwide has always been employed as a criterion to gauge how advanced or developed a society is. In an ideal egalitarian society, everyone should be able to receive higher education unless he willingly forgoes that option. In other words, education should not be viewed as a privilege enjoyed only by people who are endowed with certain talents. Furthermore, it would be tremendously beneficial to any society if the general public6 rather than the fortunate few can enjoy higher education. A wide range of social issues can be effectively remedied by a high-quality education which imparts crucial moral principles. In addition, a great amount of economic value can be generated if higher education is available to more people. Yet, I also concede that it may not be practical or realistic to provide higher education to everyone owing to limited financial as well as human resources. Not even the most affluent nation in the world can fulfill that objective at this stage

In the final ****ysis, I believe that the more people who can receive higher education, the better off a society will be.

英语专四满分作文 (菁选3篇)扩展阅读

英语专四满分作文 (菁选3篇)（扩展1）

——英语专四考试作文 (菁选3篇)

专四写作高分范文 第4篇

The students\' evaluation oftheir teacher can be a very subjective proposition because it depends a lot onhow the evaluation is made and how it is subsequently used. I believe most teachers would like to know how effective theirteaching really is and how it benefits their students.

A difficulty with students\' evaluation oftheir teacher is finding the right formulae to achieve an honest, constructiveand independent response. The size and makeup of the class can be a reason forthis difficulty. The larger the class the more likely will be the range ofability in the students. That fact limits the interaction between the teacherand individual students and automatically influences how students will perceivethe effectiveness of their teacher. Smaller classes are much less likely tohave a great range of ability in the students and their evaluation of theirteacher will tend to be more consistent. A crucial aspects with students\'evaluation is how it is used. If it is a formal part of the school\'s program itneeds to be used constructively in liaison with the teachers for the benefit ofboth teachers and students.

For students\' evaluations to be worthwhilethey need to be independent and honest. Negative comments from students,delivered with sincerity, can be very valuable in helping teachers change theirteaching methods and making them more effective. Biased evaluations can lead tomisinterpretation and less productive outcome.

英语专四满分作文 (菁选3篇)（扩展3）

——英语专四作文《能力》 (菁选2篇)

专四写作高分范文 第5篇

The instant the bell indicating the endof the last class rang, out of the classroompoured all students but one。

Unlikemy peers, Iwas in no hurry tomake a run for the school canteen, to rushthrough lunch and to return to the classroomfor homework. I arrived at the canteenwhen amassive queue had turn patiently, I smelled the aroma ofthe appetizing food. Greasy as some dishesmight be, thewide range of food preparedby the schoolwas superior in nutritional val-ue to that found elsewhere。

The typical schedule of a highschooleris extraordinarily hectic and thus lunch breakis a rare timewhen overworked students canwind down and enjoy the pleasure providedby the flavorful food. Imake it a point topampermy taste buds by savoring every littlebit of taste in I usually like todo over lunch is have amindless conversa-tionwith a couple of studentswho have alsolearnt to smell the roses along the bonebreaking journey through high school. Werounded off our lunch with a dessert, re-freshed and satisfied。

Come to think of it, it is not the foodbutmy attitude towards life that affordsmepleasure and empowersme in facing up tovarious challenges。(219words)

一、语法解构

现在分词作定语 the bell indicating theend of the last class rang

倒装句

(1)out of the classroom pouredall students but one

(2)Greasy as some dishesmight be

不定式 Iwas in no hurry to make arun for the school canteen

状语从句 I arrived at the canteenwhenamassive queue had formed。

现在分词作状语 Waiting formy turnpatiently,

过去分词作状语 the wide range offood prepared by the schoolwas superior

代词用法

(1)thewide range of foodprepared by the schoolwas superior in nu-tritional

value to that found elsewhere。

(2)enjoy the pleasure provided by theflavorful food

并列句 The typical schedule of a highschooler is extraordinarily hectic and

thuslunch break is a rare time

定语从句

(1)thus lunch break is a raretime when overworked students can winddown

(2) a couple of studentswho have alsolearnt to smell the roses

主语从句 What I usually like to doover lunch is have amindless conversation

过去分词作主语补足语 We roundedoff our lunch with a dessert, refreshed

andsatisfied。

强调句 it is not the food butmy atti-tude towards life that affordsme

pleasure

二、词汇解构

pour out冲出

rush through草草了事

amassive queue 排长龙

greasy油腻的

aroma香味

extraordinarily 特别地

hectic忙碌

flavorful美味的

wind down休息、放松

pampermy taste buds宠爱我的味蕾

smell the roses [习语]享受生活

bone-breaking 累人的

empower 给人动力

英语专四满分作文 (菁选3篇)（扩展5）

——专四英语听力考试应试技巧 (菁选3篇)

专四写作高分范文 第6篇

沟通能力

It is essential to foster some skills to increase one’s success opportunities in that the world today is full of competitive. Many skills, such as foreign language and technical skills— com*r programming—are of great use today. whereas I’m convinced that the most useful technique is the ability to communicate well with others.

It is impossible to overstate the significance of good communication competence. In today’s society we have to work cooperatively with others. A good communicator finds it easier to put forth his ideas clearly. In this way there will be fewer misunderstandings, which can lead to bad feelings as well as lost time and effort. In addition, a person with good communication skills is a good mediator and negotiator. He or she can play a valuable role in resolving dis*s and enhancing cooperation. This means that a good communicator is often a natural leader. Finally, with good communication skills, it is easier to persuade others to accept your point of view. Having your views and plans approved of by others is a vital step on the way to success.

For all the above reasons, it is my belief that strong communication skills are the most important to have. Good communication is important in all situations, so a skillful communicator will always be in high demand.

英语专四满分作文 (菁选3篇)（扩展4）

——上海高考英语满分作文3篇

专四写作高分范文 第7篇

Smile is a warm word in everyone’s heart.

This is my teacher tells me. When I start to go to primary school, Mr. Wei start to tell me the importance if smile. He tells me that smile is a simple behavior, but is very powerful. It can gives people warm feeling, show your respective, tell others you are nice and you are happy to help. Besides, I find that smiling person is more beautiful.

I will try my best to smile often.

Smile likes there is a smile,there is our smile not only expresses our kindness,but also delivers our support and encouragement which can drive people in trouble out of the adverse circumstance.

Smile seems a bridge which makes it possible for us to reach each other’s deep our journey if people sitting at a distance freely talk with smile,suddenly our loneness cut ’s only a smile that can make a dark day bright.

Beyond our imagination,a bright smile arouses magical from now on show our smile to others generously and we can feel that sunshine is around us.

微笑就像阳光.哪里有微笑,有阳光.显示我们的微笑不仅表达了我们的好意,但也提供我们的**和鼓励,能使人在麻烦了逆境.

微笑是一座桥,使我们有可能达到彼此的内心深处.在我们的旅途中,如果有人坐在距离**交谈和微笑,突然我们的寂寞砍伐.这仅仅是一个微笑能让黑暗的一天光明.

超出了我们的.想象,一个灿烂的微笑引起魔力.因此,从现在起,让我们微笑给别人的慷慨,我们可以感觉到阳光在我们周围.

英语专四满分作文 (菁选3篇)（扩展8）

——英语专四写作佳句

专四写作高分范文 第8篇

说话人表示意外、强调等强烈语气的地方，常常会出题

04 / 语义强调处常设考点

[A] Handling customer complaints.

[B] Recruiting and training new staff.

[C] Dispatching ordered goods on time.

[D] Developing computer programs.

M: What was the most difficult part of your job?

W: Probably handling angry customers. We didn\'t have them very often, but when we did, I needed to make sure they were well taken care of. After all, the customer is always right.

Q: What does the woman say was the most difficult part of her job?

英语专四满分作文 (菁选3篇)（扩展6）

——广东高考英语满分作文 (菁选3篇)